Super God Academy: Bai Luo

To be honest, I don't really care about the "dark justice" theme. You think saying "no female lead" is enough to turn people away? The plot of this anime is just so-so, and besides the girls, there's nothing else worth watching. Your "no female lead" excuse will deter 80% of readers. That's all I have to say. Goodbye.

Well written. If you're going to write dark fantasy, stick with it. Let the heroes do the saving the world; the protagonist is just an ordinary person who only needs to take care of himself. Surviving to the end is the true victory. There's no need for a female lead. Romance is something new authors struggle with. Don't switch gears halfway through and turn the protagonist into a saint; that will only please neither side.

The protagonist is like a pig; his magic and gene engine are similar, both based on energy and using technology. Aside from copying bits and pieces from here and there, he has absolutely no independent thought. Energy shields, gamma rays, flight, illusions, mental attacks, soul attacks, energy exchange—these are all creative ideas.

Is the protagonist really suffering? Has he been tamed into a watchdog? Can anyone tell me what happens next? Has the protagonist finally risen up? Or is he still being treated like a dog?

The government of Super God Academy is basically raising pigs! Treating its people like pigs, it probably lacks the resources of Chairman Mao, the struggle for survival due to its weak national power, and experience in large-scale mobilization.

This is fucking boring. Going home? What the hell is there to go home to? Aren't you supposed to be a god? You can't even see through this kind of thing. I really don't understand what's so appealing about going home.

I don't understand chapter 29. It's normal for someone to run away when there's a huge difference in strength, but the protagonist's nonsensical mockery is incomprehensible. He even claims to be on the evil side, which completely contradicts his previous rational and self-serving character. The protagonist didn't seem to be motivated by anything; it's like he's turning evil for the sake of turning evil.

The protagonist, a deserter, is also portrayed in his mind: cowardly, utterly pathetic, and extremely selfish, living off the earth without doing anything.

Joining the demons so easily? You're even more degrading than Rose! Rose took a long time to join and was groomed as a successor. You're just like Thornton.

I like this kind of fanfiction. So many people are just trying to get attention; it's not the same country anymore, why should they help them?