I Build Magic Weapons in the World of Martial Arts

The Golden Snake Sword on the movie board is called the Divine Weapon. There is also the Jade Blood Sword. The ones in the original novel and the TV series are not worthy of being called magic soldiers, but they can be called strange soldiers. They are just weird.

The plot is okay, but the dialogue is too awkward. If the way of speaking or the tone can be changed, it will be a good idea.

Directly casting a large sword of depleted uranium not only cuts iron like mud, but also glows green at night. It's just that the shortcomings are a bit big, but it's normal for demon soldiers to like to host unknown things!

It is recommended that the author take a closer look. The tiger soul is a divine weapon, not a magic weapon.

I kind of think 🤮, it would be too cheap to just threaten or act rogue to get magic weapons for others.

It can easily cost one hundred thousand. In ancient times, the total wealth of an earl was only a few hundred thousand taels at most. Ancient people with a fortune of ten thousand taels were all great rich men. You, a policeman, use one thousand taels to buy a weapon and still treat yourself like a shitty policeman if you have one thousand taels. Does the author use one tael of silver as one RMB?

The dialogue is indeed a bit awkward and there is too much nonsense

All I can say is that this novel is a bit awkward. . It made my hair stand on end. . .

All I can say is that this book reveals one sentence: There is no treachery, no business. If you say you are taking advantage, you are taking advantage. The protagonist must take advantage. You have to always mention that you are taking advantage, and you also say that others are taking advantage. It makes people think that you are not a good person. The key is that you are not the dialogue, but the narration.

The broken swords in the first chapter are some of the most uncomfortable ones. What does it mean that a sword is not afraid of breaking? Most of the time, the moment the sword is broken is when the sword owner is on the run. Even if your sword can recover automatically, is it still useful if your life is gone?

A good sword needs to find a suitable owner. The value of the magic weapon requires the owner to leave his own legend. It is recommended to refer to "Thunderbolt Sword Trail" Zhu Yan and Killing Commandment, the Legend of Lianjie (Three magic weapons, three stories, two demons, three people, intricate relationships with each other.) To put it simply, it is: Not only the sword maker needs to be strong, the sword also needs to be strong, and the person who uses it needs to be strong.

Can the author first establish the background? It looks weird. On the surface, the casters are the main ones, but the casters have a low status. It seems a bit embarrassing.

The subject matter is good, but the dialogue is a bit awkward

The character dialogue is a bit awkward, it would be nice to change it

After reading the rest of the series in one go, I felt that the magic weapons were too cheap. In a small border county here, including the main character, there were at least four magic weapon divisions, two companions and an evil weapon division, not counting the names of the people who did not appear. All the materials for one magic weapon were collected in a few days in a small county. , A miner with dozens of people casually dug up the main materials for the magic weapon. Counting the various materials obtained by other protagonists, the materials produced in a remote small county in a year can make at least a dozen weapons. It should be very slow to cast all the magic weapons. One piece in three to five days is too cheap.

It's strange. Can't we just say what the weapon is called after it's been made? Don't you feel confused when you tell people the name of the weapon before you've finished crafting it?

Forge a sword and give it to a close friend for a lifetime, and you will be free and happy and forget your age. The author can learn about the life of Jin Ziling, a famous swordsmith in Pili Puppet Show. It will help with writing.

There are so many sects, but Buddhism is the one I hate the most.

It's so mean, and it's just petty advantage.