Gao Wu: Simplify the Start, Come and Pay Homage to the School Beauty

The writing is really good, I hope the author can update it soon

The protagonist learns all the skills and techniques, but if he doesn't practice further, he just gets started.

I watched the beginning very well. I really want to see the rest of the plot. I look forward to the follow-up.

The story scenes are very immersive, come on

The early stage is okay, the plot is also okay, but, please note, it is too watery, and there is a limit to how to make money. When it is so watery, it is already a bit annoying. For example: The beginning of each chapter is just a copy and paste of the end of the previous chapter, but you actually copy and paste the content written in the previous chapters for later use; the list in your system expands the number of words each time. You should focus on content, not tricks, you know what I mean?

Qi and Blood 1, how to write it, first of all the logic is difficult

Why do you want to read a few books? I really vomited and I can't write. Let's see how other people write simplified novels. OK

1 For 3 consecutive years, such a retro plot

Chapter 20, the data is seriously messed up. Not counting the previous bonus of the fox, the protagonist is 109. Two o'clock in ten minutes, 12 o'clock in one hour, and 24 o'clock in two hours. The result is only 127 points. 109+24=127, Not counting the bonus when the fox sucks. Suppressing the protagonist is not so suppressive. It's more disgusting than some articles in the studio. I just wrote it as soon as I thought about it. I didn't dare to write about what you are doing with such a big hook. You are destined to be an eunuch.

Without extraordinary willpower, you will become a fart strong man.

The content is substantial and the writing is excellent. Not bad!

The rich and powerful are all evil people, they can trample on others at will, and they want to kill those who are stronger than themselves. The more I look at this setting, the more disgusting it is. How dark is the author's heart 😤