Swallowed Star: I Can Refine All Things

In the original story, the Bolenas family and Luo Feng were enemies. Hong revealed his intentions, and the ruler of the HR Alliance directly stated that Luo Feng's family could not be harmed. But in the author's version, he secretly kills geniuses to maintain the balance between the five great powers and Hong Lei Shen? How many dishes did he eat? He's drunk like this.

I enjoy crafting artifacts in the Swallowed Star world, especially those that forge supreme treasures, but no one writes about this type of story. It's probably because Luo Feng's rise to power was too rapid, and these supreme treasures became commonplace later on, which is a real shame.

Overall, the supplies are above average. The Earth arc was written a bit hastily and has some minor flaws, but I don't really enjoy watching Earth-themed episodes anyway. It's much more comfortable once we leave Earth; we can skip around and see what comes before.

First, regarding the Earth arc, there's a crucial mistake. The five major powers and Hong and Rai Shen are not equals. Hong and Rai Shen are individuals who transcend the five powers. Second, without any enmity, the five powers wouldn't maliciously harm geniuses. They'd much rather Earth had more Hongs. Do you think the relationship between monsters and humans is one of humans hunting monsters?

I've currently read up to the latest chapter, Chapter 118. Here are my thoughts: Overall, it's not bad, but it lacks some polish in terms of detail. Sometimes the plot moves too fast, making it hard to immerse the reader. Also, sometimes there's too little character description before directly stating a person's personality.

Apprentices already have domains, yet you insist on such a strict timeline. The strength of the other characters hasn't changed much either. So why did you go to all that trouble to let Luo Feng receive the inheritance ahead of time just to pad the word count?

The chapters on the extraterritorial battlefield are not exactly like the original novel, but they are exactly the same as the original novel.

There's no need to call everyone "Old So-and-so" when you meet them. We're in the universe now, and calling people that makes it sound like we're still in a small town, like we haven't even left the country yet.

The Luo Feng in your book is like trash. He is guileless, shrewd, and calculating. The protagonist isn't particularly cunning. You've completely belittled Swallowed Star from beginning to end.

The book's title, "Concise Everything," is actually nothing at all. I thought it was going to be a farming, resource-gathering, alchemy, and weapon-refining story! But after a few dozen chapters, the plot completely disappeared! Cultivation, cultivation, resource gathering, cultivation—it's utterly boring!