Naruto's Calamity Fire

The protagonist either gets slapped in the face or is on the road to being slapped in the face. It is easy to cause trouble against a small country. However, a few small teams in Konoha can defeat the protagonist's power and teach him how to be a human being. He is afraid of the wolf in front of him and the tiger in the back.

Where did the Mangekyō Sharingan you opened when the dean died?

This book feels very average, both the characters and the plot are rubbish and not interesting at all. The protagonist looks like a fusion of Obito and Orochimaru, and the protagonist is too preoccupied. He does nothing at the beginning and just wants to gain favor in front of the third generation son. He wants to take advantage of this and that. After finally learning the Eight Gate Dungeon and focusing on chakra, don't you know that the more you do, the worse it will be? If you don't have enough chakra, at least improve your physical skills so that you can have some guarantee of life in the future. If you want to cover everything at a young age, is it useful to think so much when you are three or four years old? Nothing can be changed, so it is better to improve your physical skills before considering other things.

As long as it's not poisonous, I'll watch it. I also want to write a story about Naruto, but unfortunately I don't have enough writing skills. I've already written 3 chapters. Well written

I have read too many dark things, and finally met one who writes about good people, and generally those who write about good people are good people themselves. I wish the author good things for being a good person 🤓

After reading the introduction, I lost interest. What is a Sannin? Only Jiraiya is qualified to become a shadow, so how did Tsunade become a shadow later 🤫

This is the only way I can help you. It is still possible to write it in Naruto. The big account is banned, so I may not speak often

. . I just saw the third picture, how Yuan Feiguoxin found out that the protagonist was scheming through a family conversation. . . . In the third chapter, the protagonist definitely looks like Danzo. . Does a 3-year-old child become cunning when practicing physical skills? How cunning? . . Why. I really like the Naruto theme, but it's a pity that I don't write much now.

Naruto in my heart

The second half of the old man's life

I saw my brother posting screenshots at station B. Let me take a look.

It can be seen that the author really wrote it carefully, but the broken sentences were too fragmented. I read more than thirty chapters in one breath, reading at the speed of ten lines at a time, which was uncomfortable and a bit stiff to read. It does not affect the reading of the characters' emotions. If the author finishes writing two chapters each time, he will read the first four chapters, pay attention to the paragraphs, polish them, revise them before publishing, and the situation will be much better. But the author does not make money by selling this book, so I am just talking too much. How to say it? If the author overhauls this book, the number of words in this book will be enough to kill more than half of the Naruto novels. But firstly, I don't make money, and secondly, I don't hone my writing skills. I don't understand it. It's just for my own entertainment. It really tempers people's will. Having this kind of patience really tempers people. I really can't say anything, because this book is really not a bloody novel like Sow's Postpartum Cuisine, which is just a piece of writing that just wants to gain popularity and ruin the character. If you can carefully write out some character traits, then you will be able to read the article. But if an old bookworm picks a problem, you will get the feeling that there are not many online articles written by the new author and there are some flaws here and there. This is not important. If you write a lot, you can change it if you go back and reread it. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more.

What's going on with this guy? It's all free. This is the first time I've seen a completely free novel. Is it just for love?

When I write Chapter 34, I forcefully set the flag. If I don't know how to write the subsequent plot, don't force it, okay?

I'm really busy lately, I'm sorry. I'll write when I have time.

There is a pre-holiday inspection for the project before May Day. I am too busy during this period, so the delay is more serious. I have finally been busy in the past two years and the work is not easy. Please understand.

I have read more than 20 chapters, and it is very well written and very realistic. In the ninja world, there is no talent, and hard work alone is the limit. Kai is the limit, and normal people may not even be able to use Matt. The protagonist has chosen a very reasonable and realistic path, but I cannot accept this path, so it is a pity.

Black Myth Wukong is so addictive. I beat Kang Jinlong. I will update it after I finish it.

Sorry, I can't read on. The sense of immersion is too poor, like a running account. Put the bookshelf first

The protagonist doesn't look like an adult at all. The dean is so concerned about the protagonist and hasn't expressed it yet? ? What's wrong with seeing the dean cry? This means there's something wrong. If the dean dies on the battlefield later and can't be resurrected, why? ? If you can't be resurrected in the world of Naruto, it's just because you don't have enough strength. Your soul is scattered? Dragon Vein Time Travel Otsutsuki can also be used. Don't you want to just let go of the most important person? The old man on the subway is confused. Jpg. It seems that there is no revenge written in that the ninjas from the Kingdom of Wind killed the dean and then killed the ninjas from the Kingdom of Rock (maybe I missed it). It's great to write about the dean. Now that the dean has feelings, the protagonist becomes like a child. He is still a child who is pathologically pampered by the dean.

I saw a lot of bright spots. It's such a pity. I wish you had written this novel a few years earlier. The pace of novels is too fast now. Although your first few chapters don't have many highlights, they don't have any poisonous points either. I can continue to read them. The writing is obviously thoughtful, has its own thoughts in it, and the writing style is also good. Really, if it had been 3.4 Years ago, I felt that this novel would have made a living, and it would not be as miserable as it is now. But according to this pace, I feel that your second book should make great progress! Come on