How Did You Break the Dungeon Again?
你怎么又把副本搞坏了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Subgenre
- Evolution & Mutation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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520Chapters
8.3kRecommendations
80.5kFans
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The novel with the most memorable "collapse" theme in my mind is Gu Mian and Gu Bengbeng from "Global Collapse".
The original novel was nonsensical, absurd, and not even worthy of being called a "white novel" (a light novel for beginners). In short: it was tasteless but not worth throwing away.
Well, to be honest, towards the end, the protagonist's misfortunes were deliberately downplayed, which wasn't quite right.
These first five chapters are so weak! The author can't just give up!
I suggest rewriting from the very first chapter. It's worse than a poorly written novel. I've only read the first chapter, and how come you, a prophet, are more noble than the God Watch of Infinite Space? You have higher priority and can even predict newcomers in advance. If you were unlucky enough to be seen, I can understand, but a prophecy is unacceptable to me because it means you haven't made a single logical statement since the very first chapter.
The beginning was alright, but this secret realm battlefield is way too long. Over 100 chapters—is this padding due to poor sales and a planned rushed ending, or does the author find this writing style enjoyable? I can't even stand watching freebies for a limited time; they're too tedious.
There's also an overemphasis on powerful families; it feels like the entire Bureau of Supernatural Abilities is dominated by them, while the government seems like just a figurehead.
Da me da me, the author's post is so short, please post it quickly!
A reader's suggestion
I was busy for a while, and when I came back to check on it after a long break, I found it was finished. At first, I found the book "Chicken Brother" quite funny and relaxing. It was about carrying old men to clear monsters, having big competitions, and encountering old cowherds at the door. The story was told that the work environment was good, and the colleagues were all nice people.
The story completely collapsed after the secret battlefield was revealed. The entire novel originally had a certain potential to become a god.