Versatile Mage: Ghost Corps

Who is the heroine, single or multiple 🙂

I use the big account to follow this author's song. From now on, in various major novel software and chat software, if you don't chat about a certain person, you can use this author to make a draft and use it as a metaphor 🤓

Well, after listening to the book friend's advice, I thought it was right. I felt that my writing skills were poor, and the fighting scenes were exaggerated. I didn't want to express the shocking team battle in my mind.

It is recommended that the author try to escape from the plot of the original work and make the pace faster. It usually takes me three or four minutes to read one chapter. Now I just read King Crimson and read one chapter in one minute because the plot is the same as the original work and the Shadow Corps is a very good subject.

My new works "The Full-time Mage: The Full-time Ghost Swordsman" and "The Full-time Mage: The Ghost Swordsman" are being serialized. I do not recommend reading this debut novel. It is a waste of time and has a toxic point (suppression of strength). I wanted to write it as a behind-the-scenes leak but failed to write it well.

I have a little suggestion for the author. It is best to change Chapter 12, otherwise you may be criticized. I always feel that the dialogue between Tang Yue and the protagonist is too boring, like a robot.

Where is the protagonist? The plot of the experience is all original, and the protagonist is invisible? Admire, say goodbye