The Road to Longevity Begins with a Blind Man in a Drug Store

The author's most successful book is still the first one, the one about Orion. The success lies in, first of all, the setting is very attractive, it starts from the beginning, the cheating strength is just right, the ghost setting is very interesting, making people feel like they have all the treasures in their possession, and the subsequent world view slowly unfolds with the plot, and the development of the protagonist makes people full of expectations. For the last two books, it can be seen that the author wanted to write a series. But why are each books so short? The reason is simple: because the world view is similar to the first book. The worldview is similar, so there is no sense of novelty. It is difficult to write novel plots. Because there are no new settings coming in. This also leads to the fact that there is not much to write, and it is no longer possible to lay out the plot and expand the world settings at the same time. If the author continues to construct the plot like the first book, the plot will definitely be tasteless. How to solve this problem? Is there a way to make the work a full-length novel while building the same series? The answer is, yes! You can refer to several books about eagles eating chickens. First there is Global Gaowu, and then there is Su Yu. These two books seem to be almost completely unrelated, but the author just used a new book to connect the two together. The key to the design of the eagle is that the world develops, and the setting naturally develops as well. Therefore, completely different world settings can be classified into the same system. These systems are settings from different periods of the world. The author can also refer to this idea and design a new world setting that looks almost completely different, but essentially does not deviate from the same system. This can solve the problem of difficulty in writing new ideas in the plot due to similar world settings. If you solve this problem, you can construct a new novel, even a novel that is more attractive than the first one.

There are a lot of little bits and bobs, and it's much worse than what was written in the previous book. What have you been through, and how can your level still deteriorate?

The author made the mistake of writing the first two books again. He had to write about the differences between immortals and mortals, and created an imaginary world. It is not up to you to decide what to write first. Read more novels written by Chen Dong. When you reach a high combat power, you still have all human emotions, and this emotional value is more obvious. This is why Chen Dong's books become more and more immersive as they go to the end Writing like this is no less than digging your own grave and burying yourself. Readers will not buy it for you.

Chapter 31 really made me sick. If you have two minds, then you have two minds. Although immoral, it is consistent with male nature. It has to be all for the sake of future interests. I "had to" marry this beauty. In the first few chapters, I was talking about trying to grow in secret, but now I can't help but plan to show off my muscles to the big beauty? I thought the taboo in Paradise was coming. Although I have the strongest strength in the county and can be my own backer or support my puppet subordinates, there are also a lot of stronger forces to choose from. I have an endless lifespan to do these things, but my little head tells me, no, I can't wait, you have no choice but to become your own boss. This great beauty is also very 👍🏻. She didn't accept a son-in-law before she took power, but suddenly she had to take one after she took power. Rights are going backwards, right? Then I met a bad villain who had evil intentions towards this beauty. To prevent the great beauty from being ruined, the protagonist can only accept it with tears. I can already imagine that in the future, due to various factors, I will be forced to accept the daughter of a noble, the eldest lady of an official family, or even a princess. My innocent and single protagonist was forced by the outside world to accept him. In fact, he didn't want to at all. Mine is a pure white lotus flower.

The author wants to portray the evil in human nature and highlight the embarrassment of the protagonist, but man, real life is torture enough, so it's almost enough

After reading Chapter 14, I felt very uncomfortable. Some people in the comment area thought the protagonist was stupid. I also thought the protagonist was stupid, or there was something wrong with the author's writing. I may not be as smart as the protagonist. I hope the protagonist is wise. After all, I am reading a novel. So far, I have basically understood the plot. The protagonist of the main message did not deal with the problem well It is known that taboos will be formed. As a modern person, after seeing the widow's affairs and the way she was treated, before things worsened for the first time (seeing the widow's body glowing red), there was no awareness or association (referring to The kind of situation in the movie where the tragic plot leads to the appearance of strange things), I feel like I am just watching, waiting for something to happen, and forcefully promote the plot Some people in the comment area said that it is useless even if they say it. In the hearts of the villagers, three local boys may be more important than an outsider widow, but if something like this happens, others can Don't worry, the next target of these three people will not be you, won't everyone be in danger? The protagonist's behavior is very strange. He wants to find a technique to improve himself, which is not wrong. So, combined with the protagonist's known taboos, can he kill the taboos while practicing the techniques? I think it should be If he is not strong enough, he should be able to kill the three imps. Then the author may want the protagonist to calm down or avoid the taboo by killing the imps hated by the widow after the widow becomes a taboo Then the question is, why do you have to let this taboo happen? Why wait until the question is asked? Solve the problem after it arises. Why can't we directly solve the root cause of the problem to avoid the problem? Even if it cannot be solved, even if we make two-way preparations and use the practice method as a back-up method to advance the plot I will not think about how to talk to the villagers or how to solve this problem. But what I hope to see is that the protagonist does this to avoid possible subsequent threats to himself. Through this, it can be shown that the protagonist has wisdom that I don't have, even if he doesn't succeed Finally, I didn't look at it carefully because it was a bit uncomfortable to watch. Maybe there are other problems that I didn't pay attention to. As a result, I have these thoughts. By the way, I would like to ask about the general development of this short plot The author's last book was quite good. However, this one does not look as good until now. It is still a pity. I don't want to run out of books to read. Is there any brother who can tell me how the writing is?

The warm and heartwarming article is so cool. I haven't seen such a heartwarming article in a long time. I hate the kind of Long Aotian the most. He is invincible at every turn. He can barely grow, but he wanders around, provokes enemies everywhere, speaks arrogantly, and has been reading books for 15 years. Now at Qidian, this is the only one I have paid to read. It fits my heart so well.

It's so frustrating to watch. The unsatisfactory writings written by others make people want to stop reading. The unsatisfying writings you have written make me want to stop reading.

What nonsense did you write? The protagonist can get out of his body and see where they hide their money. Wouldn't it be nice to recruit a few more people to find them together? But in the end, he wants to protect himself wisely, but he also wants other people's skills, and he has to be in danger of being invaded before he wants to do anything rash 😰😰😰

I read the plot, but why is there always that kind of plot? Even if it's in Orion, it's also in this book. I really don't watch Tauren.

I have read more than 50 chapters. The writing in the early stage is not good, but it is not good, but it is irritating. There are also a group of people who are there to criticize. Some people commented a few words and the author's old readers started to criticize. The early impression was very bad and drove away many people. It is not worthy of the score of more than 1,000 monthly votes. In the later period, since I got married to An Chenxue, I started to write better and better, and gradually got better, and it is worthy of this score.

Is the author crazy? Don't you know the meaning of 810,000 words and 240,000 fans reading? This is a book that beats 99.9% Of starting authors.

It's really disgusting to have a son. You have such a stupid character and character. You throw it away and you have to have a child? Just let the heroine live forever. Does the seed of immortality need offspring?

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Not bad, not bad, that's how it should be. The more you practice, the better you'll be able to write. Butcher is starting to get a little different 🤭 It's better to stop the loss in time I suggest the author stop writing about female protagonists, or practice writing romance novels. Although you write a lot about women, you can't write well 😎😎😎

There are many women to transition the plot, but it is not as good as the beginning. The more you watch, the more women there are, and there is no weird plot. The more you watch, the more boring it becomes. It feels like you have watched for nothing... It is recommended to just watch the previous plot in the village.

Taohuasu has its own unique writing style. It is never just a show-off. It makes people feel that this is a story, a story that slowly reveals the face of the world. It is logical, not so violent, and very satisfying.

I also read harem stories, but what you wrote earlier was so affectionate, and Goldfinger set it up so well. When I read Chapter 31, the harem suddenly started again, it really affected the viewing experience.

The author's first Orion, the female protagonist is particularly well written. Who said the author can't write about emotions?

It's so well written, I also finished the last book, but it's a pity that the author was influenced by the comments in the latter part of the writing and didn't end well. The results of this book are pretty good so far. I hope the author can continue to maintain his own ideas. Monthly tickets have been given.

The things he did ended with a beating. Now he has become a character like a noble family. Doesn't an ordinary person count as a human being? I also ordered them all. At first, I liked the idea of ​​the protagonist living a peaceful life. Now they are constantly recruiting harems. A large family of people ignore Song An's things. Tong Niang and the others were ordinary people at the beginning, but they have changed now, right?

The early and middle stages were handled well, with perfect details. The heroine of the drugstore and the horror atmosphere were well rendered. It was good to have the eldest lady as the main character. Later, when I met the fox, I started to be a little hasty. After sleeping, others turned to sleep with my aunt, and then basically forgot about this little one. I was afraid that I could not bind the protagonist and I could still accept the excuse After Aunt Fox, there is no feeling of terror at all. I start to be invincible directly. I am becoming more and more casual with women. I also said that there is no need to add a heroine. I wonder if you can just sleep with the mirror palace master. Is it necessary to hook up with her disciples if you are progressing so fast? , Huang Jie's feeling Generally speaking, the themes in the early and middle stages are novel. The part where you become stronger and support each other with your partner in a terrifying atmosphere, and escape from the blissful fantasyland is beautifully described. In the middle and later stages, the processing is insufficient, the portrayal is too hasty, and there is no horror atmosphere. It is just an outing. There is no novel point of view in the logic and ending loop, so it feels like it has been ended hastily.

The faces of those people were distorted, and they were waving large or small stones in their hands. They were opening and closing things that were either mouths or jars, but the next second they were awakened by the distant shouts of killing. Perhaps only when their own lives and deaths were at stake could they get rid of their evil thoughts. Just as Yue'e longed for "hope" before her death, the villagers may have been awakened by the fear of "death". The hand waving the stone hung down weakly, and muttered "Don't kill me" that was originally filled with resentment. Most of the village women were shaking like chaff and their faces were pale. Muramasa tremblingly raised his head and looked into the distance. There were vicious gangsters leading the road. The younger brother behind him rushed towards him shouting for kill. He was also laughing and chatting with the short figure beside him. It turned out to be the youngest of the Ding family... Shouting for kill. Amidst the sound, Muramasa fell in a pool of blood, mumbling as if he wanted to say something. The third child came over and said with a smile: "Thank you, uncle, for your trust..." He didn't hear the next words and his head tilted, and he was completely dead. I don't know how he died.

Personally, I feel that so far, except for the two weird ones in the middle, which are a bit confusing and need to be read again to understand, the rhythm is still relatively comfortable, the characters are well-drawn, and I haven't found any mental attacks. The background story should be quite big.

Is it over before it even begins? ?

Not toxic, very smooth. Will continue to support.

I'm just going to strangle it, how come it dies even though I'm raising it?

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The characters are all well drawn. There are no mindless passerby villains. The protagonist implements the spirit of Taoism and does not make enemies everywhere. He is friendly but feels a bit like a virgin (he kills enemies decisively, but he is not like Wang Mazi, Han Laomo, etc.) Towards innocent people. It is still good. There is no poisonous point, and the atmosphere of the weird recovery is not bad, but I always feel like taking my wife to a haunted house for vacation, which is childish, and the weird atmosphere can be mentioned. It's best if the characters are very good and I like them, and don't suddenly lose them.

The first one was okay, but after about a hundred chapters it started to become too much nonsense, and it was no longer interesting, so I pulled it out.