King Kong of Douluo

The content of the author's book is good, but you are so good at water characters that I felt bad after reading it.

Titan Giant Ape Martial Spirit! Erming is quite suitable for making a soul ring.

One sentence is expanded into a chapter, and it is full of nonsense. It is more streamlined than a primary school student's composition.

It's so long-winded. Things that can be written in a few sentences are basically written in one or two chapters. Each chapter is like explaining the meaning of a few sentences. I want to say to the author, "Brother, you are writing a novel, not a dictionary."

Can Douluo be saved? Nowadays, most Douluo are Cao Cao

The writing is so long-winded, one sentence can last hundreds of words, and it's painful to read. It's very, very clumsy.

There are at least ten "after all" in a chapter. Wouldn't you be able to write without the word "after all"?

No more talking, just fuse the armor together

I thought every author would write better and better, so I excused myself.

How much this author likes to write the word "after all"! TM, the whole article is full of it.

It's so long-winded and the dialogue is awkward.

Later, I kept emphasizing that the original work has no meaning at all, and it does not ruin the plot.

Why enter the competition? If you perform well, you will be targeted by Wuhun Palace. If you perform poorly, there will be no benefit.

Olige

There are too many magic changes. This King Kong family is comparable to the Blue Lightning family. He only has one title, but his family can still maintain the inheritance, and every sect leader has a title. Also, if you check your physical fitness, you will know how many years the soul ring can last for? It seems that Hu Liena and the others' second soul ring is only a hundred years old, right?

Your sister, there is not a single line of dialogue in several or even ten chapters,

No heroine slipped away. Returning the power of a child? Latecomers suggest not to read it

Author, why are you so stupid and keep repeating the plot of the original work? If you do this, I might as well read the original work! No need to spend any money! 😡😡😡

After all, and, therefore, there are dozens of them in one chapter, just like matryoshka dolls, the more you read, the more embarrassing you become.

The author may not have watched Dou Yi in full, but he is quite good at making up for it with his own boy skills, the setting of the physical training method with the addition of the making up, and the theory of the master in the original book. It is ridiculous to be promoted after reaching level 10. Compared with the original work, when the protagonist reaches the first level, he can absorb the thousand-year soul ring, which is less than that of others at level 20. He has caught up with the thousand-year soul ring in return, and the accumulated soul power has not been lost. Whether it is the skill or setting, the card-level flow is the best. Modern people can't think of any problems! If your writing skills are not good enough, just use your imagination to make it more fun. You...

At more than seventy chapters, hadn't all the jelly grass been taken away by the protagonist? Tang San and the other seven still had jelly grass. What logic😅😅😅

Well written, I give you four recommendation votes, please improve it.

Awakening the Titan Giant Ape, if you use the Clear Sky Hammer, it will be even more awesome, it will be invincible in power

An ordinary academy soul master + a great soul master is considered a good match. Isn't it outrageous to have several soul sects in your kingdom's team in a small place? ? ? Why are you so strong? Won't Wuhun Palace level you?

Great author, you have become a god, why should you have a single female protagonist? Otherwise, I will end up alone. Besides, you are also going to the God Realm, so you also need helpers, right?

I just saw the martial soul awakening. First of all, let me tell you that the soul is full of innate soul power. Then the awakened must be twin martial souls. What do you mean by awakening one? The master is the eternal god in our hearts. Some important settings should not be changed casually.

What is the protagonist's position? Is it beneficial to help Tang San and continue the Tang family's divine realm?

Why hasn't the protagonist's family been hunted for souls? It's not my fault, but something just feels wrong 🤐