Versatile Mage: This Is Tao Magic

A book that the author himself thinks is rubbish

Let's talk about the protagonist's cheats. It has been a month since the protagonist of the Thunder system was able to release magic, and the Shadow system has just started to practice. Five sublimation points can upgrade both systems to level three. Almost one sublimation point can upgrade one level, and one sublimation point can be obtained by killing a monster of the same level (last hit counts). How can you cultivate with such a high efficiency of killing monsters and upgrading? The most important thing is that the protagonist does not take the initiative to kill monsters. The few monsters he kills here and there are all monsters that accidentally hit his face in the security world. You must know that the protagonist's parents are both super mages, and his grandfather is an elder of the Mu clan with a profound background. He has the energy to reveal to his family a little bit about his ability to kill monsters and become stronger. He can ask his family to take the protagonist to kill monsters, and just kill the monsters and give the protagonist a last hit, which is extremely efficient. In the whole world, if you want to become stronger stably, you have to practice slowly. No matter how rich you are, it will take two or three years to reach the intermediate level. Spending money can only have an auxiliary effect. Upgrading is a process of hard work. The setting of the original book is very comfortable. When you give the protagonist a way to kill monsters and become stronger, the tone of the book has changed. That's it. There's nothing wrong with the article about killing monsters and upgrading. It's not that I don't read it. The key is that you have the ability to kill monsters easily, but you just don't use it. I'm really speechless. Originally, the background of the main character is good, and the so-called complete training system of body addition is also pretty good. This is enough. It is necessary to add a destructive setting for killing monsters and upgrading, and the key protagonist has not taken advantage of it. I don't understand what the author is thinking...

The main heroines are Lingling, Astraea, Xuexue, Jiaojiao, Ding Yumian, Apasi, and Sakya

It's hard to understand if a high-end game happens at the beginning of a beginner's game

There are skill points for killing monsters, but the protagonist just doesn't kill, and just suppresses the protagonist. I'm speechless.

Highly soluble

The protagonist does nothing but pretend. He is weak and does not show his strength. He pretends everywhere, for fear that others will not know him, and then kills his relatives. When the weak and powerful villains fight against high-powered villains, they still bring a drag bottle with them, for fear that they will not die.

Looking at this damn data, the author is like a eunuch visiting a brothel, unable to arouse interest.

Please be sure not to write the male protagonist as a Taoist priest.

Hey, the first order placed on the shelves

To be honest, why did you need to get a clone? It's quite embarrassing.

Taoist and magical powers that bear the skin of a full-time mage

First of all, the subject matter is very good. But I can't see your main plot, it's very confusing and difficult to read, and some chapters don't connect with each other, so I don't understand it.

I haven't written this one well, and I want to publish a new book. How many people do you think will read it?

Do you have any recommendations for better writing? The plot is a bit clear🌹🌹

There are almost 300 chapters, and there are only 81 comments. The quality of this book is a bit disappointing, but who would let a fan who is a full-time mage have the opportunity to come back and write the results of the poison test.

If you see dual series, just don't look at it, there is nothing new at all.

The protagonist is a good person and loves to play. He can't defeat a single warrior, so he goes to the magic city. . . . Ai Tutu, no matter what her background is, she still uses marriage, but she still thinks that she will fall in love with a piece of wood. The name of the skill is pretty good, and the performance is better than ordinary magic.

When will the author write about Zhang Zhiwei, under one person + full-time mage or full-time mage + monsters planned by Godzilla Emperor, can contract with them?

I just watched it not long ago. Are the protagonist's parents really dead?

Generally speaking, the writing of this book is neither too good nor too bad. The most important thing is that you can't grasp the newly created character, because I think it feels awkward. It really feels awkward. If you want to create a character who follows the protagonist for a long time, it is really difficult, very, very difficult. If you force the creation, this book is your best lesson.

Edi's new book "The Versatile Mage: The Crimson Arrival" Slow-burning genre, harem. The protagonist will be the future archangel, and the heroine is Saga, an angel couple.

Mu Ningxue, My Wife as a Full-time Mage, is pretty good

You can take a look at the context of Versatile Mage Star

Grandpa's death would be too easy, right? He's going to die now?

Everyone, this book has almost completely hit the market today. I am hesitating whether to cut the book and start a new one. The new book will still be about full-time mage, but Golden Finger will not be so big, and it will not be related to the cultivation of immortals.