Red Lion Empire

The few pictures so far are still very good-looking, but there are some things that affect the perception. The first author seems to have a kind of "nobility" and dare not write freely, for fear that the protagonist will be too presumptuous and it will be "a cool article". Is there any benefit to the protagonist pretending to be an "idiot" over and over again while doing things? The key point is that he has been exposed. Anyone who is interested will definitely find out that the protagonist is definitely not an idiot. How about scolding him with this name? The big shot can't be an idiot, right? He doesn't investigate the protagonist and just looks for trouble when he looks unhappy? The second is the heroine. I saw earlier that the heroine who was so independent-minded in the feudal society was not only Wu Zetian but also Empress Lu, and she accomplished this, which is amazing. Later on, when you see the protagonist "forcibly rescuing people", the protagonist is very naughty. When someone else tries to please the protagonist, "his face becomes a balloon", you think it's cute if you're not the author? ? ? Can you survive to this day at this level in the Middle Ages? ? ? The third protagonist's strength is already 100, and the notes tell me that he is at his peak, yet he is still tied up and being targeted by a group of poor people? Now stumbling and now humiliating, is the protagonist aristocrat fake? Why are other people's nobles so valuable! You might as well be more confident, kill when you need to, and the heroine is useful to please her? Now the heroine is just the "Baroness", why is the protagonist so sharp that she has to "beg for three pounds" to cooperate? The protagonist is not an idiot, their identities are completely equal, okay... Let's talk about this first, neither big nor small is also a poisonous point

Roland Austin

The main character is too light and weighs about thirty to forty pounds.

I hope that in the later stage, we can see scenes of various extraordinary knights competing against each other, such as the Heavenly Armed Knights vs. The Royal Knights. Come on, author😍

You add Catherine to the character building. Damn it, I only came in when I saw there were no heroines or supporting characters. You lied, you bastard.

Come on, author. When I repost it, I hope it can be a little more exciting and avoid some pitfalls. Although fantasy literature is niche, there is still a market. The next-door movies "The King" and "The Holy Flame King" are also fantasy, and their results are also very good. Your writing is good, I feel it is no worse than theirs. As long as you can add some plots or plots that the audience loves to watch, such as Dragon Knight, the results will definitely not be bad. I wish the author good results with his new book.

Yes, continue to maintain strict prices and environment, don't collapse,

The author's writing ability in writing war scenes is very strong. Now is the period of new books. I hope it can be maintained. Finally, I suggest that the author erase this embarrassing mind-reading skill.

The pace is too fast. The first thing for the lords to farm is to slow down the pace and extend the time appropriately. Think about the Yan Palace built by Zhu Yuanzhang for Zhu Di in the Ming Dynasty. It was rebuilt on the basis of the old palace of the Yuan Dynasty (part of which was burned down). The construction started in the fourth year of Hongwu and was completed at the end of the 12th year of Hongwu. It took eight years to build. Western medieval castles took generations to build. In a world similar to the Middle Ages, it took ten and a half days to build a city. Don't you think it is too fast? The second is to have a sense of distance. Most of the transportation in ancient times was inconvenient, and the circulation of personnel, material and information was very slow. If you have an important invention here, the enemy will come to snatch it immediately. This is too no sense of distance! The general process is that it is discovered, and then the news is passed to the enemy. More than ten days have passed. The enemy has not witnessed it with his own eyes, so it is impossible to say what is said below. He must send someone to verify it, and it will prove valuable for ten and a half months before sending someone to snatch it

Accepting readers' suggestions, the poisonous mind-reading technique has been cancelled, so everyone can watch with confidence.

Red Dragon

Will the protagonist become emperor? I want to see a Western fantasy dynasty competing for hegemony among various countries and plane wars, with multiple female supporting characters

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Group number: 700296157. There is no threshold for joining the group! Everyone can come in to chat and discuss the content. By the way, I urgently need a noble man to help me make a map. I have a template!

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