Those Years When I Took the Little Broken Machine into the Back Room

Quite novel. It reminds me of the feeling I had when I was hiding in bed and frantically searching for weird SPC objects. Cheers, author.

Laoyou, you can change the title of your book. In fact, the fundamental reason why no one reads it is because people want to search for novels such as "Later Generations" and can't find your book. Then I didn't know whether it was because of a bug in the Qidian book or something, but I read two pages. The following chapters were all just numbers with no content. The whole book was only 5,000 words. Of course, what should I say when I see this beginning? The psychological and action descriptions are perfect, but there is no most important environment, or relatively few, which makes it a bit uncomfortable to watch. You should be able to keep writing, come on.

Brother, why don't you update it? What's going on?

From the perspective of someone who doesn't know much about the back room, the author still takes care of readers who don't know this circle and can take care of the perceptions of such readers. Let me talk about my feelings: 1. First of all, although the writing of this book is not excellent, the plot is still good, especially the setting. I believe everyone can see that this kind of back room plus the protagonist's personal human-machine combination is very interesting. 2. Talk about the shortcomings. The protagonist's psychological thoughts are too active and there are too many asides. Although the author's intention in writing these is worthy of respect, after all, it is the author's hard work, and it is also to take care of us readers who do not understand the back room, but these shortcomings really affect the readers' perception. Finally, I hope this book will become more and more popular, come on! ! ! 😍

The cover of the work is here

In fact, I have been updating and can't see it because I can refresh it and see it. Every time I modify it, there are quite a lot of words.

To be honest, this subject matter is very good. It is the first time I have seen a novel with this subject matter. Each paragraph should not be too long, as too long will affect reading. Don't have a lot of overly complicated settings in the first chapter. People are impatient these days. The world view settings are slowly spread out through the main text, just like opening up the fog, giving people a feeling that it is what it is. I also suffered from this. Later, the preface was deleted, and the first chapter was also changed to a pulp. Finally: Let's encourage you together, come on＾0＾~

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There are still some minor flaws, so I signed up for a replacement. Copyright, of course the same as the previous one

Okay, Laoyou, pay attention and give me more words! ! !

Junk work must be deleted!

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Ahem, cough, cough, this is the news I got from a channel. I haven't read this book at the moment because I'm quite busy. After I read it, I will make sure to review it with my own understanding. Thank you.