Live Forever, Practice Taoism and Cultivate Immortality

I don't understand why I let Zhu Pingan go. She is crazy, sick, and has such a high talent. The protagonist also said that she can come back to trouble him when she becomes more powerful. Now I suddenly feel that the protagonist is also abnormal...

There is really a lot of nonsense. If you can't continue writing, just stop.

What to do in the first ten chapters? The foreshadowing is too long. Are you planning to write a long article? Don't understand

I feel like I can't stand it any more. The text feels awkward and slow to read.

I don't even want to subscribe anymore, it's getting more and more useless. When a true biography comes to you, it's a matter of whether you see it or not.

The book is okay, the writing is mediocre, the thinking is okay, and it is slow to read. The protagonist is a selfish and not a good person. You can give it a try if you are short of books.

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This book should be an invincible one. The protagonist has an immortal cheat and uses his own essence and blood every day to improve his strength. This is equivalent to today's self being able to beat yesterday's self to death easily.

It's okay. He has a character that is both good and evil. The protagonist stays in the novice village and slowly develops. It's great to rely on group portraits to promote the plot.

Brother Hui is here for a visit

Awesome. Come on, keep chasing

Is this big brawl bit off? Haha virtual protagonist 000

Why didn't I post a chapter today? Can it only be one ticket per day?

Specializing in blood-breaking techniques, he can suppress an enemy with one hand