Conan: Kexue Cartoonist Kudo Yuji

The writing was very good, but the protagonist and Toru Amuro seemed a bit gay. As a straight man, I was disgusted by the success, so I abandoned it. If it weren't for those plots, it would still be a good novel for me.

The author's writing is pretty good, but in terms of emotional drama, if there is a single heroine, then the two should not be arranged to like each other from the beginning. Some people may like this kind of competition, but I don't like it at all. If there is only one heroine, there will be no suspense. If two people want to choose one and abandon the other, then people like me will not like it very much. My personal preference is to want both, and I look forward to the author's opinion.

It's so cute, I like it so much, cheers to the author! 😊😊

Those who dare to have a harem in Conan are not afraid of death. They are really cruel people🐶

If you have a good relationship with Dr. A Li, let the doctor realize his dream. Don't keep a PhD waiting for ten years. Let's be with Kinoshita Fusae. You don't have to live together, it's okay to visit occasionally. I just watched the episode of The Promise Under the Ginkgo and it was very touching. Many novels do not help doctors realize their dreams. Dr. Bai Qi has been in pain for so many years.

How to put it, Yuji is liked by two girls, and these two girls are also best friends, which makes it feel awkward. I don't like this style very much, and it's not like the relationship between Shinichi, Xiaoran and Sonoko, which has the feeling of an ancient heroine and heroine.

No matter how you look at it, there is a feeling of dual heroines. Although it feels a bit inconsistent in Conan, it is acceptable. Although it feels that the protagonist will be knifed sooner or later.

I don't really like the two girls you created. They have no special features, so I've withdrawn them.

I couldn't stand it after reading more than 50 chapters, so I subscribed specifically to make a complaint. It's been two years since Kudo Shinichi turned into Hiroki and died. It's not a matter of time. He's either a system-flowing protagonist or an ordinary person. If you don't look at your own situation to save a genius who is written about by many parties in a novel, Kudo Shinichi's situation was concealed by many insiders. You don't think that no one can trace it, let alone the official investigation such as the FBI that you wrote, even his adoptive father spent money to find someone to find out under your pants.

Author, I advise you not to step on the trap. Either have a single female protagonist or a harem. If it is a harem, accept them all. If it is a single female protagonist, don't let the protagonist have an affair with other female supporting characters. It is a big surprise to flirt with other female characters but not accept them. If you make the female character popular and then reject the female character, just wait to be scolded by the fans. Of course, if you think it is exciting to dance in the minefield, then pretend I didn't say it

I'm convinced! It is simply outrageous that he is teasing his sister-in-law and also likes women's clothing.

①In fact, the initial identity of the protagonist is really attractive. Kudo Shinichi's younger brother: Kudo Yuji, who is the king in the beginning. ②The three original female characters that followed did not have any sense of "attraction" and were too hollow. As the plot progressed, you saw a cloud of mist and no so-called personality. Except for the Suzuki Hime, the emotional lines of the two women seemed to be inexplicably created. ③The name of the comic is the cartoonist Yuji Kudo. Except for the occasional interaction with Toru Amuro in the early stage, which is part of the comic, the protagonist, as a cartoonist, is more often like a mere identity card, and does not highlight him as a "creator". How about the world of Ke Xue? Instead, it jumps back and forth directly to the identity of "Superintendent" and "Organization". It is very different from what I thought at the beginning: Kudo Yuji acted as a porter and moved the comics from the original world to the world of Ke Xue, and became famous in the comics industry. This story is very different. ④The two characters, Conan and Kaito, reveal their hidden identities to the people around them, and even "get to know each other" in pairs, which makes subsequent cuts a lot of fun. The so-called detectives and phantom thieves are a battle of wits in solving and creating mysteries. ⑤The author still needs to refine his writing skills. In many cases, transitions are made through "dialogue" instead of environment or day-to-day transitions. This leads to the fact that when watching, you don't know that it is actually the "second day" conversation. There is too little description of the environment, which is similar to a light novel with a strong description method, leaving only the feeling of dialogue. ⑥ Going back to the third point, the author actually has one thing that he can write well. As a cartoonist, because the copyright is related to the organization, it creates a lot of profits for the organization and cannot be killed. This point really shines in my eyes. But later on, when Belmode joined the organization, this made me feel that I had entered the "old solid circle" again, because this setting is too common in other novels. After joining, it is nothing more than my "want everything and protect them all" style, which is too common. There is a saying that goes well: Even if you are a time traveler, even if you are familiar with the plot, you are not omniscient and omnipotent. When you think you can grasp the overall situation, you are already arrogant and underestimate everyone.

Author, don't write the title "Cartoonist"... The title of your script should be "Is there something wrong with my pursuit of a harem in the world of Conan" & "Who falls in love after being reborn in Conan City" so that your audience will be interested. I read more than 20 chapters and the male protagonist started having an affair in elementary school. You also said that the female protagonist might be really pure (actually I only started reading after seeing this). Then I saw someone posted a comment asking the female protagonist, do you answer "double female protagonists"? I couldn't sit still and quickly read the comment area. It seemed that I was rushing. I didn't care about the original two-heroine heroine. Seeing the dual heroine, one of the heroines is Ai, and the single heroine Ai, the others are ambiguous losers, so I tolerated it. I didn't expect Ai to be one of them. And your characterization is completely incomparable to Aibi (at least I didn't notice it from the part I watched). If one of the heroines is Lan, I can accept it, because Lan is too abstract. (Referring to the original work) I can't accept it at all, especially since I couldn't find the cartoonist after reading for a while. It's just a background board... For me, cartoons can account for %20 instead of %5, otherwise there is no need to fill in the cartoonist in the title, which will appear top-heavy.

I really can't understand the latest chapters. I don't have the ability to solve the problem of the organization, but my identity is exposed to many people. It's very confusing. Moreover, in the latest update of Kaori, he looks silly and sweet. Suddenly, the reader's favorability of this character has dropped by more than half. What, author, you want to take him offline?

Normally I don't give negative reviews, but after reading chapter 62, my evaluation is that it's worse than chicken ribs, and chicken ribs can also chew some meat, which is really delicious. The description of the relationship between the characters is Hiroki, Shinichi, and Amuro are okay. I can live with these three people. Who can I find a heroine?

Well, the author said before that he hasn't decided who the heroine will be. Has it been decided now? After all, I watched a Conan being tortured by the Lan Party and the Sad Party in a battle, and I didn't want to read a Conan fan novel and be tortured by two parties. . . As for why I didn't choose to include them all, it's because the content of the story is limited. If there are too many emotional scenes, there will be fewer other scenes. If there are two female protagonists having dual emotional scenes, there will be much less other content. So I might as well just watch a movie about picking up girls in the city, and there is no need to look for Conan fans to watch it.

I choose Touko as the heroine 😌

I don't know if the author can see it, but the title of this book is one of the best in fan fiction. I thought it was very good at the beginning, but it felt so confusing later on, and it was forced into the black square. Moreover, he is the younger brother of Gongteng Shinichi. Even if he knows Karasuma Qianjin, Gin and the others don't check him out. If they don't check him, there is no sense of violation. There are still two female protagonists, Xiao Ai is clinging to a female gei, and Xiaolan's identity is exposed to Xiaolan in just a few dozen chapters, and she is teasing the red side with Sister Bei. It feels so chaotic. The main plot and the branch plot black side forcibly subdue the wits, and the balance is broken. I stopped reading after 120 chapters. I feel that there are many unfinished chapters and the writing is not long. Why do you come here to comment on the author's chosen topic? It is very attractive to me. I hope the author can write a good next book.

What about comics? It's not what I thought Relying on a whole life to attract people will never last long If you can't write the emotional drama, you don't have to write it. When the emotional drama is removed from the novel, it will be more fluent, which shows that the emotional drama is used to reduce the word count.

The emotional scene is so weird, I said it in a deliberately cheesy way. If one or two pairs are not bad, why are they all there? Also, Belmode forcibly kissing Mao Lilan is such a weird operation!

In any case, thank you, Mr. Yamazaki and Kana, and thank your works for accompanying me in my life for more than 20 years. Goodbye, Sister Xiaolan, whom I first met on TV.

This work will not be interrupted. Due to Conan Review and family reasons, I stopped updating it for half a year in the first half of this year. It is expected to restart in September in the second half of the year. However, considering work reasons, I will only update three to four chapters a week, with each chapter containing more than 1,000 words. Alas, it is no longer the time to relax in college... Readers, you can rest assured that I will finish writing this story. Although the writing style is not very good, I will definitely give it an ending.

No one left? ………………

"So the little girl was beaten into the swimming pool with an electric shock device that could stun an adult, and then she drowned. This was a murder, not an ordinary prank." The school principal and various teachers in the school are still helping to cover up. As the alma mater of the current Osaka headmaster, this is simply showing the world the depravity of Osaka, and it is also the best excuse for both governments to launch attacks at the same time. Watching Hattori Heiji angrily walk out of Kamisuke's house, Brother Kudo shook his head sadly at the same time, simulating the entire incident in his mind. First of all, the students in the class bullied the three Ono people, including Matsuki and Kamisuke to a certain extent. The students bought electric shock bears for pranks, but they did not expect that the bears accidentally got into the hands of the daughter of the class teacher, Mr. Uchitake. During the process of passing the bear, someone tampered with the bear, modified the micro electric shock device inside and replaced it with a powerful instrument that could knock down an adult man, which led to the tragedy. "The book says that after the death of Teacher Naizhu, people in the class were still bullying them, and there was no improvement at all." Conan looked at the small yard of Shangsuke's house, and the method mentioned in the diary seemed to have changed from verbal to physical. "Teacher Uchitake resigned within a few days, and Sousuke also began to live at home." The second homeroom teacher was a male teacher named Aingguchi. During his tenure, he visited Sousuke's home many times. However, judging from the news Hattori received just now, before he persuaded Sousuke to return to school, Matsuki accused Aishuke of inappropriate behavior toward her. "That's why he was fired from the school after only a few days of working. But the day after he resigned, Matsu Takafei's body was found in the school's sports equipment warehouse." Kudo Yuji pointed at the Osaka police who were still in front of Jousuke's house. From Matsu Taka's death until this Xicheng District explosion, there were no other victims, so the police probably closed the case hastily. "How come decades have passed and the police in Osaka have become like this?" "In a city that neither seeks refuge in Toto nor Hokuto, how many people do you think will come here, and who are these people?" Kudo Yuji walked to a police car on the side of the road, took out his public security card and asked the other party to hand the car to him, and then took Conan aboard. Che: "The answer is, there are all kinds of people." "According to your opinion, treating your hometown as one's toy is the best responsibility for it. If others are happy, they will move it, and if they are not happy, they will throw it aside as tatters." Hattori Heiji's head poked out from the back seat, with a cigarette hanging from his mouth. "My toys are all in the cabinet." Kudo Yuji glanced at the time: "The doll on the hand of Mr. Uchitake's daughter, have you tested the fingerprints again?" "Otaki was at the headquarters just now. The laboratory called me and told me that several people's fingerprints were found, the most common were Ono's, then Kamisuke, Mr. Uchitake and her daughter." Hattori Heiji exhaled smoke from his nose and switched back and forth between the test report and the transcript on his phone. "The fingerprints of those bullies were not found, and Matsuki's did not exist. The fingerprints of this kind of stuffed toy are very difficult to clean. Excluding Uchitake himself, the murderer is probably between Kamisuke and Ono." "Then Ono is very likely, who knows that Kamisuke is already dead." Yuji held the steering wheel, He tapped his finger on the leather: "Teacher Uchitake will appear where Sasaki Kiyose is hiding. I think she may be able to see the true cause of her daughter's death." "Then why didn't she seek help from the police?" Conan glanced at Hattori through the rearview mirror. Although he already had the answer in his heart, he still had to ask. "Didi, didi." Hattori Heiji's cell phone rang. He casually lit the cigarette butt on the car door frame, then connected the phone and put it to his ear. "Minister Aoyama disappeared in Xicheng District, and Minister Kazami is making a big fuss here." "Drive him back, and then have people take all the students in Ono's class to the police headquarters, arrange supervision, and isolate them from each other." Hattori sat back and closed his eyes.

It's rare to see a work that I like, so I don't have any comments later so I'll post my thoughts. Personally, I have a high level of acceptance, and I'm not very picky. Apart from some men and women who suddenly pop up, there's actually no big problem. The main story is very thoughtful, and I like it very much. In terms of writing, I feel that it often jumps around from different viewpoints without clear markings. It is always too discrete and I often feel like I don't know who said this sentence. When I read it, I will suddenly jump out of my mind. The sense of sinking is not enough, and it becomes scattered and messy in reading. Some chapters are like this, and some are not bad. Overall, it is a problem of writing. Many chapters are quite good. (I'm not a professional, just my personal opinion) A little book review: Heroine: 2 originals + Haihara Ai. To be honest, it should be marked on the work. Many people will be disgusted with the originals, so maybe it would be better to add them. Xiao Ai joined in the middle and late stages, and there is relatively little plot in the middle, so it is acceptable to update the novel daily. The easiest entry point for Conan's story is Xiao Ai and the Suzuki Zaibatsu. The organization and the Zaibatsu are inseparable. This book has a good entry point, but the original female character only has the help of the grandfather. There are too few scenes, which is a pity. Originally, the original work has magic, and the addition of the iron sword is quite interesting. I personally think that Suzuki Yuko and several original or damn characters are good. It would be better if the past and future chapters can be clicked back. Compared with the original comic line, it is a lot more interesting, but the chapters have become longer, and many people did not follow it that long. I saw the past article and came to subscribe to support it. It is original and thoughtful, and I like it very much. It gradually changed the protagonist from a relaxed one to a story-telling one, but it should be much more difficult to write. The other thing is, I personally think it is better for Conan to be exposed as early as possible. Compared with the original work's reason for coming back (obviously very suspicious), Xiaolan's part has a more story to write, and it is not interesting to follow the original work. I personally like the author's approach. I really thought that organizing the elimination game was as simple as concealing it. The original work also wrote it. Without Shirley and Belmod who may be working hard later, Dr. Kudo Mori should have been wiped out long ago. I have written a lot after writing. Overall, the story is very thoughtful. The few Conan books I have read are very good. It is rare that I wanted to support it, only to find out that the update has been stopped for a month. Alas... It is quite a pity. I saw that there are no comments today, so I left a message. I just want to support the author. Thank the author for his creation.