Myriad Worlds: The Transfer Student at Hogwarts

After reading dozens of chapters, I can summarize: The author is a young writer, but not of that level. So what is reflected is this embarrassing situation of being neither good nor bad, wanting plot but not plot, and wanting writing style but not writing style. However, it can be regarded as an enlightening reading for readers with low cultural level or those who have just read online novels. At least there's no noob vibe.

This book is free to read. As long as you pay a penny, your family will have money

The protagonist's combat power goes up and down, his character goes up and down, and sometimes he is too accommodating to the characters in the plot. Zhu Tianliu's writing like this can only mean that you are happy. Just jump and read them as independent stories, and you can keep watching as long as the plots match up.

I hope the author can write about the leisure and indifference of God, rather than the idea of ​​being a nanny.

I can't even recommend it if I don't follow up on it. Dear brothers, please try not to keep books. I beg you, if you have any comments, you can give them and I will try my best to change them.

Writing alternately, it feels like both worlds are sketched out, lacking the ups and downs of the story, making it a bit flat.

The protagonist written by this author is a eunuch. In other words, more than 90% of the protagonists in the novels on Qidian Chinese website are now eunuchs. And he always shows off his sense of superiority inexplicably, and his writing is as dull as water.

This protagonist has no charm. He grows up in an instant. He only takes profits without taking responsibility. I only read Chapter 30. It is said that the protagonist just picked up an artifact along the way. Whether the world can be restarted in the future is none of his business... Then you have already predicted that this artifact is an observer and is related to the world. You took it away. How can you say it has nothing to do with you? You just passed by and took away the artifact. How cheap.

Is the author contaminated by the evil god? It's all nonsense.

I spent money to order a hundred chapters, but I still don't understand what the author wanted to write, or maybe the author was just enjoying himself from beginning to end. Zhu Tianwen now has quite a starting point. In fact, it seems that the core selling point is Xiao Baiwen's three-point axe. One is: Picking up girls, the other: Pretending, and the other: Spoofing. Using picking up girls as a selling point is like the king next door, with dozens of harems, just one word is cool; using pretense as a selling point is like Chen Laomo, everyone knows it; using spoofing as a selling point, to be honest, it actually tests the author's skill and imagination. A thing with only creativity and no content is about the same as toilet paper. If you play the above points well, you will be the second short Xiaofeng, another great god in Zhutianliu. This book, I want a woman but not a woman, the protagonist in hundreds of chapters keeps his body as pure as a jade, don't ask, even the magicians are all eunuchs. To show off or not, Marvel is dealing with Eternal Stan Lee and others, and the next chapter will be about dozens of chapters about Harry Potter's bitch. Need some imagination, haha. Then the question is, you pinned it to the top of the comment area to ask others for suggestions, so what do you think is the selling point of your book?