Doupo's Super Enhancement

Protagonist: Niang Xipi! Huo Huo's incompetence has caused the family to suffer disaster. It seems that I must go out!

Queen Queen, Gu Xun'er, Little Medical Fairy

It's a bit embarrassing to write about it. I use a gun, but I didn't write about the gun skills. My turtle, the Buddha's Furious Lotus! ! ! ! You are just copying homework. Even if you copy it, you still need to pay attention -_-||. At least the spear skills are arranged, starting a prairie fire with hundreds of blows. Spear skills, since you want to absorb the fire of hundreds of beasts, create one, fist and kick skills, ferocious beast fighting and killing methods, and physical training skills called "Hundred Beasts Body". Farewell to Old Buddha Angry Lotus, I always feel like I am looking at Xiao Yan. Since you don't want to go the Burning Jue route, then don't show someone with the same fighting skills as Xiao Yan. Otherwise, the character design will feel like it has the shadow of Xiao Yan. It's best not to use the word "jue" in the exercise. You can't name it. Just say it and we'll help you think about it.

Little Doctor

Your surname is not Xiao, why do you always write about persecutory delusions?

I hope the protagonist and Xiao Yan are friends. Xiao Yan has a good character and is good to his friends.

Yunyun

Selling elixirs at cabbage prices is really awesome.

The pace is too fast, and the whole book looks like it was written on an assembly line. The dialogues, battles, daily alchemy, etc. Are just like writing a diary, and nothing stands out. The protagonist is too young and too strong. It would be more comfortable to either increase his age by five years or lower his strength a little. As for his alchemy strength, he is okay. Written like this, Xiao Yan's three-year contract has not yet ended and the protagonist is already a fighting saint. Well, he is a fighting saint in his early twenties.

If you don't grab the opportunity, girls can always grab it. Otherwise, your book may not be successful. Because you don't have any of the cool points that readers need, so it's unreasonable for you not to do so!

Author, the setting of the protagonist's strengthening ability is rather vague. Does the so-called strengthening mean that everything except conscious objects can be strengthened? For example, if a skill is strengthened, when the content of the skill is strengthened, will the material (book or animal skin) in which the skill is recorded be strengthened at the same time? Another example is the medicated bath formula mentioned earlier. To strengthen this formula, can we first strengthen the contents of the formula, then prepare a medicinal solution according to the new formula, and then strengthen the medicinal solution again. Or if you are more imaginative, if the protagonist strengthens the contents of a prescription, then according to your settings, the author, the same item can only be strengthened once due to the limitation of the protagonist's soul. So if the strengthened prescription is re-copied in a new book, if it is strengthened again, it will be regarded as the first enhancement. Can the protagonist copy unlimitedly and strengthen the prescription infinitely? At this point, the author, have you set any restrictions? I don't know if you, the author, have overlooked these, but when you write a novel, you must at least justify it, and the setting must conform to the logic of your own design. If it is too vague, it will make people feel intellectually deranged.

Aren't you going to cut off the rich Lolita of the Hugu tribe?

Small Realm, Xiao Realm, can't it be made more clear? What kind of nonsense, Small Realm, can't you specify how many stars it is? When writing Dou Po fans, just follow Dou Po's settings and don't mess around.

Was it written by someone else, or was the author just having fun?

Queen

1. There is no shortage of low-level elixirs in Jialan Academy. The third-level alchemist can grab a lot of them. I really want to repay my high-level help in refining a few sect-breaking elixirs. Helping your teacher break through to the sixth level is better than anything else 2. There is no need to hide the level of the alchemist. You can do this thing, no. Yes, but no, the higher the level, the more attention the academy will pay 3 If the alchemist level can be raised to level seven, the Xiao family's problems will not be a problem. According to the logic of Dou Po, the sixth level is useful to Dou Huang (Emperor Level Pill, Po Zong Dan), and the seventh level has a high probability (Breaking Zun Pill). Use this elixir to invite thousands of elders, two peak Dou Zong, to go sideways in the early stage (don't say you can't leave the academy easily, it just depends on whether the price is enough, just ask for the elixir directly, you can't let you bear the Xiao family's disaster alone) 4 Soul Palace takes action against the Xiao family It is inevitable. The Soul Clan's thousand-year plan is about to begin. The ancient jade of the Xiao family is the easiest to get. It is impossible to give up. The Soul Palace has at least two Dou Sects in the Gama Empire (Soul Palace Hair Care, Yunshan). If the strength of the two Dou Sects is not paid, the Xiao family will run away.

It's not interesting anymore. I'm trying to steal the hot wife. I still prefer the protagonist to pretend to be alone.

Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

I didn't take a screenshot, I'm late.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

Owe the author 2000 pointsˇ-ˇ

Suddenly I feel that Ten Thousand Beasts Liyan is quite suitable for the protagonist 🤫

The author writes very well, and I take the liberty to recommend "Dou Po: This Alchemist is Too Fierce". It will be updated stably. If it disturbs you, please delete it.

It's time to stop updating. Stop watching and spend money to make trouble.

Being cautious in the early stage has the meaning of being a mortal. In the later stage, you will lose money. It started from Canaan Academy. This kind of mortal start is not suitable for writing. Be careful and careful in the beginning. In the middle stage, it will become a waste of money. In the later stage, no one needs to take revenge, which will seem boring.