Immortality Begins with Orion

This novel is really good, especially the protagonist. I feel that it has written different roles such as the immortal, the master behind the scenes, the chess player, and the player. The plot development is also unique and unconventional. It does not fall into the routine of other novels of constantly fighting monsters and upgrading. Xiao Pian is also very good, his father's little cotton jacket.

The combat power in this book is really weird. From the beginning to the end, the nine levels are divided into 7 to 9, which is normal, 4 to 6, which is just barely enough, and 1 to 3, which is simply unreadable. At the end, the second level is regarded as gods, demons, saints, and the first level is the way of heaven. It makes my scalp numb. Under normal circumstances, would a single level like heaven be included? And the power system was changed midway, and the change was not clear. In the end, it was not written in detail at all, what Spring and Autumn brushwork It is better to apply other things, such as innate and acquired. After all, starting from level 6, it doesn't look like a martial artist, but more like someone who cultivates immortality. Starting from level 3, it feels like The author himself couldn't understand the writing As for the plot, I can watch it except for the part near the end. Personally, I didn't see the part I wanted to see. After all, in the later stage, it insists on covering domestic history, the Classic of Mountains and Seas, the Great Wilderness, etc., And then starts the Spring and Autumn writing style, and the time-travel and return is just like that, which feels useless. It's fun to watch the protagonist in the first catastrophe and the restart, but the feeling of immortality is still too little, especially the part where the immortality is too forgetful, from passionate to gradually cold, to the return of feelings, and then to the real supreme forgetfulness.

Does anyone think the plot and characterization are a bit out of line? There are always conspiracy theories, competing to see who is the mastermind behind the scenes, defeating the mastermind behind the scenes, and living peacefully forever. . . Are low-key and behind-the-scenes, resourcefulness and conspiracy completely equivalent? In order to live a safe and immortal life, in order to prevent and defeat the big boss behind the scenes, he gave birth to a son to rule the barbarians, and then let the son cooperate with the behind-the-scenes marriage, and let the eldest daughter stay underground all year round. On the surface, it is said that it is to stay together for a long time in the future and to protect the family. The protagonist is such a big loser. The stronger he is, the weaker his courage becomes. He is not as passionate and responsible as he was at the beginning. In the future, we will rely on our children who are weaker than ourselves to test the waters, avoid some risks, and develop ourselves behind the scenes. The reason is that when they are older, it is their own choice. Let's talk about the plot of alternation between old and new eras, right? It is still the style of guarding against the mastermind and competing to see who is the boss behind the scenes. The Human Emperor is the protagonist's adopted son, and the Zhou Dynasty later fell into the hands of the protagonist's daughter and grandson. How come when he was born again, the protagonist could face the troubled times so calmly, and see his own blood rule and mess around, and it wasn't hundreds or thousands of years later. At this time, the protagonist, who is obviously invincible in the world, is worried that the big boss behind the scenes is still alive, so he shrinks his head, and messes around slowly with the rebels. He knows that the dynasty is his own blood, and he knows that thousands of people will die tragically in these troubled times. He obviously has the ability to quickly end the troubled times, but he does not do anything. There is no empathy of blood, no empathy in the world, only the boss behind the scenes. No matter how easily he defeats the Martial Master, criticizes the Heavenly Master's conspiracy, and accuses him of disrupting the royal family and the world, now he is talking about others in a high-sounding way? What kind of protagonist's character does this create? The protagonist shows a little bit of humanity from time to time, but does nothing on the big issues? Is this not a saint? In the past, the protagonist and his wife, the Queen, then worked so hard to unite the world, and then the protagonist ran away to work behind the scenes, letting his wife and queen take over, and then the Human Emperor worked vigorously for the world. Such hard work, but a few years after the death of the Emperor, the world was in chaos again, and the previous good things were overturned, but the protagonist was still busy fighting wits behind the scenes, and waited until his daughter was almost forced to fail or surrender before he came out to put things right? Is the Emperor so incompetent at cultivating successors? Is it so useless to make arrangements that pave the way for future generations? The protagonist is born again and encounters troubled times. His daughter and grandson's dynasty is in chaos again, and they don't know how to train successors. The forces left behind by the protagonist will watch the Celestial Master make chaos? The plot is just to wait for the protagonist to bring order to the chaos again? In just a few decades, we have used troubled times and brought order out of chaos several times to continue the plot. Is this appropriate? Please respect the people of the world, okay? Isn't it appropriate for the protagonist, who is so smart and responsible for his military skills, to battle wits and courage behind the scenes all day long, to use snacks to develop a normal succession strategy? It's not too much to ensure that it's not chaotic for hundreds of years, but for tens of millions of years, right? So I have been reading this novel, but when I think about it, I feel a little tired.

As a bookworm, I haven't seen this kind of fairy tale for a long time. It's no exaggeration to say that it can be said to be one of the few Internet articles that I have read in more than ten years that is very appetizing and well-paced The author does not put any water in it. Now it is close to 200 chapters, which is close to what many books can reach in 500 chapters. The plot and the transitions in the middle are not unfamiliar, the plot of each chapter is advancing steadily, and the reading experience every day is very good It is one of the few books that I am willing to order as long as the follow-up is not too embarrassing I am too lazy to read and order many books by big authors these days, but this book is worthy of a review

The writing is really good (›´ω`‹), and I have found another book that I can read. Now besides reading "I Became a Martial Saint in Another World", I am reading this book "Immortality Begins with Orion". In comparison, I think "Immortal Life Begins as an Orion" is more lifelike than "I Became a Martial Saint in Another World". Both books have their own merits. "I Became a Martial Saint in Another World" is one of the recent books that I feel good about group portrait streaming. However, "Immortality Begins with Orion" has a richer atmosphere of life, the protagonist is not too far away from the audience, it is easy to feel a sense of substitution, and the jump in strength is not abrupt. There is a saying that goes well - the author is like a stripper. The stripper shows his body, but the author shows his soul. "Immortality Begins with Orion" makes me feel that the author integrated his soul into the work and wrote with heart. Come on, author, you write really well!

I see that many people think that meat fields are unreasonable. In fact, let alone in a fantasy world, the existence of meat fields is reasonable even in modern society. Meatfield was not the original creation of this book or Shifang Wusheng, but I proposed the prototype when I was in junior high school around 1990, and wrote it as a composition for publication. At that time, many junior high school students read it. The concept at that time was the product of genetic engineering, where cow genes were transferred to mushrooms to create beef mushrooms. Mushrooms are planted in the fields. They grow very huge and moo, but they cannot move. You can cut the meat directly from the mushroom cow, which will heal over time, or you can harvest it directly, and it will grow back over time.

As an uncle-level reader who has read and rarely posted for more than ten years, I sincerely wish the author all the best and good health, and continue to produce high-quality works. Life will not be smooth sailing. Unfairness, shortcomings, and even despair will appear in the long river called "life". Because of this, the current peace, well-being, and struggle make us pursue, cherish, and protect it. Thanks to the stability and progress of China's Xia Dynasty, which has given us a relatively good environment, so that we can experience different emotions between the lines in our spare time. I also thank the author for the group portraits in another world that bring people feelings. Come on. 🌙

It's a really good book, and the storyline feels a bit amazing! The truth of the world emerges step by step. The fighting scenes are enjoyable to watch, the author is knowledgeable, great book! "Meat Field" is at the beginning, a lot of people criticize it, I suggest you read it patiently, the rest is really exciting

It is a rare novel about cultivating immortality with good writing style and anti-conventional style. The stories of the characters in it are just like in reality, and they are presented appropriately. This is something that some people couldn't accept in the early stage. After all, some of the novels they read before were too rigid. For example, the villain is the villain, and the villain will die soon when he meets the protagonist. The villains in this novel can become friends through communication and efforts. They may be one of their own at the beginning, but they may also be betrayed. In addition to the protagonist, other characters who appear are also very three-dimensional and realistic. As for the protagonist's own positioning, remember that he is neither a hero nor a villain. All his actions are based on the fact that he and his family can survive/cultivate smoothly.

Come on! Have your own style! Hold on, don't jump, don't die!

It's better to change the name of the novel. The content of the novel is very good. It would be a pity to use the current name.

The author's writing style is still very good, the layout is also very good, and the foreshadowing is well done. He is considered a promising writer. At least after reading online articles for so many years, this book is one of the few that has been carefully written. The story line is also very clear and has a delicate feeling. It doesn't matter if you go slower. Only when you have a complete idea can you write with depth.

The progress is a bit fast, with only a little over a hundred chapters. You should write at least seven or eight hundred more chapters, otherwise it will be a pity for your writing. I also hope that those unreasonable things in the early stage will be changed. I recommended it and others said it was embarrassing, hhhhh I feel that I can also change the title of the book. The current name is a little bit noisy, just like the Xuanjian Xianzu I read before. If I didn't change the name, I would be dismissed even if I knew it was a good book. I hope the author will consider it.

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Please update more, it's a critical moment, catch up on the latest chapter in one go, 36 votes++++

I originally wanted to vote a few times, but it was so out of context that I felt so uncomfortable.

The most anticipated book recently, the 20-year-old bookworm author should know that it's time to do whatever you want 😉 If it doesn't look good, just delete it and leave without worrying about it. I just want to post this to tell the author that the book is not good enough.

Some book friends said that when Tian Bao died in Chapter 36, the protagonist was cold-blooded and cursed the author. This was very baffling. First of all, after Tian Bao was injured, the protagonist spent money to hire a doctor for him, and then went to help him get revenge. The protagonist's wife also gave him good medicine. Before, the protagonist gave him a hunting license, taught him archery, and took him into business together. How can the protagonist not be called cold-blooded? Even to himself, it's nothing more than that, right?

This novel is one of the most beautiful novels I have ever read. At first I thought it was some kind of harem romance, but I didn't expect it to sound different. It sounded a bit like a solipsistic protagonist. The sofa is decisive and not sloppy at all. Before killing the enemy, first observe the opponent's condition. What is the opponent's state? What force is it and when is the best time to kill the opponent? This novel completely captures that feeling. If you are affectionate and righteous, if you don't have the Holy Mother's heart, you can do it if you can, and if you can't do it, don't do it. This is what ordinary people think. It is also the psychology of the public. Who is born to be the protagonist? Being born a protagonist is basically impossible to happen to us. If there was, it couldn't be us.

I declare that the more I write this book, the better it gets. In theory, the previous Orion part should be deleted. The first part was too cowardly, too effeminate, and half-scrupulous, so I was scolded a lot by readers, and then it became normal later on. If we do this earlier, we can retain at least half more readers. The first twenty or thirty chapters of the Orion part are all failures and poisonous points. It would be best to delete them directly.

The author is great. In the several maps he has opened so far, the buried lines have all been laid out very successfully, and the endings are also very reasonable! The level of the Gray Line of Grass Snake is on the same level as that of some ancient novels, and it is much better than some of the current upgraded monster-killing techniques. It's just that the system after the 5th-level technique was not sorted out well, and the 3rd-level heaven, earth, human soul system was not laid out well at the 4th level, so it felt a bit messy, but the flaws are not concealed! Ever since the emperor was assassinated, the protagonist has become a bit like Sima Yi (the emperor's assassination is a bit too simple, I think readers feel the same as me)

The plot after Blood Knife Patriarch has a pretentious and profound imitation of literary youth, and the literary youth flavor does not conform to the thoughts and interests of contemporary people, and the imitation of literary youth is even more unreasonable. The role of hanging is like a joke. In the middle and later stages, a large chapter is devoted to how the protagonist achieves enlightenment and breaks the mirror. Deleting the hanging and replacing it with natural understanding has no effect. The combat power system is purely redundant and complicated, unintuitive and does not function as well as its settings. It is a mess, but it still feels like a useless dog. I skipped the article later and couldn't watch it at all. My repeated admonitions about the Ghost Realm completely wiped out my interest in understanding the origin of the Ghost Realm and destroying ghosts. The protagonist seems to have a different setting from Shuangwen Xiaobai's novel, but in fact it just goes from the extreme of destroying everyone at every turn to the other extreme of waste gaining power and virtue but not matching it. But I can understand this. I am always just a person who writes a book, and the strongman mentality is all based on speculation. The emotional interaction is considered delicate, but it still has a b-like imitation flavor, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. For most readers who are attracted by the title of the book, I suggest that there is no need to read the plot after the Blood Knife Ancestor. For those readers who want to read the superiority of the four classics in online articles, you can order them all.

Now, it's one of my favorite novels. The front is normal, but the world, realm, characters and so on are all laid out in the back. There is a feeling of enlightenment. This is the first book I am currently pursuing, if I didn't have money. You have the Silver Alliance. Especially the chapter about becoming a mortal, it was directly sublimated. The highlight of the whole novel

The previous writing was good, but when it came to marrying a wife to kill the emperor, I felt that the three aspects were inconsistent. You can marry a wife for beauty, you can marry a wife for profit, you can also marry a wife for yourself. But I don't like it very much to marry a wife for murder and turn the festive red into blood red. He is not a weakling. He has a trump card to kill the emperor, but he chose the most humble way. Brother, you are a jerk, not an old gutter monster who does everything possible.

The previous portrayal of the heroine is easy to dissuade. It became more and more enjoyable after enduring more than ten chapters, especially the part about the strange village in the mountains was very well written. It's just a lack of imagination, or the protagonist's IQ. Knowing that skills can be generated, why not try poison, medical, basic knife skills, and hidden weapons? Regarding medical skills, hunters will more or less catch some herbs in the wild, right? Isn't it normal to try generating skills a few more times? Hidden weapon + poison, needless to say how effective it is, I don't practice swordsmanship, I don't have any close protection means, I don't even think about training, I really don't use my brain.

It was written about the warrior system, but a ghost suddenly appeared. The style is fragmented but not suspenseful. It was well written in the early stage, but in order to save the life of the female character, the author raised the male protagonist's combat power too high, and the plot collapsed. No matter how the conflict was set up, the protagonist was directly invincible. Do you dare to imagine that in chapter 100, the enemy did not hurt the protagonist even a hair, invincibility is boring. Although I have only read Chapter 100, I am not interested in writing anything else.

It gets more and more boring later on, with all kinds of settings that I think are novel.

It's been more than ten chapters, and my bow and arrow skills have reached an advanced level, but I haven't shot an arrow yet. This is outrageous. I don't practice my ability to save my life. I just rely on the system to add points, which is not in the game. As your strength increases, what should you do if your bow breaks when you use it? Even if you add some flow, you have to get used to it.

Brothers, I have a bold guess that all this may be the conspiracy of someone who coexists with ghosts. After all, the fifth grade can already sense ten miles. Although the imperial court is declining, it is for the major sects. It is difficult to guarantee that there will not be a few big masters above the fifth grade to protect them, and the various limitations of the body (curse, weak strength, slow to enter the ghost street) make it impossible for them to directly confront the mainstream power system warriors at that time. The first step is to support the Red Lotus Sect, use the Red Lotus Sect to consume the court's control over the local area, assassinate Qingliu and corrupt the court, trigger public resentment and attract believers to accumulate cannon fodder. The second step of rebellion is that Xingku can control small animals to detect military forces and use props to carry out beheading operations. Coupled with fanatical believers, it is not difficult for Prince Honglian to defeat the imperial army with the help of Xingku. The third step is to attack the capital and force the emperor to leave. The field battle consumes most of the imperial troops, so the capital must be empty. There are many people in the Red Lotus Sect. There is a probability of escaping there The fourth step is to replace the emperor, defend the city, and cut off the queen. After several twists and turns, the defense force around the emperor is at a low point. First, replace the servants around the emperor to learn the details of the emperor's behavior. If you have daily attention, you can even imitate the memory to a certain extent. Then use Diaohu Lishan to let the body use rouge makeup to replace the emperor, or use other props to control the emperor. Step 5: Xingku comes on stage. After the Emperor becomes Xingku's person, he can bring trouble to the various sects. For example, he lies about the so-called treasure house and makes Honglian and the various sects fight each other. After both sides are hurt, the Emperor can then seal Xingku as an official. On the one hand, on the one hand The details of the major factions have been found out, and Xingkui's methods are well hidden. On the other hand, Xingkui has a legitimate official status and can transport people to the ghost streets to trade and increase their strength. However, the major factions have been depleted of manpower and cannot use the government soldiers and government officials to stop them. Moreover, after the Red Lotus Sect was weakened, it could only rely on the physical body and exchange positions. I didn't think about it after that. Maybe more buying and selling on the ghost street will be of benefit to the person who coexists with ghosts. For example, if the ghost money offered by his subordinates increases, he can go to the depths of the ghost street to buy important props; for example, he has his incarnation in each different ghost street, and what he sells are props that are essential to the body. He can trade more ordinary people's lifespan to enhance himself and break through to the next realm

When I saw Feng'er killing the protagonist's master, I lost the desire to watch it. The person who almost killed the heroine was forgotten, just because she was a woman. She turned into a trick and killed the protagonist's master. I was really speechless. The master can die, but being killed by the neighbor of the former protagonist is really unacceptable.