Teyvat: Undercover in Snezhnaya

The idea is excellent, but the details are clumsy. Example 1: In Mondstadt, someone made a contract with the Geo Archon, who actually responded, then casually tore it up without any consequences. This detail is incredibly stupid. Example 2: The Wind God is just ahead, and you're talking about him there, even shushing him! What are you shushing about? The Wind God, the Wind God!

Why not just stay a Fool's Club? Why become a Mondstadt spy? They don't even treat you like a human being. Why should you? You're not a native. What gratitude? They adopted you just to infiltrate their ranks. Isn't this different from human traffickers kidnapping people to be their special cases? Grateful my foot! Would you thank someone who sent you into darkness?

If you call yourself a conspiracy theorist, you're oversimplifying Mondstadt; if you call yourself a non-conspiracy theorist, you're portraying the Church of Favonius and the Knights of Favonius as too dark. Mondstadt actually has at least two more Demon God-level fighters, Abedo and Iris, including Wenditvalin, and Andrius also possesses the strength of a Demon God's familiar.

I'm hoping the protagonist will directly join the Fatui, rebel against Mondstadt, and personally extract Venti's Divine Heart.

Those spoiled brats in Mondstadt aren't worth protecting. If it were me, and my family wasn't yet in the hands of the Mondstadt secret police, then my position would determine my fate. Even the protagonist has become a diplomat; frankly, I'll wait until the lady dies and see if I can climb the ranks a bit. After watching Joy of Life, falling for someone from Mondstadt makes you wonder if you've been set up.

Actually, rebelling against Mondstadt is a viable option. It's essentially like the person who saved the protagonist's life being driven to despair by Mondstadt's higher-ups. Then, the protagonist caused so much trouble for Mondstadt; they've already repaid their debts to Mondstadt. Rebellion would be reasonable.

The classic Yura fan's self-doubt is like this: on one hand, they say Lawrence will betray Mondstadt, while on the other hand, they whitewash Lawrence, saying he's pitiful and his current situation is all thanks to the Knights of Favonius. It's like how Yura fans simultaneously call for Yura's buffs while criticizing others' skills and character levels when they think Yura is weak. In any case, Yura fans can maintain their own logic, but it's truly hard for ordinary players to believe.

It's very well-written and the plot is very tight, which is why I'm more worried that it might be abandoned.

There are many loopholes; the timeline doesn't match, and the events are incorrect.

I'm done with this. They messed up the settings. The protagonist can go toe-to-toe with Falgar, but he can't even beat a servant?