Immortal, I Have Mediocre Qualifications

Good books, good books for me. It can arouse my emotions and I don't feel panicked when I look at it. It's been a few months since I started having sex for free. First time depositing money. Come on, author!

I really appreciate Chen Sheng's indifference, which is also in line with the perspective of a long-term view of the world. I look forward to the next plot, hoping to reveal the extraordinary things in the world of cultivation.

It's well written. I personally think the relationships between the characters are not too abrupt and the characters' personalities are also very good. Come on, author!

This author simply didn't grasp the joy of longevity flow. In my opinion, there are two schools of immortality style. The first one is the immortality style. For example, the former Qiye King, a dog raised a hundred thousand years ago became the demon emperor. He saved a little girl 80,000 years ago and became the empress. He accepted a disciple 50,000 years ago and became the ancestor. This kind of style uses one's own network to continuously advance the plot and uses contrast methods to show that the protagonist is awesome. This is the pretend invincibility style, which pays great attention to character relationships and the protagonist's personality. The second type is completely opposite to the first type. It starts from the weak. It mainly describes the jungle of the world of immortality, which is surrounded by dangers. It mainly focuses on a sense of crisis. The protagonist is an ordinary immortal cultivator with ordinary qualifications. By describing the protagonist's moral behavior, he uses immortality to sit back and watch the world rise and fall. It mainly describes the protagonist's friends and enemies who die one by one. If they can't beat you, you will be tortured to death. The cool part is dancing on the grave.

I went out for a walk on the second level of Qi training. It was really amazing, but I kept emphasizing how powerful my state of mind was.

To be honest, the writing was very, very good at the beginning, very touching and attractive. But since entering the Black Prison, it has started to plummet. At the beginning, I wrote about the five great immortal sects. Sitting high up on the edge and watching the clouds rise and rise, I have a transcendent temperament. As a result, there were a lot of people in the black prison who had terrifying and powerful inheritances who were reluctant to kill. With so many powerful inheritances here, how did the overlords of the Five Immortal Sects manage to do so for so many years? Is their inheritance really that good? So attractive? Forget it. I thought that the helpless person of Xianzong who refused to speak up was some kind of tough character. As a result, the protagonist broke through their psychological defenses and obtained the inheritance in just three or two moves. Good guy, those people in law enforcement and prisons are all useless. Forget it, not much to say 😔 It seems that it's time to take care of it for a while after subscribing. I'll take a look at it after the plot of Black Prison is over.

It is written about Gou Dao, who goes out to practice on the second level of Qi training.

The book quality is mediocre, I will read it a hundred years later

You really don't need to read it. It's really broken when you get out of the border area. Just like those novels in the past, the combat power is completely broken. The big boss in the border area can't even compare with a small escort. There are so many golden elixirs in one city. Let me give you an example. Although Liaoning is poor, it can't compare with Jiangsu and Zhejiang, but the richest man in Liaoning is richer than a small boss in Suzhou.

Wouldn't it be possible to practice after Rouran died? Why didn't Rou Ran be killed? Why did he keep emphasizing that Chen Lian couldn't practice? There was no explanation in the book, so it was very confusing.

The first chapter says: My golden finger means immortality, and I am not afraid of the ruthlessness and cruelty of cultivating immortals. Why are you not afraid of the cruelty of cultivating immortals? Funny? I haven't cultivated yet, so I'm not afraid of this or that, just pretending to be cool. Or do you mean that others can't kill you? A time-traveling immortality system, where did you get so much courage and will when you first came here?

The protagonist of this book has become more and more annoying since the death of his wife. In the latest chapters, the protagonist highlights the unique arrogance of an old man, constantly hurting others under the banner of doing good for you.

What is the immortality flow? There are actually three types of immortality flow. The first type is immortal, but cannot be destroyed by others, otherwise it will die. The second type is immortal and cannot die even if it is beaten into cells. The third type is the immortality reincarnation flow. This book focuses on immortality, not immortality. It is destined that pig's feet cannot be strayed. If a pig's foot is destroyed by someone, it will still die. The immortality flow can also be said to be the immortal Goudao flow. The main thing is to fight a dog. If I am not qualified enough, I can rely on my immortality to slowly push my way up the realm. I can rely on my immortality to slowly survive my opponents. The life span of the foundation period is 300 years. If you live an extra twenty or thirty years, you can say that you have taken medicine. But if it is too much, how do you explain it? Pig's feet are immortal. Unless you are desperate and forget your love, you are destined to experience life and death with your lover, friend, mentor, and junior. Farewell, Ergou knew that Chen Sheng had a secret, so he sent Chen Sheng into the Black Abyss before leaving. It was a place where no one knew Chen Sheng. The Guangxiu Immortal Sect protected him when Zhujiao was weak. There were too many teachers and friends who helped him, so there were too many things for Zhujiao to give up. The golden elixir life span is 800, and Pigfoot will definitely not reach the Nascent Soul stage before he is more than 800 years old, so Zhujiao must leave when he is more than 800 years old. Before, the descendants of the Guangxiu Immortal Sect must be able to support the Guangxiu Immortal Sect. I have been reading online articles for more than 20 years, and I have read countless classics in physical books. There are many starting points for Changsheng-ryu novels now, and I have read a lot of them, but I have been able to grasp the essence of Changsheng-ryu so far and have read this one. Although there are slow updates, many typos, and many shortcomings, the core point has never changed. The Immortal can sit back and watch the changes, and experience the emotions of life and death without losing warmth.

Hahaha, let alone the popularity of this book, it has already become incense. If you put poison in the first chapter, how can it become popular? What does an illusion array have to do with immortality? Can you create a magic formation if you are immortal? The illusion array tests your character, and your character has nothing to do with your immortality. Do you think that the magic array is just to instill in you how cruel and ruthless the world of immortality is to see if you can persevere? That's not called a fantasy formation, that's called two hundred and five. The real phantom formation is such that you don't even know that you are experiencing the phantom formation. In the fantasy formation, you join the sect and the sect is destroyed. You can choose to surrender, betray, or bear the burden. Your choices determine your future. Before you get out of the phantom formation, it is impossible for you to realize that it is a phantom formation. Unless someone reminds me of it.

Before Dark Prison, it was a top-grade game, but after Dark Prison, it's not even considered mid-grade. It's not just about the plot, but also about connections, identity changes, and poison.

Chapter 20 felt really poisonous and inconsistent with the character of the protagonist. The protagonist created earlier has a firm mind and firmly believes that he will become an immortal in endless time, so he avoids risks and competition and only practices silently. As a result, he has to kill people and exterminate the clan for resources. Doesn't this make the protagonist hypocritical, saying that he is quiet and inactive, but he still has to deal with temptations. Then I looked back and saw that the protagonist was unwilling to do the sect mission. Good guy, it felt like he didn't want the resources, but disliked the lack of resources for the mission! All of a sudden, I went crazy.

I've already written about Immortality Flow, can't you get rid of those shortcomings? I don't understand why I always like to go out and have fun, so don't write about this kind of subject.

A new employee has to meet you when he joins the job, but you, the new warden of Black Abyss Prison, don't have to meet the senior officials of the sect? ? ? Are you still working on your own one-third of an acre of land? ? ? Which fairy sect has such a gameplay? ? ? Author: In your company, is it that the branch below doesn't care if you don't give you money to replace the boss? ?

The author's last paragraph about the heroine is very contrary to human nature. If two people in love see each other every day, it will be torture in itself. Human instinct will become bored with familiar things, so we now pay attention to scientific management of the distance between husband and wife. Ordinary people have only been together for 40 or 50 years, and it's already very difficult for couples. It's scary to think that you have been together for 200 years, and you actually wrote about it with such reluctance.

The Black Prison chapter is very substandard, it is just a copy of the Yaolu chapter, but the protagonist is no longer the same person as before. If the Yaolu chapter has a calm and low-key protagonist, then the Black Mountain chapter pretends to be low-key, but in fact does not miss any opportunity to show off.

I felt like I was about to write about a collapse. Ergou suddenly left, and the protagonist suddenly went to the Black Prison without knowing why. If he wanted to leave Yaolu, he might as well go outside and find a pure place on the shore to practice in seclusion alone. I hope it doesn't collapse. There is nothing to write about in the Black Prison, it's just going from one cage to another.

The book is good overall, but the organizational structure of the sect is very strange. There is not even an elders' council or a sect conference. The elders of the inner and outer sects can never meet each other once in a lifetime. They have to introduce themselves to know who they are. There is no unified dispatching and execution agency. There are many hills and mountains, just like small courts. The same sect can always use its power to suppress others. If this were the case, the sect would have disintegrated long ago.

I just want to ask when I can get the golden elixir. You don't pursue upgrading, but if you don't even mention your practice, you've gone too far, so why bother pretending to be a cultivator? In the perception of most readers of online articles, building the foundation is the bottom layer. It depends on how long it takes to write. I feel that the pace is too slow. Moreover, the meaning and plot are a bit simple, and they are described like this every time.

I have been reading books for twenty years and I think they are very good. What a pity, eunuch. I think you have platinum potential.

I haven't watched it for a long time. I'll check back and see why it's broken. It's a very good book.

It should be finished anyway. Why should I start a new book if I haven't finished it? I won't read new books. Even if the writing is bad, the ending should be written. It's true that if you fail once, there will be a second time.

It's a pity that the writing has been bad since the beginning of Black Prison. Isn't there a better secret book in the sect? Isn't it funny that the large sects don't have powerful casual cultivation skills yet?

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Damn it, Ergou, if you really keep it, it will be gone.

You're so stubborn. I feel like this book is well written. Why do you have to pursue high-quality books? It's okay if you finish writing it quietly. Wouldn't it be okay to give a general outline?