Hogwarts: I Really Don't Want to Be a Wizard

That author, you wrote something wrong. The official version of Voldemort is the strongest magician, the Dark Magician. He is stronger than Old Deng and stronger than the original Dark Lord.

If there is anything wrong, call the author stupid. Book friends, please stop hurting each other. Everyone is reading novels to relax. There is no need to make them angry. Everything is because of the stupidity of the author. Thank you for your cooperation. Thank you for your support. ❤️(╥╯╰╥)ง

It was good in the first grade, but in the second grade plot, the protagonist is like a dog, getting frustrated everywhere, and anyone can kick it. I can only say that the idea is good, but the thinking is wrong.

Things that always feel a bit stiff: 1. At first, I thought that Lao Deng didn't know that Lao Fu was possessing Quirrell, but after Lao Fu noticed it, it suddenly became that Lao Deng had known about it for a long time. The twist in this paragraph is a bit stiff. I suggest you pay attention to the description of similar plots. You can describe a situation where Lao Deng judged Quirrell after hearing Professor Flitwick's report 2. The reason why Lao Fu favors the protagonist is blunt and conflicts with the original character. According to Lao Fu's personality, he should want to use the excellent wizard as a substitute or a chess piece. It can be described that when the two get along, some of the protagonist's performances make Lao Fu recognize him. This is more appropriate The above are just suggestions. The writing mainly depends on the author's own evaluation. The most important thing in writing is to write more. If you have time, I suggest you read the original settings and read yourself more. The most important thing is to see what kind of story you want to tell us, and it should be relevant to the theme. Currently, I think the best Harry novels are "My Classmate is Voldemort" and "I Am Legend", as well as "The Gray Wizard". The three main lines are very clear, and the storytelling and writing are also excellent. Come on, author, take your time, don't put too much pressure, please slowly tell us, the Hogwarts in your heart, and the story about the wizards.

After the protagonist struggled for a long time to get a "mobile phone" but said it was useless, I couldn't stand it anymore. . .

It's a pity. I originally thought it was okay, but I can only say that I still don't have a clear mind.

I just read Chapter 33. You haven't even figured out the positioning of real-time communication. What you are competing for is not Apparition and Portkeys, but owls. It is a messaging method, not a travel method. You haven't figured out the positioning yet, so what else are you trying to do?

It's a bit short but not bad, it's interesting but not stealing the show. It's the name of this self-created curse that made me a little confused. It doesn't fit the naming style of HP curses. The female lead is not yet clear, but the male lead is expected to be the third generation Dark Lord who dominates the magic and Muggle worlds (laughs, it's acceptable to have a harem)

Although it looks like the heroine is Hermione, at present, it is a good choice to have no heroine=￣ω￣=

When I saw the old bee, the follow-up development was that he ran away, he chased him, he couldn't fly with his wings, he said no, no, no, no, no, no, and leaned directly up, you want to ask why? Harry Potter doesn't know either!