Lords of All People: Take Charge of the Hegemony

There is something very wrong with the author's XP, Beifeng Cultist

I feel that the storyline is too compact. The protagonist has not developed for a long time and there are so many enemies. The forest and epilepsy should be very foreshadowing, and there is also a strategy team, beta testers, etc. This is only about 20 chapters. Shouldn't it be about the development of the protagonist? I'm not here to point fingers, I just feel tired from looking at it like this.

The author should not write too excitingly. Sometimes the characters in the book suddenly get excited and say something without any foreshadowing, which makes it a bit awkward to read. You should at least lay the groundwork before expressing yourself.

Author, don't listen to what those trolls say, just write according to your ideas, stick to it and sooner or later one day you will become a master platinum gold medal