Immortality Starts from Yushou Mountain

The archived manuscript has reached chapter 77! Please read it! Please vote! Please please please! To fellow Taoists who keep books, be sure not to keep them while the new book is new. Recommend it on the impact of reading it. Please keep up with it every day😘

The protagonist's ant nest

The book is good, I would like to reward a helmsman! Author, please update!

I saved the screenshots I saw elsewhere, and then I learned the recommended rules of Qidian. It was really difficult 😂

The subject matter is very good, but the problem is that the protagonist's personality is not good, and then the supporting characters also like to whisper and so on, and the protagonist hears it and has to say what underwear to wear. This is a poisonous point in details, and the system is also a poisonous point. If you set it up like a mini ant nest, it will be much better in the sea of ​​consciousness.

I have to cut some meat for the comments, it's really... Generally speaking, it's okay, but occasionally it's boring to get involved in some nonsense. For example, two people's storage bags, spirit animal bags, three sentences to express... Why does it cost 10 yuan once and consume 30 yuan three times? It's so funny😆. If you put it here, it's elementary school mathematics. What else might it be faster to learn weapon refining and alchemy in college... I read 40 chapters and was speechless many times. , I finally understand why your reading is not so good, it's too poor. Everyone wants to read the content and score 3-4 chapters per chapter. Where does the idea of reading every day come from? I don't know what to advise you. I can't change my writing skills in a day, or I can't change it in my life... It's just a rant. I'll support it with 100 coins of rant.

I feel that the author can learn from Gu Zhenren. Many things in Gu Zhenren are Gu insects. For example, the weapons are Gu insect humans. The author can also learn from the control of beasts and turn them into weapons and armors.

Fellow Taoists, it's finally recommended! Crying with joy! However, this is only the first round of recommendations for new books. Only more readers can advance to the second round. Therefore, I hope fellow book readers will read more and vote more so that this book will have a chance to gain more exposure. This is really important. I would like to thank you fellow Taoists here! I wish you all a long and healthy life! !

Nowadays, if you want to achieve good results, if the quality is good, usually 9,000 words are updated a day, so that many people can follow it. Unless you are lucky enough to get a recommendation, if there are few updates, it will generally be tepid.

These outside disciples don't even give food to mortals, it's as if they're hanging on for dear life, and they still want to dig up spiritual stones, they're just mortals! Does this make sense? As a supervisor, I should maximize my profits! Is food more expensive or spiritual stones more expensive? If food is more expensive, it's my fault.

Chapter 67, what do these pictures say? So embarrassing. The process of subduing that girl is a poisonous point. It's not that you won't be allowed to subdue it, but the author's writing is too blunt. In my opinion, this book is basically tasteless but can be read, but I like the subject matter, so it is okay for me. The second thing is that Goldfinger is too weird, neither up nor down. Saying that you are a system writer has a low sense of system presence, and saying that you are not a system writer will result in cheating. As long as there are enough resources, the protagonist can quickly penetrate the world of immortality. In my opinion, the system is a product of deus ex machina, and your main pleasure lies not in the system, but in the insect nest. It would be better to do the opposite, first have the insect nest, then the system, bind the insect nest first, and the insect nest forms a data system through the protagonist's cognition to facilitate the protagonist's better understanding. The system will not become a product of the deus ex machina, which would be much more comfortable. The most important thing is to limit the strength of the protagonist. The simplest way is to limit the population. If the protagonist breaks through the realm and increases the population, it will give the protagonist more sense of participation. If the population is not restricted, it will soon turn into a rampage of Zerg troops. At that point, the author can't hold it back and forcefully suppresses it, which will make people feel that the protagonist is mentally retarded.

I like the introduction and subject matter, and the writing is good, but in my opinion, the first chapter is too delayed. It would be better to start almost at the beginning of the third chapter or extract the contents of the three chapters into the first chapter.

I feel like I'm dying. I was fine when I was locked up and mined. But when I ran out, I started to wander around and couldn't understand everything. At the fourth level of Qi training, I was about to reach the middle stage of foundation building. I created my own magical powers and felt like I was invincible in the world. It will take almost two more years of training to destroy the God of Transformation.

The subject matter is really good, but the writing about the female supporting role is really stiff, and it doesn't mention it in one stroke, and it is written too much. It is really unnecessary. How many of the people who read this kind of subject matter are looking at pornography? If you can, try not to write about that stuff. Write it normally, not bad. Is the female supporting character really trying to make people think? (Personal opinion)

I thought I had more than 20 extra monthly passes, so I jumped for joy and was excited to post another chapter, but then I clicked on it and found out... It turned out to be a welfare monthly pass😂

The mortal self is Tianlinggen. The protagonist becomes a disciple of Ancestor Linghu, helping him to break through the late Nascent Soul stage, change the ending of defeat in Beiliang, and establish the fourth mountaintop of Tiannan....

A nine-year-old little loli? Tsk, there must be a plot behind it