Weaving Fate in Parallel Time and Space

Howl's Moving Castle (No) The Emperor's Moving Church (Yes)

Just copy a chapter of history and add a sentence of your own to make it a chapter, right? Write it carefully, right? The plagiarism check rate is 99%, right? It's better to read the text of history than to read your book. At least it's free.

Uh-huh, it's hard to comment on your recent chapters. You tried your best to describe the misery and struggle of human beings in difficult situations, trying to embody people's courage and spirit, and then you let Arthur sit on the sidelines? Just watching? Don't go fight against the dragon and just watch them get killed? Oh, children are being torn apart, people's homes are gone, and I have to watch from the side, wow, are you still resisting? Wow, I was so touched, I can't say it 🫤, well, he took action later, but do you know how it made me feel? People pass God's test, so God takes action. You know how it feels.

The male protagonist seems to be very dissatisfied with the current situation, and his mouth is full of moral criticism and preaching, but that's all. In addition to showing that the male protagonist is very 🐮🍺, many actions are not only meaningless, but also have no sense of epicness. They are just for the sake of pretending. From a human perspective, who would like a person who interferes with this and arranges that all day long, and still acts like he is the truth and destiny? I even have the feeling that "in front of the male protagonist, those who work hard for the development of the times are just a joke"

The protagonist is not the weaver of fate at all. He himself is also controlled by his fate. Even if he chooses the fate, he cannot break it after choosing it. He is just a weaver of fate.

Personally, I think it's a matter of the title and introduction of the book. To be honest, the title and introduction of the book are not eye-catching. Just because a book is niche doesn't mean it has no readers. Just like if someone writes a niche book like Warhammer, the title of the book must include Warhammer. This will make readers who are willing to read Warhammer want to click on it first. If you can write well, you can earn one or two thousand monthly votes. Therefore, the book title introduction should capture readers who are willing to read this kind of book. At least I read this book because of the cover, because I rarely see novels with Howl's Moving Castle as the cover. As for the name and introduction, there's really nothing to motivate me to click on it. After reading a few chapters, I found it to be surprisingly good. It feels a bit like Howl's Moving Castle. But there is indeed a problem, that is, until now, I don't feel that the protagonist has any purpose of action. Even if it is a plot theme where the protagonist travels for the sake of traveling, that's fine. It feels a little strange now.

It's getting uglier and ugly. What a stinky problem. I'll use you to give me these tools to popularize it.

Now that I have seen The Sword in the Stone, let me tell you my feelings. The protagonist is set to be the Weaver of Destiny, but I don't feel this type of character at all. It feels more like an awesome wizard to me. I personally wonder if it is because the protagonist is too close to the event and does too much, which leads to the loss of quality. I have read the two novels "I Am God" and "The Trafford Club" before. Not to mention other aspects, they have similar identities, but the characters are really well established.

I hate that I couldn't find a good book, and I hate that I found it too early.

The author's shortcomings in popularizing science are so stubborn that he refuses to change them. I don't know what to say.