My Father Was Definitely Taken Away from Him

I have always liked this novel, and there are too many people criticizing it in the comments. This novel is much better than other more popular fairy tales! It's a lot more refreshing, the language isn't offensive, and the sense of humor is there. I hope the author will stick to it! ! Always support...! !

1 The previous content is a bit incomprehensible, but it's okay to read it when you think about it in a free way. 2 When you want to think about it and read it in a refreshing way, a lot of "son" content appears, which is not pleasant at all. And it is like this from beginning to end, a bit indifferent; 3 When you are still patiently watching, the style of the game changes suddenly in the middle period, all the members are confused, the whole so-called pattern suddenly increases tenfold and a hundredfold, a bunch of "experts" behind the scenes appear, and the invincible flow becomes a "big chess flow". Not long ago, the protagonist was instructing the subordinates of the partnership to sell prepared dishes and self-heating meals... 4 Near the end, the author made a gorgeous turn, and the existence of the protagonist, the identity of the time traveler, knowledge, and self became a joke. If you empathize with the protagonist (the perspective of most readers is on the protagonist), then this "shocking secret" may only surprise you... You thought that when you were eating chocolate snacks, there was actually five-nut filling under the thin chocolate. You were so confused that you bit open the five kernels, and there was liquid sauce inside, as well as clean and hygienic Indian aloe vera juice.

I personally thought the story was quite interesting in the early stages, but it was a pity that it ended hastily.

The plot and background setting are very good It's just that the writing is too everyday, with some modern elements thrown in (self-heating rice and the like), but it doesn't have that completely fantasy feel The writing needs to be strengthened

This is not the first part, but it is still possible. You can read it before Chapter 140, but I can't understand the latter part, and the person's pronoun has changed, so I have no idea what I am reading.

I used to use it as a Buddha, but after being told that I didn't dare to use it, I just pulled out a mahogany sword and put it on the Taoist priest's skin. To be honest, the preparation was quite good before. Writing about Buddha and the like was just a subject matter and was used as a prop (most people still know more about Buddha than Taoist priests. If it weren't for the development of short videos and the like in the past few years during the epidemic, even fewer people would know about it). When someone said it, it was like a quail, so the hole couldn't be filled. There was only the second spy in the story, which surprised me a little bit. Towards the end, the protagonist's strength rating was really amazing. He didn't try to improve himself even though he was neither above nor below. He even put it on a foreign object and even forgot about the previous mark on his forehead. The soul power of the hero increased once, and the dragon claw hand didn't have the matching equipment. The most unbearable part for me was Chapter 241, where the heroine was looked at by another man, and then she took a moment to do something. This rhythm is really a choice that is difficult for normal people to make. The protagonist's mind is also difficult for ordinary people to understand. You can say that he cares about his son. He has not been around to tell the truth several times when his son was in danger. You can say that he doesn't care. He also has information to understand, although it is very strange that he has nothing to do with it. The author's writing style is still very smooth, the logic is quite satisfactory, the plot has many pitfalls, and I forget a lot. Overall, it is average

The main plot of the novel is ingeniously conceived, the characters and personalities are distinctive, and the plot has twists and turns. It is worth recommending.

There are so many young talents who are pursuing Mu Qingge but they don't like it, and finally fall in love with an old man?

At the beginning of the game when selling wood carvings, the protagonist calmly said, "We must have known each other before we meet." This is too artificial. The protagonist is an ordinary person, and he is a dull person. You can say enthusiastically, "Why do we know each other when we meet?" The protagonist is an ordinary person selling wood carvings. It is more natural to warmly receive customers than to pretend to be pretentious?

After reading Chapter 5, I would like to ask, is it illegal to carve out of wood in this world? Are there tables, chairs and benches, but no carpenters? Why do you have to ask me if you are an individual? What is this? This is not a plastic chair from a food stall I have to ask what pawa it is at every turn. Didn't humans practice cultivation before painting? Isn't it a bit outrageous?

There's a reason why it didn't become a big hit. The author didn't have the pleasure of getting online articles at all. It really looks like eating half of the cake, then putting it in the refrigerator to spoil, and then taking it out to continue eating when it is almost spoiled.

The protagonist has no strength and is caught and imprisoned for the rest of his life.

This kind of realm division is what I hate the most! Early stage of the day after tomorrow, middle stage of day after day, perfection of day after day, great perfection of day after day, peak of day after day, peak of day after day, limit of day after day, top of day after day... Another round of the innate realm... What? A realm must be divided into 800 small levels?

In Douyin, someone turned it into an AI anime tweet. I thought it had two to three million words...

The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. At the beginning, he refuses to worship the master, marries Qian Renxue, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and takes his wife Xueer to meet his father Tang Hao. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, marries Qian Renxue, and violently abuses Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look. Just click in to watch. Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Qian Renxue in this life

Poisoned to death. The initial character design of the protagonist doesn't match anything. The plot is cliche and awkward. Well done in publicity! Scammed from Douyin

I came to see his father, not his son. Currently, less than 30% of chapter 79 is about his father.

The first chapter was okay, the second chapter started to get weird, and the fourth chapter started to make no sense.

Thank you so much to all readers for your support!

I can only say that the plot is too retarded.

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to be so casual and perfunctory? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. Also, the brother has been weak since he was a child. He may not be able to code a few words every day, so just get more rest. The sister presses the brother like this, but it shows that It must be the sister's fault. If the brother is overworked, it will make the sister feel distressed. That's all. Although the brother is short, he is also a bit capable. It is the sister who is too pushy. Brother, please do not blame the sister. The sister will apologize to you first. After all, things in this world are rarely perfect. If my brother is short and concise, he is already above ordinary people. If he makes too many demands, it will appear that his sister is unreasonable.

After reading about one hundred and eighty chapters, my feeling is that the subject matter has some breakthrough ideas, and the dual protagonists show that the author has certain ideas, but the performance is still hindered by the author's writing style. 1. My son's emotional drama is too childish. From the moment Lu Shiran appeared on the scene, we knew that she actually didn't understand feelings. She was in a very ignorant state, just like an adult can't fall in love with an immature elementary school girl because there is no way to communicate. Hengsheng knows that he cannot accept such a person casually. Your father, Li Changqing, is happily happy that his son has an extra harem. Your son has a lover, and his lover still trusts you as a father. He asked you in a dream at night to ask you to write a letter to your son to express his love for you. Do you think this emotion does not conflict with him? "Have you asked me if you dare to touch my husband?" I really can't get enough of this plot. 2. A father's feelings for his son. Yes, of course a son is his father's counterpart, but to use it as a title is a bit confusing. Love is more suitable to be expressed subtly. I have written too much about "I love my son, I love my son" semi-directly before, for example, the communication with Xue Qianbai. If Changqing's psychological activities are covered, he just frowns and asks, "Will Hengsheng also go to ghosts?" Then he thought about it for a while and came up with some plans, and then through Xue Qianbai's thinking, he concluded that Changqing was making something delicious for his son, which would be softer and not too straightforward. You have a title "Li Changqing's Reverse Scale"! I was immediately numb and I didn't even want to read this chapter. 3. Li Changqing's pretentious scenes. I will point out two points. When Lu Hanyan saw Lu Shiran always clinging to Hengsheng and coming back with injuries, he angrily scolded Hengsheng for being so mean and mean in your writing. You, Li Changqing, supported Hengsheng and ridiculed Lu Hanyan. You are the love a father has for his son, and the relationship between them is better than that of mother and daughter. How could you step aside and scold the other person's education method, which is in line with the scolding of parents. In the second one, Lu Hanyan died gloriously in battle, and her other apprentices wanted to take back Hanyan's relics. This relationship reads like "You not only stole our master's love, we usually don't give you a good look, but now you have killed the master, are you worthy of taking the master's things? I will also slap you to vent my anger." Li Changqing, you actually encourage your sons to solve problems by slapping each other. There is nothing wrong with me. As an elder, you threaten to fight in the valley, and you are supported by a bunch of uncles and aunts. If you educate your children in this way, I suggest you not to teach. To summarize, fathers are more childish than sons. Heng Sheng is much more sensible than his father. Everyone is welcome to discuss this issue together.

The subject matter is okay, so I'll scrap the plot outline and start over, and I'd recommend learning more about the details and writing style.

The setting is a bit weird. How could no one think of carving wood for so many years? None of them know wood carving. It's so weird.

I can only read the first ten chapters, and the beginning is very good. In just a dozen chapters, the protagonist begins to have a crazy intelligence, which is not even below the level of ordinary people. But it makes people doubt life. Maybe the author always wants the novel to be funny, but from our point of view, it feels like the protagonist in the whole world is a fool.

Two male protagonists and one female protagonist? Are you having a great time?

"Can I still wait for him to come back in this life?" "He is dead. He was killed by you yourself. I think he will never come back." Lu Qingqing actually had the answer in his heart, but now that he received a positive reply from Li Changqing, he still felt a little lonely. "Can't you wait for him to come back in this life?" Lu quietly murmured. Some years later. In Zhenguofu, under a cliff and next to a stone wall. Lu Qingqing was fetching water from the river. As a talented girl from the ancient land of Daoshan, Lu Qingqiu had already reached the state of innate perfection at a young age, and was appointed by the headmaster Luo Xiaochuan to serve as the new inspector of the Zhenguo Mansion. After work, Lu quietly came to this cliff to fetch water as usual. She didn't know why, but this place gave her an inexplicable feeling. Huh? This place? Lu quietly discovered that this stone wall seemed to have been carved by someone. Lu quietly pulled off the moss, and there were six words written on it. No, it should be seven to be precise. Although the words on the stone wall have become blurred after so many years, Lu Qingqiu still recognized the words on it. "Li Hengsheng" "Lu Qingqing" The word "deer" was originally "lu", but it was crossed out and changed to "deer". Seeing these words, Lu Qingqian seemed to think of something, his eyes became hazy, and his tears could no longer stop. "Senior Brother Li, I betrayed you..." I don't know how long he stayed in front of the stone wall, and Lu quietly took out a wooden box from his hand. The day before arriving at the Zhenguo Mansion, Headmaster Luo Xiaochuan personally handed her this wooden box and said that if she remembered anything one day, she would open this wooden box. Lu quietly opened the wooden box and found a Sansheng flower. After taking the Sansheng flower, people can have the memory of three reincarnations. If they take another Sansheng flower in the third life, they can live forever. "This life is exactly the third life" Lu quietly murmured. She vaguely guessed who gave her this Sansheng flower. Inside Tianhai City. "Have you thought about it?" "I was responsible for him in my last life. I have been waiting for him my whole life, but I also know that it is just an extravagant hope. I don't want to wait anymore in this life. I want to find him. I just hope to see him again." Li Changqing said nothing more and silently opened the barrier of Cangyuan Realm and watched the girl in front of him walk in. I was really upset when I saw Lu Qiu's ending. I didn't want to see her end like this, so I wrote a follow-up. This book is really well written. I hope the author takes good care of his health and recovers soon. I also look forward to reading the author's follow-up about Lu Quietly one day.

Thank you to all new and old readers for your support~ I would like to express my sincere gratitude to all readers for this book being able to gain attention again nearly a year after its completion Due to various factors such as the release period and the author's physical condition, this book The plot and writing style are not satisfactory, so I apologize here and hope you can be more tolerant For some book friends who have problems with the book such as too fast pace, too few words, and suspected unfinishedness, you can check the attached picture of this article for the author's explanation of the last chapter of the book. It is a helpless act to cause a bad reading experience. Please forgive me and thank you for understanding the author's special situation Questions about the follow-up of this book and the author's next work: The story of seizing the body can only end here for the time being. The next work is still in preparation, and the author is still recovering from his condition and preparing for surgery. I will bring you more high-quality works after I recover! Finally, I wish everyone a smooth life and never have a book shortage~

The setting is quite good, but it's a pity that the author can't grasp it well. The logic is too confusing, and the writing style is a bit childish. Some plots are too awkward and a bit poisonous. It is not recommended for those who have strict requirements on themselves.

The story is good, you should keep writing it, it's such a pity that it ends like this!