Strange Wizard Journey

Feel sorry. To be honest, the book is a bit broken. I asked the editor this morning and it will take about 300,000 yuan before it can be put on the shelves. This book is the first book that the author signed a contract to write. At the beginning, the author only had some interest and wanted to write it. Unexpectedly, he signed the contract. However, the author is a novice after all and has insufficient grasp of many things. He does not even have an outline, only some of the author's imagination. And because the author is lazy, he is not diligent in updating and does not save the manuscript. However, after all, it is the author's first book, and the author also wants to stick to it and write some stories he wants to write. After it is put on the shelves, I heard from other authors that there will be a small guaranteed reward. So after it is put on the shelves, the author should keep updating it twice a day. For book friends who have been following updates and like my works, the author is also very touched by this sense of recognition. There is also support from book friends, which is also an encouragement to the author. Thank you! I suddenly wanted to say something today, so I'm sorry again.

Good job, keep updating, give me some suggestions, will a wizard school let the wizard family steal fresh blood with top talents? Even if that family is also loyal to the school, under such a strict contract, is the apprentice still loyal to the school? It is impossible for the school to allow this kind of self-conscious foundation to happen.

The author's writing is quite good, and it looks very smooth. So far, there are no particularly big flaws However, there are still some small shortcomings. This book is really very similar to the wizarding world (of course it is the originator, but wizards have developed for so many years, although they have remained roughly the same), this routine is too old-fashioned. Can't you learn about the wizard's journey, and there are other amazing wizarding novels. Speaking of which, I have been reading the seedlings of wizarding literature just to see if there is a master. Well, it is obvious that the author of your article has gone too far. Loren has no sense of wanting to explore the truth at all. The level is all about strength. Of course, he is still an apprentice, and there is no way to talk about the door of truth. But his thinking really has nothing at all, and it all relies on recklessness (referring to the use of knowledge. Whether it is the first lesson or some hints, wizards rely on wisdom, pursue truth, and love to explore. The protagonist really does not have this kind of mentality. If there is another profession that can still reach the top, and only needs to kill people, seize treasures, meditate to advance, the protagonist should choose it instead of a wizard, more like a mortal The fairy tales about human beings are not the orthodox ones, but the ones that are popular nowadays. As an aside, I have always thought that the fantasy fairy tales about mortals and wizards are very similar, ruthless, determined, and unscrupulous, but there is a difference between them. It is obvious that the connotation of wizard style is equal exchange, pursuit of truth, exploration of the world, and leveraging knowledge and wisdom. The male protagonist in the front is established and has the feeling of a wizard, but it disappears once he enters the academy There are really too many exclamation points (we don't know why, it's just that it doesn't match the character). People say that they need to add exclamation points. They are selflessly appreciating the protagonist's qualifications, so they also add exclamation points. The protagonist also needs to add exclamation points when he sees a material. Is he so emotionally rich? As for the ascetic monk's enjoyment, well, it doesn't matter. It's just that it doesn't feel a bit too casual. But the protagonist can be happy no matter how happy he is. It doesn't matter. I'm bearish. I mean, can we stop being too casual in the future? It feels like a bargain. If that's the case, can we find someone who is similar? (Just think of me as a rant Finally, it's rare to see a protagonist with such a good primary panel. Can he get some special treatment for a genius? The one with the superdimensional warlock is great (referring to the related rights and interests brought by the male protagonist's talent. It doesn't need to be exaggerated. It's the speed of cultivation, as well as some knowledge comprehension, knowledge exploration, and skill creation. Yes, he should have some advantages. () Now it seems that he is not much different from other students. When I saw that I didn't know how to learn curses, and I didn't even have any contact with it, I almost wanted to save my life. You are a dark type, and you really don't want to expand your knowledge? Let's go back to the topic of wizard academy. The settings say that apprentices and formal wizards are very different. They are two life forms. It can't be that a third-class apprentice entered a ruins, rushed up the spiritual scale, and practiced a few spells, but You can become an official wizard by mobilizing some world power and so on. I can't see the difference. Aren't wizards smart? The apprentice's wisdom has not yet appeared. If a wizard wants to mobilize his own wisdom to create magic and so on, then his knowledge should be accumulated during the apprenticeship. Erudite, rational, and crazy (in the imaginary wizard, knowledge should be accumulated during the academy period. You have underestimated it here. He really looks like an illiterate (?!)) He doesn't even know how to do it now. I have done experiments, and I have not even thought about researching and exploring my own way, and now I am exploring outside, I have no time or opportunity to learn knowledge. Oh The above are all my nonsense, don't pay too much attention to it, the author must have his own better ideas, I am just a boring reader, just here to complain, I hope the author's results will get better and better😏

Does the author understand the wizarding world? The rule of the wizarding world is equal exchange. A super-talented person can be promoted to a first-level wizard without any problem. But just a family can sign an unequal treaty by randomly giving dozens of magic stones? Let the signee be a dog for this family, I vomited

It's a bit interesting, but Yuanli came without any warning and no introduction.

The school has no sense of existence at all. The protagonist is super talented and goes in without any disturbance. There is no description of the teachers of each subject or the principal. I feel that the author's writing is not detailed enough, so it is just a running account.

Do you know why 90% of time-travel wizards don't join aristocratic families? Because I'm afraid of being stupid! Why do pig's feet only work for the world for 120 years? (Because of being brainless) If you can exploit it for life, why not? What are you afraid of if you have a contract? So it's very brainless! If the pig's feet dare not resist, then he will die! The contract is for life until death, so there is no need for 120 years!

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I let myself go too much. A third-level apprentice ate a third-level monster in a secret realm, and a first-level wizard manipulated the Seven Deadly Sins in a different world. What the wizard stream looks at is the infinite inclusiveness of the wizard system. If it exists, I will understand it, and if I understand it, I will use it. There are blood wizards, body refining wizards, and dream wizards. Why can't there be spiritual wizards? Spirituality can also be incorporated into the wizard's system. Isn't it just a simple two-way approach at the same time as you write it now? There is also the issue of setting. What is the status of the wizard in this book? Is it considered an advanced civilization? Is it possible to have a world war? How would wizards normally adapt to different world rules? It's hard to imagine the status of a wizarding world with such a low power system in the multiverse. It is speculated from the plot that this world is not far from the wizarding world, because it only consumes magic power and does not require any rare resources. At the same time, a first-level wizard (based on spirituality, you are considered second-level) can actually pass through the portal of this world safely. You haven't explained the background of this world clearly, and you have written a lot about the esoteric cult setting. My suggestion is to directly write about the mysterious western fantasy of the esoteric cult system, so that there will be no conflicts and top-heavy settings, and it should have a wider audience than the wizard stream. In fact, it's generally okay. None of the above are bad points, but I personally think it can be improved.

The writing is very strange. The protagonist with such a talent can still be manipulated by the family so casually. Then why is it that the academy is so talented that it is easy to say that the talent is so good and he can be coerced into joining the family? Doesn't that mean the academy is regarded as the family's resource package? !

It's not like a novel. Either just write about wizards honestly, or just drop the eunuch and start a new book on spiritual practice. One moment I write about wizards, another moment I write about gods, and then it turns into articles about cultivating immortals. It's a mess.

I clicked in and saw that the introduction was just one sentence, and it was still a traditional Western fantasy. I was just wondering why the editor would prey on you. After reading a few hundred words, I touched my chin with a playful expression...

Is your economic system broken? After your protagonist goes out, he can move as many magic stones as he wants. The matter of buying a few people can be explained, but for five magic stones, he only listens to a little bit of useless information. The information is just one sentence, and the situation is not very optimistic. These are just five magic stones. If you look at the early magic stones from an academic school like the protagonist, it is not that easy to earn. You have to know that the protagonist is rich because of his good qualifications. Someone sponsors someone and makes connections for you. It will appear that you make more money. But there is one thing that cannot be denied, that is, magic stones are not that easy to earn.

Generally speaking, it is a mixture of several novels. Many concepts are borrowed. I haven't seen anything new yet. At present, I can only say that it uses the template of the wizard style, mixes the setting of the mysterious disaster, and plagiarizes the school of the wizard.

The beginning of the first part is okay, but the second part has no idea what I'm talking about. I was confused and confused.

Spiritual World , the wizard cannot bear the spirituality, so the wizard is written down,

Good book, there is a magician in the wizarding world, it is just like the wizarding world, the faults do not hide the faults, I look forward to a more exciting future, don't be an eunuch, don't stop updating,

Although this is the author's first book, the writing style is a bit immature, which is understandable, but there are still some areas that he would like to improve. 1. There are too many repetitions. The same sentence appears two or three times in the same chapter, and a large number of the same adjectives such as "" are used, which makes people feel that the number of words is too low. 2. It always describes how the protagonist embarks on the path to the spiritual world. In fact, readers rarely pay attention to these settings. Even if they do, few people remember them. I hope that the writing focuses on describing the story of the protagonist's adventures in different worlds. (PS: Never write about traveling into the world of other film and television works, that is simply a poisonous weed). 3. When the protagonist is very powerful at this stage, you can focus on describing the supporting characters in the world invaded by the protagonist, such as his life experience and inner struggle, etc. You can create a full supporting character to highlight the strength of the protagonist.

Brothers, according to the camps of DND, which camp does the protagonist belong to?

As I say, just take advantage of the popularity of Baldur's Gate III and write about it, and there's definitely hope of becoming popular.

Why not you? Write about cultivating immortality

Come on update

? The protagonist is from the present and has traveled to the past. Why is he still envious of superior people?

Needless to say, it's a good book, don't you recommend it?

Convex - Convex, it's just a waste of time

The spirituality in the early stage is amazing when you are on the same path as a wizard, but after the next level, you don't know what to do! I don't know what to write, but I'm going to collapse as soon as I read it 😅

It's okay. It's a bit new in the wizarding stream. It's not like the other ones that are just chips and are stuck there.