Heroic Spirit Summoning: The History Only I Know

I suddenly remembered a big bug. Can't those heroic spirits communicate history? Or are those heroic spirits mute or unconscious?

The writing of reality is too bad, but the writing of the dungeon world is very good. I don't think you need to dwell on reality. It's not like there are no novels about purely simulated worlds. Your writing of reality is too awkward, and the contrast with the dungeon world is too obvious.

The real world is poorly stitched, but the dungeon world is well written.

I thought it was the style of Zhenhun Street, but I didn't expect that the focus behind it would be to simulate history. It's a pity for such a theme.

Let me talk about the current situation. The overall dungeon is quite interesting, but the external combat power of the dungeon has been somewhat broken. Secondly, many mythical heroes are rushing for you to simulate, which makes the hero's performance drop. Furthermore, these simulations are actually very messy, without a systematic arrangement, contract type. Novel, whether it is about beast control or historical figures, is all about the cooperation of a team. You are so messy and disorderly in summoning, just relying on historical status to randomly summon, I don't know what the meaning is, and you are just writing now, the battle power has collapsed in the early stage, and you really don't know what to write in the later stage? Summon the gods? In fact, it can be considered from the perspective of the entire team. A team first has a commander who can be the protagonist or a summoned character, the second injury-resistant type, which is also a popular human shield, the third assassin type, the fourth warrior type, and the fifth nanny Don't keep summoning myths and legends, you have to consider the integrity of the team. You have Qin Shihuang, and you summon Zhu Yuanzhang and Liu Bang. These are equivalent to real characters. They are all self-centered characters. Do you feel that they can be together? Will they cooperate in fighting? A soldier is a soldier. A general is a general, a commander is a commander, and logistical support is logistical support. You are a team. In the later stage, you can have many teams, but in the early stage, you need to let the protagonist work hard to assemble a team, set up obstacles, and summon heroes. If you are so casual, you can only do it one by one. In the end, the novel becomes a running story, and the protagonist becomes Long Aotian. There may be something wrong, it's just my personal understanding.

I don't know why, but the comments are not reviewed, so I have to write a few hundred words of essay in vain, which is very annoying. In short, this book Advantages: The second similar book after Heroes of Heroes, it has continued to gain popularity. Disadvantages: First, it is not an original version, it is all historical originals. At the beginning, the virtual version Zhang Jiao was a loser. The widely popular version of the Three Kingdoms, readers want to see how to reverse it. Unfortunately, the later emperor versions are highly overlapping, and they are all winners. Watching the protagonist break the game has become watching the protagonist Long Aotian, completely losing the original readers. Over and over again, it is the Five Hegemons of the Spring and Autumn Period, hundreds of schools of thought, and the emperor version that everyone is familiar with. So what does the protagonist do? Become a child prodigy and be crushed all the way? Second, the description of the world view is incomplete and incomplete. The appearance of high-level NPCs in the real world has no character. The first high-level NPC master chapter is not sufficiently depicted and his sense of existence is quickly occupied by the appearance of the second master. The inexplicable appearance of high-level NPCs causes huge cracks in the entire world description. The map world makes people feel like a small town. Third, the establishment of the Yuling Warrior system feels perfunctory. For example, what is the wet nurse system? You think Zhang Zhongjing recovered just by touching him? Are warriors at any stage the same? It's just baffling. This perception is particularly prominent in this competition between the two worlds. Not to mention the bloody competition between the two worlds that appeared just after entering the warrior stage, it feels a bit inexplicable (just think of two world competitions suddenly appearing in infants and young children. Will there be more such competitions in the later stages?) What kind of half-step saint appears in the infant stage of the demon? If I remember correctly, I want to ask what the hell is this? Do you want to see the half-step Dacheng Holy Body reigning over the world? I really have to complain. Fourth, the system depicted in the virtual world is too messy, a complete suture monster. The systems that appear in it and are not clearly described include but are not limited to the warrior system, the literati talent system, the Taoist system, and the emperor's dragon energy system. They are not expanded and written. Every time they are described on the surface, they are gone. You can't write a unified hierarchy for these systems? Fifth, I don't know if the author is from a historical background and likes to write about emperors, but what readers want to see is how the protagonist breaks the situation, not Long Aotian in the virtual world. Your virtual fantasy system cannot be said to be a mess. It is outrageous that all those virtual historical figures are conscious, have their own palaces, and can give the protagonist a chance independently. Didn't you say that you are the only one who knows the history? No one else knows, so how did these famous historical figures appear and live in the "World of Heroes"? According to what you wrote, these heroic spirits all exist independently, and they can see and choose people independently? So what is your contract signing system? Why would they sign up with ordinary people? Isn't it good for people to live well in the world of heroes? The relationship between the world of heroic spirits and the human world is not clearly written at all. Do these heroic spirits insist on getting involved in your human affairs? If I were a heroic spirit, I would care whether you live or die. To be honest, I didn't understand when I saw the update. What is the relationship between this "World of Heroic Spirits" and the protagonist's "World of Heroic Spirits"? Zhang Jiao can actually communicate with Yu Ji (has this Yu Ji signed a contract? Or is it purely wild?). Is this Yu Ji coming to your house and escaping? Or can your heroic spirit run around? Or can the entire heroic spirit consciousness be connected together? These historical figures can control the way of heaven and force their own experiences onto the protagonist. This thing is not random. It is completely off the mark. It is still random at the beginning. Later, I will just take the settings. If you start the emperor, you can force it on, but you can even force it on Adou. I don't know what I am writing. It also allows these virtual characters to watch at any time (there is even a system of heaven and earth here), which is a complete mess. Read it for yourself. I hate it now. I am a fully subscribed reader of the book "Ying Ling". I couldn't read it for some reason. I was already mentally uncomfortable. I found this book yesterday and started reading it excitedly. The novelty at the beginning gradually faded away with several books and competitions in the real world. I don't even know what you wrote about the last Qin Shihuang. Did I come to see how you depicted various characters in the book of Qin Shihuang? It collapsed into a mess. Let's see if the author can write better in the next book. Genuine readers write it with their heart, and hope they will read it with their heart. Spray lightly.

After writing Zhu Yuanzhang, I hope the author can think carefully about the follow-up. I am really tired of writing about emperors and rebellions. If I want the world to be unified, I only need those few tricks. I have written it over and over again so many times. I need to change it to something else.

Except for Zhang Jiao, everything is normal history and I will refund my coins🤗🤗

I have ideas, but no thinking or writing skills

This book has the biggest bug. You can contract with heroic spirits, and you can talk to heroic spirits - is it so difficult to restore history?