How Did You Break the Dungeon Again?

The one that impressed me most about this type of Honkai Impact novel is Gu Mian and Gu Bengbeng in Global Honkai Impact.

The original novel is incomprehensible and nonsensical. It can't even be considered a short article. Summary: It's a pity to discard it if it's tasteless.

How should I put it? Later in the writing, the protagonist's misfortune was deliberately downplayed, which was a bit awkward.

These 5 chapters are too watery. The author can't let them show off.

I suggest you start rewriting the first chapter. It's worse than a white text. I just saw the first chapter. How come you, a prophet, are more noble than the watch of the Lord God of Infinite Space? The priority is still high, and newcomers can be predicted in advance. If you say it was due to bad luck, I can understand, but I really can't accept the prophecy, because it means that you have no logic at all from the first chapter.

The front is okay, but this secret battlefield is too long. There are more than 100 chapters. Is this because of unsatisfactory results and low word count, or does the author think this writing method is very satisfying? I can't stand the limited-free version, it's so boring.

There is also too much emphasis on aristocratic families. It feels like the aristocratic families are in charge of the entire supernatural bureau, and the country seems to be just a decoration.

Da baa baa, the author is so short and quick to post.

I was busy some time ago, and I came back to read it after a long time, and found that it was finished At first, I thought it was quite enjoyable and relaxing to read Brother Chicken's book. The old man cleared the monsters, the big battle, and Mr. Niu at the door. It was edited inexplicably. The working environment is good, and the colleagues are also good people () In the second half (the last 100 chapters), it was as if I suddenly pressed the screen and started playing at double speed How much do I think? I'd like to give some advice to Brother Chicken, because I'm really looking forward to your next book The world view of this book is really on point, and the characters of the supporting characters and even the enemies are relatively fleshed out, not just paper targets waiting to be knocked down Actually, it's where I feel a little numb. When it comes to the big battlefield, I feel that the book has lost its "suspense". When I saw that the forest area was defeated, my heart was actually "completely expected" This feeling, and I have guessed that Xiao Li must be pretending to be big and killing the other two parties everywhere, trying to turn the tide and save the situation in the Dragon Kingdom. In the end, the appearance of Brother Shuangdao gave a little surprise, but it was just a trivial wave... As I read it, I felt like watching Diablo. Xiao Li's behavior was only the repetitive behavior of "killing monsters/killing people, dropping equipment, unlocking new skills, and changing equipment". When I woke up, it was like watching Diablo. After one victory, three and five chapters were about destroying bosses, changing equipment, and changing maps. The final points for becoming a god were a bit unclear (although the villain's name was quoted from ancient texts, but he had directly acquired the godhead anyway). Then the finale changed drastically. The "bad luck" at the end also turned into a lot of sleeping and entering secret realms from time to time. The presence and layout of the parents were a bit too Riddler-like for most readers... The writing is fine, and the plot style is also right! There are still too few emotional lines with the auxiliary girl. In fact, the emotional scenes of this kind of everyday lazy girl are really poignant to readers, even more so than the ultimate fusion in the later period, because every emotional scene represents new progress, but the ultimate fusion is to use Bigger thunder hits bigger monsters (I still feel like I said above when watching the Diablo map... In the end, it seems that the good brother of the Holy Son of the Holy See who planned the rebellion with Simon did not come back... Did you forget ( Because chicken Brother's single chapters are relatively short (fortunately, he doesn't break chapters very much). Many people who follow Brother may feel that the experience is a bit stiff. Today I watch Xiao Li killing randomly, and tomorrow Xiao Li will still kill randomly. When I wake up the day after tomorrow, Xiao Li comes to the rescue again and defeats the opponent's core characters. This will indeed be the case. It will have an impact on your grades... Then the following is a heavy spoiler, serious spoiler warning: The scene where Brother Zuo turned into a puppet at the end really made me cry, I couldn't stop crying for a while, I couldn't hold back at all It's a very interesting book to read Le's novel, I saw the ending of a villain who accidentally helped the protagonist many times, suffered various defeats along the way, and was unscrupulous and had no bottom line. I lost control of my emotions. I felt that I was also here to be funny Maybe I am also a person who wants to change something. I have also missed the girl. I have also imagined that I have the ambition and talent to change the world at any cost. I am indeed burned by hatred in my heart in a certain sense, and I am trying to do something with my friends Brother Zuo Is he a bad guy? There is no doubt that he is a hopeless bad guy The Zuo brother who held the girl's hand, the Zuo brother who was furious after being delayed, the Zuo brother who entrusted Brother Shuangdao and lamented for him, the Zuo brother who was preparing to seal his teammates in advance Brother Zuo, the brother who gave Xiao Li half of his godhead, the brother who used and abandoned all those who trusted him, and finally ascended to the upper world with two powerful enemies In the end, it was the brother who turned into a puppet and numbly fought for a glimmer of hope. Looking at Brother Zuo sitting at his desk Because of the scars left by Heaven and others, he realizes his ideals without hesitation, hurts others crazily, saves the world, destroys people, and fights with all his strength, for a world that no longer fights. Jie How did he learn so much knowledge, how did he personally take revenge on his senior brother, how did he convince himself to use countless cruel methods, how did he gather a group of like-minded people who even lost their lives for him without hesitation, and how did he become a He who chooses life and death for others is his most hated enemy He hates heaven and heaven, but in the end he deceives himself and others and becomes a puppet of heaven I really thought he would resist fiercely and give the puppet a big blow like Xiao Li at the beginning If he competes, he will lose all his composure, become furious, and even die on the spot from menopause He is thinking hard, he does not want to give up, he is full of unsolvable problems, he is driven into despair by unfounded hopes, and then sits down Very frustrated and desperate. People who fight against the way of heaven with hatred and unscrupulous means are finally enslaved by the way of heaven He ended hastily, but the people under the way of heaven are still struggling I hope Xiao Li can really rebuild a free world with everyone. A better world away from heaven I hope Brother Ji can continue to write the next book with enthusiasm, and hope that we will never become puppets Finally, give Brother Zuo a song of "New World", so that he will never be able to leave. (Or Brother Chicken wants to give him a chance in future books, kick me if you see this) puppet, also to Zuo Liang, who deeply loves the girl under the mountain "All this will see us separated" "Where will you sleep tonight" "Are you still willing to sleep like that?" "Where will you sleep tonight" "The new world will entrust us to you" "All this will be ruined in our hands" "The new world will leave us where we are."

The Secret Battlefield was completely broken when it came out. The whole novel originally had some qualifications for becoming a god.