Tianjiao Breaks Off the Engagement, I Extract the Entries to Practice

If you want to rise, you should suppress it first. You can have it, but don't be unable to rise.

The following opinions only represent some simple personal opinions and thoughts (watched Chapter 417) Seeing now, the character image of the protagonist has been finalized in the readers' minds. The biggest personal characteristic is that he is restrained and calm, and he is young and mature. Compared with other novels, the protagonist's strong counterattack after pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger creates a refreshing point. Instead, the author suddenly stops when he starts to rise up after suppressing it for a long time, describing the protagonist's light departure (maybe due to his personality), so that the rise that is suppressed first and then raised is not enough to achieve the effect of rising. For example, the long and depressing description of Shen's Mansion ends up being exciting at the end, with the protagonist slapped in the face. The two are not on the same level at all. I boldly speculate that the author may just want to use a long and depressing description to make readers look forward to the exciting moments later, so as to retain readers. But for me personally. One word, tired, dozens or hundreds of chapters of foreshadowing, the protagonist was suppressed and targeted, and in the end, when he should have excelled, there was greater oppression, suppression by people with higher strength. Hahaha, from the description of the protagonist's behavior by the Palace Master after Chapter 400, it can be seen that the template of the previous Shen Palace is still copied. Repeating it like this will always make people annoying. This is why I see many readers in book reviews feeling uncomfortable.                                       But this can be regarded as a very novel "genre" in the novels I have seen, "more suppression of the protagonist and less fun". Hahaha, monthly tickets, recommendations, subscriptions, I have done my best. Thank you to the author for his writing, but I personally can't stand it anymore. Goodbye

Can there be less nonsense? Some of the words spoken by the villain are really too retarded. I feel like it is a waste of space. After reading so far, a lot of it is nonsense. It can be deleted appropriately.

The writing and logic are all on the line. Why is it so vicious later on? The starting point and story structure are all good. At the beginning, so many people scolded me, and I thought it was trolls. Now, it's like eating a bowl of delicious beef noodles and after a few bites, a cockroach suddenly came out with a bunch of cockroach seeds underneath.

Is the last book really not updated?

Author, who are you? The Guinness record is for typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and it takes about two hours for you to eat every day, and another 20 minutes to go to the toilet. , 40 Minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour to be in a daze, you should have nine hours to type, and you should type 435,780 words. Calculated according to 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, what's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest, the author quickly got up to type!

Let's complain: there is nothing about the level of the exercises, only a little bit about the realm of cultivation. Don't write about others. At least you have practiced the skills learned by the protagonist to several levels, or you can say that each skill is perfect as soon as you learn it. There should also be different levels of artistic conception. It's not just that the protagonist has understood the ultimate artistic conception. The artistic conception should also be divided into different levels and types. There is also an entry setting where each entry can only be used once, and it will disappear if you remove it again. You have written about this setting before. The entries that simplify the exercises were all extracted from children's books that the protagonist bought at a street stall. I only bought two books, and I have not written down the origin of these simplified exercises entries. Did I always buy children's books to draw entries, or have I simply forgotten the setting that entries cannot be reused. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I generally feel that it is okay to read as a mindless and refreshing article, but I won't talk about anything else.

It's a good read. Although it borrows a little bit from the book "I Can't Be a Son-in-law," the writing style is good and the plot is exciting. Please read more.

I really like the style of this book, the character of the protagonist, and the emotions are on point. Although the plot has a lot of poisonous points, I really can't get enough of it, so I subscribed. How can I put it, I really like this book. It's purely subjective. You don't need to refer to my evaluation.

It's good. You have to eat the food in one bite and the people come in little by little. It is much more logical than the brainless cool article

This book is definitely not a "cool" book. 80% Of the time, I am miserable. The endless hatred almost always originates from such trivial bullshit as, "What are you looking at? What are you looking at?" All the young villains, without exception, appear to be arrogant and bring trouble, and their personalities are too single.

The plot these days has been so poisonous. How could there be such a weak-minded emperor and courtiers? Four hundred thousand soldiers and horses could be replaced at any time, and a Shen family rebelled and still tolerated it like this. This is not just a trick, it is a loss of intelligence. The author doesn't care about rationality at all, and he doesn't listen to the opinions of book friends. A good subject is written in such a horrible way, and I am drunk even if I spend money to subscribe.

With such a bad plot, I actually paid to watch it! I'm really mean,

I originally thought it would be the climax of the homecoming, but my blood pressure got higher and higher.

This book is available for free only. The really exciting part of this book is in this chapter. While watching the author disgusting the reader, while watching the reader scolding the author in a fancy way, the air is filled with a happy atmosphere.

Can the protagonist be a little more cheeky? I always thought that I was awake in the human world and was cultivating the world of immortality. If you don't pretend to be cool, you just want to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger. How can there be so many good things falling from the sky? Why should others help you if you have no capital? Why do I think so highly of you? Moreover, the protagonist is like a human-shaped self-propelled taunting machine. Wherever he goes, people look at him in a disgusting way. No one else but the protagonist has any brains about his emotions, right? Most people definitely don't like this kind of character, and they always suppress it first and then increase it. But as a reader, you can always see the protagonist's growth, and the feeling of Hou Yang will be greatly weakened. In the end, all the reader can feel is that the protagonist looks down on him everywhere, and the author's self-satisfied feeling cannot make the reader feel happy at all. And the single and double heroine thing itself I think is disgusting to let the protagonist speak for the author. If you want to write a single heroine, just don't write so many other women. Those who like to watch a single heroine and a harem are not good. (This is just my personal opinion and cannot represent more people.) {"NickName":"Punch Sparks","UserId":372516534}

Predicting the plot of being slapped in the face and showing off Compared with Shen Ye, it was discovered that Shen Ye had made a breakthrough, everyone was shocked, and everyone was not optimistic about Shen Han. Shen Han broke out and won, shocking everyone, and the content of the evening chapter of pretending to be slapped in the face

There is a lot of nonsense and a lot of irrelevant plots, otherwise this book would have been even better.

Twisted, so twisted. The protagonist is really sarcastic, sarcastic wherever he goes. Then there are all kinds of distortions, human nature, family affection, and love. It's just like the villain has turned on his wits. If you catch him, disgust the protagonist. The further you get to the back, the strong man appears like a leek. In the early stage, you can't even see anything above level three. I can only say that the author's writing style is quite good, at least it can be read. It's just that the story is really disgusting, and all the double standards of Shen Ye's dog-licking are really disgusting.

I feel that after spending more than 20 yuan, I am still qualified to say a word. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. What follows is simply tasteless food.

What are you going to write about next? I have written two million words about the feud between the Shen family and it is not over yet. The training system has been changed again and again. The most important supporting characters in the early stage, no matter how awesome they are, become a drag once they are related to the protagonist. And it's very strange that the protagonist behaves like Long Aotian and is looked down upon by others everywhere. What is the main line of your story? Constantly changing maps, constantly being looked down upon and suppressed by others, making new acquaintances with new enemies, and seeking more revenge?

There is really no need to delete my post. I am telling the truth. I will say that it is because I hope to be better. I also voted for the monthly vote and the recommendation vote. I am still determined. There is really no point in deleting my post, right? If I don't wish you well, why would I say it? That's it, that's it.

I'm almost halfway through watching this, and I can't stand it anymore. To be honest, there is no normal person around the male protagonist, and the author will not describe the so-called wealthy family. A real big family will not have a dog-licking daughter like Su xx. Right and wrong, right and wrong are all educated. It is not that vicious at first, but forcibly reducing intelligence just for licking is a bit stupid, and there are also problems with Shen Ye's portrayal. As a genius, the best education since childhood, what is family? Don't you understand? Seeing that all the land behind you is one-third of an acre, I can't help but feel unhappy with you. To be honest, the only normal person is General Su. Warriors can be brainless, but they must not be petty. You can't be a general if you are petty. And the heroine, I can't understand. The heroine has so many contradictions? Have you cultivated your asshole after decades of practice? He is just an apprentice. If he really valued her so much, she would have broken up with the male protagonist a long time ago. The feelings that appear out of nowhere are really inexplicable. In short, it is very confusing. I feel that the author himself does not know what he wants to write. It is very strange that Su xx licked Shen Ye at first and then inexplicably developed a crush on the male protagonist. Why did you fall in love with me after I beat you? Then forget it if you have a good impression, just follow the emotional line with peace of mind, but halfway through, you have to look back and lose your mind, as if you are a slut. What about the previous description? Why do we have to describe Shen Ye giving up on her and then she discovers something bad about Shen Ye? Can't understand Can't understand

It's been so long since the update, I'm really pissed off. I've written so many suggestions with readers and just read it. I really can't bear it. Some people keep saying that the plot is not good, so please change it. There is no logic at all. They keep threatening this and that of the royal family, and then everyone is doing things like slapping the royal family in the face The whole text is full of rhetoric without any logic, just to write such a disgusting plot Did you still think it was more than ten years ago? Is there any trick in designing the plot? I don't have to ask you to write cool articles, don't use such lame excuses to suppress the protagonist It's okay at first, after all, it's free, and you still write like this after it's on the shelves. I really like your subject matter, but the plot of your script is really disgusting, but please be careful, I can't stand it anymore.

Don't look at it. It's not exactly the same after a little over 500 years of progress.

I couldn't sleep at night and stayed up late to read the current content. To be honest, it doesn't matter if the plot is cliche, as long as the writing is exciting. There are a lot of scraps about breaking off an engagement, but there are really very few that are written in such a distressing and lengthy manner, because those are generally thrown into the street. Moreover, the characters in the entire article are very petty. On the one hand, he said that to achieve breakthroughs, you need to train your mind and heart. Then he wrote about a crazy master who couldn't see the process of mind training at all. Even some of the so-called second-grade deans are ordinary people with moods and expressions. I'm afraid the author couldn't describe what these characters had in mind when they made breakthroughs. Except for the protagonist, the strength of everyone else is completely determined by the author. If I say he is second grade, he is third grade. If I say third grade, he is third grade. There are so many books about Tianjiao, and the design of this book and the book of Luck and Sainthood are very repetitive. Only the geniuses in this book, whether it's Shen Ye, Shi Yuezhu, or even the various masters, can't tell that they have gone through mental training and are just ordinary people. Even if they are reckless, so are several generals and high-ranking officials in the court. What Shen Qingshan is best at is deflecting blame, being petty, and leading the charge. I don't know how the Shen family prospered, and I can't see any merit in this family. Anyway, the prosperity of the Shen family is just what the author said. The Su family is even more funny. They are obviously two families, but the Shen family understands that no matter how good the relationship is, the interests of the families cannot be completely converged. The actions started here are all based on the Shen family's intelligence. The funniest thing is the Su family father and daughter. A so-called Tianjiao turns out to be a love brain, which truly insults the word Tianjiao. The adults of the Su family are even more funny. The protagonist is so powerful and is at odds with his master's family. It is the opportunity for him to take action and sell his daughter to win over him. Anyone with long eyes can see that he has a love brain. He only talks about it every time and does not supervise the results. Of course, the most stable outcome is his own end. Just playing political partisanship in the temple is ridiculous.

I came in following the recommendation, and after reading it, the world in the article is a bit too simple... The kind are extremely kind, the bad people are bad to the end, and the proud people will never listen to what others say, mainly because the author only writes about these types of people, and most of them do not listen to other people's suggestions I don't know if the author can listen to my suggestions, or delete them directly. I really hope the author Use some caution in characterization I feel that the author's writing style is quite good, but the emotional intelligence of most of the characters in the book is too low If you want to write some entanglements between big snobs, I think the plot needs to work harder, at least the character of the supporting characters cannot be too pure If it is really not good at controlling it, I think it is better to give up this part and write more happy grievances and grievances. Many people will like it.

I read more than 100 chapters. The two words were too frustrating to look at. There are too many poisonous insects, snakes and ants.

Although I wrote an unpleasant comment, I still won't post it and just be a good person. Two things to gain. First, in the future, you should subscribe chapter by chapter. It would be a big loss if you can't subscribe to them all at once. Second, this book still has a bright spot, that is, the extraction of entries, which is a bit similar to luck, quite fresh, and I was attracted by this.

There are trolls. I have become an old bookworm in recent years, and my tastes are not as picky as theirs.