Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Taking Care of Friends and Fellow Taoists

It's always like this, a bit nauseating

The description of Goldfinger is vague and feels weird.

Is the arrangement too deliberate? Opportunities keep coming

This hanger has stains on everything. It's too big.

The stronger the treasure, the better! Enjoyable reading! I hope that the protagonist will achieve eternal enlightenment, be evil-minded, and open up a wide harem!

Write a comment 1. I skipped reading it because the writing was too flat and there was too little excitement. As for the novel, first of all, it should be fun to read. It is nothing more than a chance treasure that can transform into a woman. Although this novel has it, the author should take a look at it. Is it any fun? It feels like I just made an outline and filled in the words for each chapter, but the key is that I don't feel comfortable filling it out. 2. The name and introduction of the novel are an important filter. Looking at your name and introduction, I come in because I like to see how you write something cool in Taoist Companion and Golden Finger. 3. There is something wrong with the golden finger. It may have something to do with me jumping to watch it. This golden finger seems to have many functions, but it is really not linked to your Taoist companion. Currently, there are many novels about Taoist couple dual cultivators. Let's take a look at how they write them. There is no heroine, single heroine, or multiple heroines. There is essentially no difference. It all depends on how you write the novel, how to open the golden finger, how to obtain the opportunity to cultivate, and how to feel better. Your novel is obviously going to take the route of having multiple female protagonists with dual cultivation, so you should be more sexy and write more about the couple, and don't go all the way here and there.

I don't have to say anything when I suddenly have an epiphany. What the hell is the fusion of spiritual consciousness? Can't be separated yet?

It's too big and doesn't look interesting.

Writing about the blood demon is too harmful, but the ancestor of Styx is not so harmful?

The writing is good. I suggest you leave more seeds in the pig's feet and find a different path. In the future, you can write family-oriented and self-centered novels.

What the hell is written in Chapter 47/48? What do you think? He actually writes like this

What kind of rubbish is written? A person in the foundation building realm can drive a flying boat for hundreds of miles and still be able to use up his spiritual power. I am speechless. What kind of rubbish is written about cultivating immortals.

What kind of novel is this? The sentences before and after do not make sense, and it is grinding and chirping.