I Took One Thing to the Extreme

While reading this novel, a thought suddenly occurred to me: the protagonist has the ability to quantify skills, so why only quantify flying needles and pouring vinegar? Actions like holding a bowl, serving food, picking up vegetables, walking, sleeping, and breathing could also be quantified as skills, right? This is clearly a bug. So how do we avoid this bug?

The protagonist's cheat-like abilities are well-developed, but the kidnapping plot was rushed; the protagonist's first real battle was only briefly mentioned. The protagonist's change in mindset doesn't align with common sense. For example, if I practiced archery for two days, I'd be thinking of shooting anything and everything, even wolves and tigers becoming imaginary enemies.

Well, just my personal opinion. The beginning was great; the protagonist kept practicing and improving. But then he took money to pretend to be a boyfriend, got kidnapped, killed someone, and joined an organization. It felt really awkward. What started as the protagonist showing off suddenly turned into an organization, one that most people didn't even know about.

As soon as the protagonist gains some ability, mysterious organizations and superhuman beings start popping up everywhere; it's been the same formula for over a decade.

Pouring vinegar can trigger skill proficiency, so why can't walking, breathing, climbing stairs, or talking? There should at least be a trigger condition. Why do some skills work and others don't? Is it all just something the author makes up?

The author also considers killing six bandits to be self-defense. Why then does it say that he should bear criminal responsibility and go to jail, and that he must be blessed with good fortune to obtain a pardon? It is recommended to look at the definition of the self-defense clause.

This is likely the author's first novel. It's a bit disorganized, as if the author got carried away while writing, but the language and expression are somewhat problematic, making it a bit difficult for readers.

It all started with a kidnapping and murder, and everything became shrouded in mystery, with a sudden shift in tone.

The setup is good, but the rest is insignificant.

It's not that there's no main storyline, but it's clear there's no outline, which makes it easy for the story to fall apart.