Teyvat: There Are Barrages in My Eyes

"Teyvat: There's a Barrage in My Eyes" - Immortal Grass but Unfinished (Note: The following content is suspected of spoilers, watch with caution. Also, the evaluation is highly personal and subjective. If you have any objections, you can discuss it. Relatives are not guilty and have some moral integrity) Highlights: 1. The author treats his protagonist very carefully. This is the first Genshin Impact fanfic I have seen on Qidian that writes a background story and character settings for the protagonist. The protagonist has foods he likes and dislikes, voices for battles and injuries, and comments about other characters. All these make me feel that there is such a character in the game, which makes me feel great; 2. I almost didn't get into the indigenous protagonist and the barrage setting when I first saw it, but after I saw it, the setting was quite novel. For the protagonist, the reader becomes a golden finger and accompanies the protagonist to grow up, giving him a sense of nurturing pleasure; 3. For an author who has a clear point of view and hates stragglers, this deserves a thumbs up. Either you hate skirmishers and don't read it if you like skirmishers; or you just whitewash stragglers and readers who hate skirmishers don't read it. As long as you write about stragglers, readers will definitely get into a fight. After all, everyone has different views, which is normal. But as long as the point of view is clear, the attitude is good. Disadvantages: 1. The age setting at the beginning was not handled well. The age of the protagonist at the beginning, 14, is a bit too old, and the development of the plot is obviously handled by children; 2. There is a problem with the author's paragraphing. Most of the whole article is one sentence broken into several sentences, and even a comma is put into paragraphs. I don't know if it is for the reader's perception, or it may be the author's personal habit. I personally think it is unnecessary. 3. After going to Daozhi, collect the people who were oppressed by the Lockdown Order and the Eye Hunting Order as the protagonists. To be honest, I can't understand this move. The pattern seems to have suddenly changed. The protagonist is the Demon God of Order. He wants to collect the people of other Demon Gods? Although it makes sense logically, Teyvat's law is "God loves the world". In order to integrate into Teyvat, the protagonist needs to have people, but really, the look and feel is not very good; 4. It's not finished. To be honest, I am used to reading books. After reading the free chapters, if I want to continue reading, I will read it. If I am too lazy to read, I will just subscribe but not read it. This book is the latter. So when I saw the author writing the finale, I thought that although the ending was lame, it was still acceptable. But it's a pity that it's not, it's just the kind of bad ending where a good story ended abruptly. It's just... It's hard to stretch. I wish the author will get well soon. Summary: Rated 6 points (out of 10 points). The story was really well written, but poorly finished. Although it was caused by hospitalization due to physical reasons, for a book to end like this, it is worse than The Eunuch. Put it on my 7-point bookshelf, that's it. I hope the author can take good care of his health and then start writing a book seriously. Supplementary 1: I didn't read the book written by the author Wang Daoyi as the main character. This one is very interesting but unfortunately it's unfinished, alas. Supplementary 2:The barrage written by the author is a bit too friendly, but it is understandable. If it were to be written truthfully, it would be too stinky😂 Supplementary 3:A total of 972 minutes of reading.

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Hurry up and update... It's really not good to break it halfway.

The first and the first for the time being!

Don't worry about Xiangling in this book. You can even have a harem. Xiangling doesn't have any taste for rice. He really doesn't feel anything.•ᴗ•💧

I caught up with the latest chapter in one go. The previous chapters are really good, but only the latest chapter, Chapter 151, is not very good for my senses. There are some parts that make me uncomfortable. The content of this chapter corresponds to the time period when the protagonist in Mondstadt is fighting Tvarin at the beginning of the original game. The author arranged for the protagonist of this game to intervene. There is no problem with this. There are two main places that I feel are not handled well enough. The first is that in the original plot, the Wind Demon Dragon attacked Mondstadt, lowered a tornado and rolled Yingmei up into the sky, and then there was an aerial battle between the two in the sky, which ended with Tvarin escaping. It can be seen from this that in the original work, after Yingmei ascended to heaven, Tevalin no longer had the mind to care about the affairs in Mondstadt, and faced the protagonist's attack, he never resisted (perhaps sensing the breath of the wind god), and did not fly away until the end. In other words, the city of Mondstadt in the original game did not suffer a lot of structural damage. As for casualties, the original game would not take the initiative to mention these in a 12+ game. The result after the protagonist of this book participated in the battle was that the Wind Demon Dragon was also beaten away, but the square where the Wind God Statue was located was completely destroyed (according to the description, except for the statue, all the other buildings were in ruins) In other words, the result obtained by the protagonist after taking action (referring to the impact on Mondstadt) was worse than the original work. This is a fan. The protagonist's participation in the plot caused greater damage than the original work, and it gave people a bad sense. It seems that it is better for the protagonist not to take action and let Yingmei solve it. Someone may want to say here, didn't the protagonist solve a wound on Tevalin that was soaked in poisonous blood? This is the second question I want to ask. In the original work, the twins were summoned to Teyvat by Camria because of their 'purification' ability. Yingmei showed this power from the beginning (referring to the purification wind dragon teardrops), which even surprised the wind god. Why, because Tevarin contracted the poisonous blood after killing Dulin. Who is Dulin? Creation of the abyss. In other words, Tevalin's poisonous blood is actually the erosion of the abyss, and the wind god is powerless to do anything about it. Only after seeing the purification power of the protagonist can there be a way to save Tevalin. Because the original work is a game, it can only be achieved through the BOSS battle. It seems that everyone worked together to break the two pieces of Tevalin's poisonous blood, but in fact it still relies on the purification power of the protagonist. But in this book, the protagonist successfully shattered a piece of Tevarin's poisonous blood with a single big move. How did he do it? If it is the level of power, how come the God of Wind has not found a solution for hundreds of years? It is said that Wendy is letting loose every day. Doesn't it mean that she really doesn't even have the protagonist's current strength? Or is she also letting loose for the sake of rescuing her dependents? So if possible, I hope the author will adjust the content of Chapter 151. First, fight Tevalin. There is no problem. You can fight in the air. You can fight in the sky. Secondly, the protagonist breaks Tevalin's poisonous blood, and patches can be added in the future. For example, the protagonist also has the ability to purify (or the protagonist has a higher status and can ignore the abyss), or he can work with Yingmei to break the poisonous blood. In this case, the look and feel should be much better. That's about it. I'm not a person who likes to leave comments, but I really enjoyed reading it in one sitting. Suddenly I saw it and felt uncomfortable. Of course, it may be that I am too serious. I don't know what other readers think. Maybe they just don't like this paragraph.

Later, when I go to the rice wife and I want to kill the lady, can I let the protagonist be killed by Brother Sandu?

Hey, what is the idea behind this activity? Let the protagonist be the witness and watch others cheat and be the brave to save the world. If it is the heroine, maybe it is the woman behind others watching this position

The name is too ridiculous. Can't you try to find some names for the medicinal materials? What about Jiangli, Nanxing, Xinyi, Bai Su, Sappan?

Is this a girl? It smells so good~ The psychological activity of the protagonist is inexplicably like Brother Pig

Seeing that the family behind the raid on the casino gave up, it was too natural. How can such a genocide-level political struggle be carried out on the grounds of operating a casino? A genocide-level struggle must have a good reason and will not make other families miserable. Under the Liyue system, there is no crime involved in gambling. The protagonist thinks he is upholding justice, but in fact it is no different. Even if he can use collusion to make up for it later, and other families are not deaf or blind, how can this excuse be concealed? Therefore, everyone will be in danger once this incident comes out. The current Seven Stars will suffer serious political distrust, and they will not be able to accomplish anything in the future. From the General Affairs Department to the Qianyan Army, there will be countless people who work against the situation. If Ningguang Keqing does not pay the price for this matter (such as taking the blame and resigning), Liyue's bureaucracy will directly be paralyzed by infighting. This kind of thing is not impossible to do under the Liyue system, but it can only be done by the emperor. Only the emperor's prestige can suppress all objections. Ningguo Qing had only been in charge for a few years, and such a big thing was beyond his capabilities. It is not that easy to break the tacit political understanding in Liyue for more than two thousand years.

The biggest drawback is that the two-dimensional novel is not a time-travel novel. Originally, fan fiction is just for comfort and pleasure. Compared with the original Xuan Guan Xianxia, ​​there is no sense of substitution, which is the biggest flaw.

Author, please let the protagonist deal with that third betrayal.

I would like to give you an opinion, don't always have something flashing in your eyes. It's okay to come here once in a while. If you come all the time, you will feel a little bored. People who are thoughtful will not show what they think in front of strangers. There is no need to hide it in front of acquaintances. People who are not thoughtful will show what they think directly on their faces. Moreover, the eyes themselves cannot express too many emotions. There are only a few emotions that I know can be expressed with the eyes. One is that the pupils will dilate as a sign of fear. The other is that being very excited or angry (very emotional) will cause the pupils to shrink. When recalling things, the eyes will turn upward or close.

It is recommended not to forget the Great Merciful Tree King. Before this plot, Nasita was a gentle little moon. She worked hard for five hundred years to prove that even if she is not as bright as the sun, she is still willing to bring a clear light to all living beings in the dark night. After the plot of the Great Merciful Tree King, Nasida changed extremely seriously. She was extremely arrogant and rude. She did not have the humble new god setting before, and her character changed greatly. In addition to the subsequent plot of feeding the prince, the character before the Void Tribulation Fire Eternal Book was directly rotten. Nasida's character was changed There are two criticisms. The first is that the original character of Moon has been changed, and the God of Wisdom who is a kind and loving lover has turned into a bad good person with an exploding mother's heart. The second is that he bound Prince San and went directly to Jingshan Palace xx. For the sake of profit, principles can be ignored. Facts have proved that the plot of Xumi is completely rotten due to the plot design and character changes after King Daci Shu was forgotten. I can only say that the plot of World Tree modifying memory is really bad, and it is extremely easy to collapse. What happened to the dragon clan next door? The plot of the gentle and kind-hearted little moon and the rebel who walks alone has been changed into something, into an arrogant god with a mother's heart and her foul-mouthed war criminal. In the end, the original sage was nothing, not even as good as his former enemies and loyal people in the face of interests.

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I feel that the protagonist is too powerful and can solve everything with authority, and the order is a bit too deus ex machina. Moreover, it is Liyue's benefit all day long, and it feels like sucking the blood of all other countries in Tevat to develop Liyue.

Was there any government involvement later? It stands to reason that this kind of thing would attract worldwide attention, right? Then the meter was investigated. Think tanks around the world offer advice. Try to add characters, control the plot, etc. Is there any reality-related plot behind this?

The last chapter was still talking about tens of thousands of days, so why did it end immediately?

What's going on? No update yesterday? Author: Are you okay?

The political struggle is written in such a naive way

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Does the author understand what I mean?

I've read half of the author's Genshin Impact books, and of course I've read all of the author's Genshin Impact books. The protagonist in this book is too selfless. Logically speaking, the protagonist's experience shouldn't be so confusing.

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

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