Coiling Dragon: Huo Dan

I heard that the author is working on the next book, so I would like to give you a little suggestion. In fact, those who read Panlong are probably middle-aged people. Some people like the protagonist Lin Lei, some people like the world view of Panlong, and some people do it because of feelings and so on. Middle-aged people are generally not that passionate and hateful, and those who read novels are generally more Buddhist. You can make the timeline a little longer, don't become a god in a hundred years, or achieve perfection in a thousand years, it will be a little more reasonable. Don't look down on this and that junior high school student. You can be passionate, but it is based on the premise of ensuring your life. It is a waste of your life to fight against others at every turn. You can be detached, but you have to be reasonable. In fact, you don't have to be detached. The Panlong Universe is actually very big, and it is enough to live for hundreds of millions of years. If you want to write about becoming the Great Perfection before becoming the main god, it is best not to become a bloodline of mythical beasts or the like. There is basically no such thing in the Coiling Dragon World, and then you can use some cheats. Without cheats, I think it is unreasonable for ordinary people to become a holy realm. . Also, don't always want to return to the earth and regard it as a goal. One is that someone else has written it badly, and the other is that a world that has lived for decades, can you compare emotions with someone who has lived for thousands of years? In fact, you can go back and take a look after transcending. In fact, the biggest obsession of most Chinese people is to become a master. . . Unchanged from time immemorial. I hope I can write about Panlong World well.

Talking about the family's help and care, the one who was taken care of was not the protagonist himself, but Huo Dan before he was transported through time. Killing the enemy is enough to help as much as possible, but must we fight to the end? To be honest, the protagonist has not had any communication with the family so far. Are you going to help lei? What benefit does killing all the four divine beast families bring to the protagonist? What ability does the protagonist have to kill all the four divine beast families? Knowing that there is a main god protecting the four divine beast families, can Dzogchen be stronger than the main god?

First of all, thank you all for reading my book. Just like what I wrote in the wedge, I write books to leave some traces. Because it has been written, the only thing left is polishing, correcting typos, or changing some plot points that I think are not very good. But major changes are absolutely impossible. I know that Panlong is a classic, so some book friends cannot tolerate certain mistakes. As long as you are not eccentric, you are welcome to correct me. I will correct it when I see it, and try my best to make everyone happy. This can be considered a bug-catching interaction. I'm not afraid to tell everyone that I have a formal job and can fish for long hours. The standard schedule is nine to six plus two weekends, and I follow the country's regulations. I'm not showing off. Just to make everyone less angry. If I don't post it, I won't be scolded at all. I can also print it out and keep it in my home, or show my friends what I've done, which adds to the fun. I understand that everyone likes to see outstanding fans of their favorite books, but since my first book has been published, even if it is wrong, I will just correct it. This is also a kind of growth, isn't it? Also, since it is a fanfic, it relies on the settings of the original work. Sometimes in order to advance the plot or make the logic more reasonable, some settings will be changed. This is also a kind of fanfic. Sometimes if you copy it completely, the framework will be where it is, and it will be difficult to write what you want. Writing a book is to write out the world in your heart. So sometimes I will change some settings. If you don't like it, you can also leave your idea. If it is reasonable, I will accept it. Writing a book at the same time cannot completely satisfy everyone's wishes. There will always be people who are dissatisfied, and it doesn't matter. Just like eating vegetables, some people like spicy food, some people like sweet food, everyone has their own taste. This is life. I am already writing the next one, and there will be no problem every day. It includes Tang Dynasty, Jiuding, God Killer, Coiling Dragon, Swallowing Starry Sky, The Wilderness, etc. I have written 130,000 words so far. I write books very special. Sometimes I think of some themes and jump into writing, and finally connect them into a story, so sometimes mistakes are inevitable. If there are any mistakes, please correct me. You can also leave a message below and I will reply when I have time.

Is the latest chapter funny? Has the protagonist really seen Panlong? If you make this request, why don't you go to Hongmeng with detachment? What is the Supreme God? That is the manifestation of Panlong's rules. He can only handle Panlong's affairs. If you ask like this, it makes us think that the protagonist is mentally retarded.

I'm speechless. I don't know that the author has made several mistakes. First of all, there is the issue of the strength of the Great Perfection. To give a simple example, the original Lei Jing Lin Lei and his party were unable to fight back when Baier was tortured. The main reason is that at this time Lei Jing was the peak Shura and used the power of the same main god, and it was with him. He was tortured when several Shuras joined forces, which means that Dzogchen will be a hundred times stronger even when facing the peak Shura using the power of the Lord God. If the power of the Lord God is used at the same time, it means that Dzogchen will be 10,000 times stronger than the normal peak Shura. This is not an exaggeration at all. When an ordinary Shura faces Dzogchen, without the main artifact of soul defense, it can only be solved with a soul attack. Without the main artifact of material defense, it can be solved with just one physical attack. And the protagonist just faced the cooperation of several Shura and was injured. It is also said that Dzogchen, who is not good at soul defense, is in danger of falling? Their soul attacks couldn't be combined. How did they overcome the ten thousand times gap? Don't forget that the power of will is powerful in all aspects. Using the power of will to defend, Lin Lei Longhua will only be scratched. If you want to kill the same Dzogchen, you need to be at least ten times or even a hundred times stronger than the normal Dzogchen. Finally, the gap between the main god and Dzogchen is infinite. Even Dzogchen cannot observe the movement of the main god. The protagonist is only a Dzogchen if he is strong. Do you still want to watch the main god fight?

It turns out that you think that the upper gods can kill those guys of the main god, but you don't think that the lower main gods only have five more will power than the Great Perfection, right?

Just finished the day, let's chat casually! Many people say that since the author has finished writing, why not read and update it? Are you lying? Although I also have this idea, I can definitely tell you here that I am not lying, I have really finished writing it. And there is no benefit in lying to everyone. The people who are cheated will eventually leave. The reasons for not updating more are: first, it is my first book after all. I want to keep it alive for a longer time, and I also want more people to see my book. After all, if it is just for self-admiration, then there is no need for me to upload it. The second thing is that I am writing the second book, so I need to save more manuscripts first to avoid any interruption. And when I write a book, when I think of an interesting plot, I immediately want to write it down. I just skip writing and finally connect the short stories together. I can't help but sometimes my thoughts are too fast. And I also want to give the best presentation of what I think of. It can make everyone smile. This book is worth it. If you don't like it, it doesn't matter. Just mark the x in the upper right corner and go find what you like. People coming and going, it's very normal. There are a lot of unreasonable things in this book, but I think I can still stand up straight after being beaten. Just point it out if you are wrong. There is no need to be so aggressive. As I said before, if I can change it, I will change it. If I really can't, I will keep it as a mistake to remind myself. I don't think you will like it if you talk so much nonsense. I will update more from time to time depending on the situation. The next book will still have the world of Panlong, but then the writing will be changed, and there may not even be any interaction with the protagonist. You are all welcome to come back then. The evening of March 6, 2023

The author wrote that the four divine beasts have nothing to do with Lin Lei, so I thought that the eight major families have nothing to do with the protagonist. There is no benefit in forcing him to do it despite the risk of being targeted by the two main gods. I really am not afraid of Lin Lei's soul mutating and refining the main god to transcend. Of course, the protagonist has the author's perspective and I didn't say it, but no matter what, either don't get involved or eradicate it. In my opinion, either kill Lin Lei or don't touch the four divine beast families.

To be honest, the intention is very good, but from a hostile perspective. I hope I can keep writing and not mess with outrageous elements.

Huo Dan is not very good. After all, Huo Dan has too much talent, and he has also refined his godhead to become a god.