Hogwarts: I Really Don't Want to Be a Wizard

That author, you wrote something wrong. The official version of Voldemort is the strongest magician, the Dark Magician. He is stronger than Old Deng and stronger than the original Dark Lord.

If there is anything wrong, call the author stupid. Book friends, please stop hurting each other. Everyone is reading novels to relax. There is no need to make them angry. Everything is because of the stupidity of the author. Thank you for your cooperation. Thank you for your support. ❤️(╥╯╰╥)ง

It was good in the first grade, but in the second grade plot, the protagonist is like a dog, getting frustrated everywhere, and anyone can kick it. I can only say that the idea is good, but the thinking is wrong.

Things that always feel a bit stiff: 1. At first, I thought that Lao Deng didn't know that Lao Fu was possessing Quirrell, but after Lao Fu noticed it, it suddenly became that Lao Deng had known about it for a long time. The twist in this paragraph is a bit stiff. I suggest you pay attention to the description of similar plots. You can describe a situation where Lao Deng judged Quirrell after hearing Professor Flitwick's report 2. The reason why Lao Fu favors the protagonist is blunt and conflicts with the original character. According to Lao Fu's personality, he should want to use the excellent wizard as a substitute or a chess piece. It can be described that when the two get along, some of the protagonist's performances make Lao Fu recognize him. This is more appropriate The above are just suggestions. The writing mainly depends on the author's own evaluation. The most important thing in writing is to write more. If you have time, I suggest you read the original settings and read yourself more. The most important thing is to see what kind of story you want to tell us, and it should be relevant to the theme. Currently, I think the best Harry novels are "My Classmate is Voldemort" and "I Am Legend", as well as "The Gray Wizard". The three main lines are very clear, and the storytelling and writing are also excellent. Come on, author, take your time, don't put too much pressure, please slowly tell us, the Hogwarts in your heart, and the story about the wizards.

After the protagonist struggled for a long time to get a "mobile phone" but said it was useless, I couldn't stand it anymore. . .

I just read Chapter 33. You haven't even figured out the positioning of real-time communication. What you are competing for is not Apparition and Portkeys, but owls. It is a messaging method, not a travel method. You haven't figured out the positioning yet, so what else are you trying to do?

It's a pity. I originally thought it was okay, but I can only say that I still don't have a clear mind.

It's a bit short but not bad, it's interesting but not stealing the show. It's the name of this self-created curse that made me a little confused. It doesn't fit the naming style of HP curses. The female lead is not yet clear, but the male lead is expected to be the third generation Dark Lord who dominates the magic and Muggle worlds (laughs, it's acceptable to have a harem)

When I saw the old bee, the follow-up development was that he ran away, he chased him, he couldn't fly with his wings, he said no, no, no, no, no, no, and leaned directly up, you want to ask why? Harry Potter doesn't know either!

Although it looks like the heroine is Hermione, at present, it is a good choice to have no heroine=￣ω￣=

This idea is very similar to that of a female author... In 🍅, the male protagonist Snape is flying all over the place, boasting about his teachings. Although Snape is indeed affectionate, he is not a good person. I can't accept all kinds of fan fictions being put on him.

The protagonist obviously has a portable space, which was given to him by Lao Fu, but he still puts his notebook in the Room of Requirement without any protection. He doesn't know how to seal it. Is it okay to put it in a twenty-layer safe? I can't understand it. I'm trying to force him to become mentally ill.

... I think directly revealing that I know Dumbledore at the beginning can dissuade many people. How can I know who he is when we meet him for the first time?

The writing is too jumpy and there is no process for jumping to the conclusion directly. For example, when gathering companions, the method of gathering is omitted, and it is directly stated who has been gathered. Another example is having a good relationship with Snape. Generally speaking, books have a gradual process, but here we also come to the conclusion directly.

The protagonists in the dozen or so pictures at the beginning are too cowardly. Why are you afraid of Quirrell? Can't you just be normal and natural? As long as you're not alone with him, you're afraid of something. Even if you're alone with him, you're not afraid. You can just pluck wool. What's wrong? So what if he holds a grudge against you? You still have at least several years of development time. In these few years of development time, you still can't beat Voldemort. All I can say is to restart it. As we all know, if a time traveler cannot be invincible in two or three years, it is best to restart it.

It feels very good. Although some readers may find it difficult to accept the first meeting with Dumbledore, overall it is indeed well written and I personally feel that there is nothing poisonous about it. The most interesting thing is the small theater at the end of each chapter. I feel that the author is very serious in writing, but there are too few words and too few people commenting. There is nothing to say in this chapter. Come on, author! 😊

The author has created a new building. If you have any comments or suggestions from book friends, you can post them here. The author is not shy and is not afraid to give opinions. The only thing I am afraid of is not receiving feedback. (><.) If there is no feedback, the author will get flustered, and flustering will affect the plot. If the plot is not good, negative feedback will continue. (◞‸◟ ) So, the author sincerely asks book friends that if you find any problems, you can tell them here and they will be seriously considered. (☆_☆) I beg you again and again, thank you! (ꈍ ꈍ) (=̴̶̷̤̄ ₃ =̴̶̷̤̄)♡

I was too anxious, and I didn't grasp the rhythm well. At the age of eleven, he does so many things and struggles with the big boss. You are awesome!

It's so annoying. Have you ever received a notice not to go to Hogwarts?

Hey guys, if it's Hermione, please call me. Thank you very much.

The first ten or so chapters can be seen in most Harry Potter fandoms, and there is nothing new at all. The ones written in the previous chapters that are read by many people are very innovative, so I rushed to pre-order this book.

Do you dare to update more? (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)

I am very much looking forward to the protagonist's great cause of building a magical world. I hope the author will greatly strengthen the outline. The recent plot always feels like it is going to be completed. Please be sure to develop it.

It's rare to see one where the protagonist actually creates an organization. The others are almost every day for seven years and are slower, but those are really boring.

I read a Harry Potter fanfic before, and I saw a point of view that was quite good, and I think the author can learn from it: Voldemort and Dumbledore actually knew each other well, and there was a certain tacit understanding and game between them. Dumbledore used magic to The magic stone is used to catch Voldemort, but people don't use fake ones but real ones to play games with Voldemort. Voldemort also knows Dumbledore's thoughts and knows Dumbledore's bottom line, so he will not harm the students in the castle and usually only comes out to cause trouble at the end of the semester.