I Took One Thing to the Extreme

While reading this novel, I suddenly had an idea. The protagonist has the ability to digitize his skills, so why is he only digitizing the flying needle and pouring vinegar? Behaviors such as holding a bowl, making rice, picking up vegetables, walking, sleeping, breathing, etc. Can also be converted into skills through data. There is obviously a bug here. So how to avoid bugs? We can set the skill digitization not to be passive, but to be actively operated by the protagonist. In order to avoid too many hang-ups, add mana consumption and CD to this active operation. The energy of digitized skills can be set to increase over time or by sunbathing, eating, exercising, etc. This active operation is called "breaking the limit", which means that digitized skills can break through conventional limits. For example, when the flying needle skill is super high, it can penetrate a 50-meter-thick steel plate🐶. It can even break the limit twice, break the limit three times, etc., And nail it through the earth with one needle🐶. How about it? Is this idea a good idea?

The setting of Goldfinger is good, but the plot of the kidnapper is advanced too hastily, and the protagonist's first serious battle is only a few words. The protagonist's mentality changes are not consistent with his cognition. For example, I practiced bowing for two days and shot him an arrow at everything I could think of. Jackals, tigers and leopards became imaginary enemies. The protagonist's skills are equivalent to carrying a pistol with unlimited bullets that can hit the target without being discovered. You can imagine how unscrupulous the protagonist will be in the early stage. He is armed with sharp weapons and is eager to kill. He can also be bluffed by several business kidnappers. I am speechless.

Well, let me tell you my personal opinion. Originally, it was pretty good in the beginning. The protagonist kept practicing and then improved. As a result, he later received money to pretend to be a boyfriend, was kidnapped, killed, and then joined the organization. It feels very awkward. It was originally the protagonist's pretense, but an organization suddenly appeared and ordinary people didn't know about it. It feels like dreaming back ten years. I feel like I can write a lot more content by expanding the protagonist's skills upgrading.

The protagonist has just started to gain some skills, and some mysterious organization with superhuman beings appears. The same routine has remained unchanged for more than ten years.

Pouring vinegar can trigger skill proficiency, why can't things like walking, breathing, going upstairs and talking? You must at least have a trigger condition, so that some things work and some don't, so it's all up to the author to make them up.

Regarding the killing of six gangsters, the author also believed that it was self-defense. Why did he say that he still had to be held criminally responsible and imprisoned? He also had to join Tai Sui to obtain a pardon. He suggested taking a look at the definition of the self-defense clause.

This should be the author's first novel, and the writing is a bit messy. It feels like the author got a kick out of writing it himself, but there are some problems with language expression, which makes it a bit difficult for us readers to read.

Starting from the kidnapping and murder, it is foggy and unclear, and the painting style changes suddenly.

The settings are good, nothing else is worth mentioning.

I can't say that there is no main plot, but it can be seen that there is no outline and it will easily collapse.