The Infinite Gate: Ruling the Heavens

Traveling through various worlds without knowing the plot is pointless! It would be fine if it were original content, but the problem is it's not (Storm Riders).

The martial arts currently written down are divided into three systems. The first type is internal energy cultivation, which follows the Taoist system of refining essence into qi and refining qi into emptiness. The second type, which is what we call national martial arts, is about techniques, including visible and hidden strength, which are developed through physical training.

Sigh, I don't know how to explain it. It's written so well, but it feels like we're all from the same dimension. Putting aside everything else, just look at the human-immortal system you wrote. You'll be suppressed by the world because you're too strong, and they'll reject you. Also, the biggest difference between humans and extraordinary beings is their fundamental nature.

Writing a female lead is difficult; if it's not done well, the story will be ruined.

He dares to write about immortality, claiming that everything about immortality is predetermined, like a stagnant pool that will never ripple!

The author's descriptions of the martial arts immortals, especially the trio of Bu Jingyun, are quite poor. It's questionable whether they even possessed innate talents during this period; they're practically useless martial arts immortals.

Why is the writing so nonsensical, as if the author has never watched "Storm Riders"?