I'm Hinata, Hokage Shusen

Is this time-traveling Naruto Hinata Shuxian? Is this title okay? Currently, I am basically playing with Naruto, being cute with Hinata and Hinata, or saying unrealistic things like how to abolish caged birds. Daily life throughout the article, cultivating immortals is occasionally mentioned. And cultivating immortals is just a symbol. I feel that your time-travelling Hinata is weaker, gentler and more innocent than the original~

After reading the previous chapters, I feel that the beginning is a bit confusing. Instead of pursuing power, I always want to make small moves. As a person with vested interests, I don't want to make the family bigger and stronger but always want to revolutionize my own life. I don't have an overall view and want to hold on to the big picture. If you don't have the aura of the heroine to really do this, Hinata will be destroyed sooner or later.

There are two unpleasant aspects. 1 At present, most of the plot is about farming rather than cultivating immortals. I don't know whether it is important to write a novel. I don't know what the author's plan is, but I hope to control the proportion of training, farming and the original plot of Naruto. 2. The evaluation of combat effectiveness is very confusing. The protagonist's ability is a mystery. He is said to be a cultivator but currently he only has talismans. The battles also use Hinata's skills. The front, middle and back of qi training correspond to the lower, middle and jounin. However, the protagonist relied on spiritual objects for 2 years to practice to the later stage, and did not say what he learned.

After reading fan fiction for many years, I already have the ability to know the author's level and general content just by reading the chapter title 🙂. I wonder if you feel this way?😁

After reading more than 20 chapters, the plot has no explosive points. It is bland and a bit abusive. In other words, it is not an abuse of the protagonist, but there is a plug-in and it is useless. After a few years of rebirth, let alone progress, what kind of debuff can make me sleepy every day and affect my thinking? I don't know what the author is thinking, but I can't stand it anyway. Isn't it funny that you write fan fiction or transformation fiction as if it's a mythical text? You can't see the unparalleled elegance of the protagonist who transformed into the novel, nor can you see the extreme intelligence. You can't even see the tea smell in the tea that I don't like. The only thing you see is probably not Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi. . . If the fan fiction doesn't have continuous explosive points, who will read it?

This is the destructive power caused by Temari during the Chunin Exam. Although the combat power in the early stage is not as good as the destruction of the world in the later stage, the battle between ninjas is also very terrifying. I have seen some precursors (the Daimyo section). I hope the author can grasp it well and not write down the combat power.

Next door Hinata completed the foundation building at the age of 4 and expanded her industry to fifteen cities. The same difference is that the cultivation of immortals is a bit too slow.

Why do you want to know so many Xiaoqiang? In fact, it's completely unnecessary. Besides, can you write it over?

In recent years, Niangli has become too girly.

Do you want to consider putting some pressure on Hinata in the public communication channel of the time traveler, "Ding! Time traveler 9527 died. The cause of death was neutron annihilation of the planet where he lived." "Pluto: Hello everyone, I am a Saiyan Pluto. Does anyone need help? Tell me the coordinates of the planet in private..." "Jim Reno: Hey man, I really need your help here. The coordinates are ■■■■" "Singer: I have placed two-way foil on the insect swarm home planet hehe..." "Frieza: I just bombed Otsutsuki's home star. I think this world should have a Naruto world..."

This is a strange structure, as is the overall style.

As far as the combat performance in Naruto is concerned, compared to mortals cultivating immortals, the so-called Kage level is only at the level of the Golden elixir. Those trashy Kage levels are probably not even at the level of the Golden elixir.

After reading five chapters, I saw something strange and I didn't know what the protagonist wanted to do.

I took a rough look at it Summary: The plot is too simplistic, the cultivation progress is slow, and there is a bit of an unpleasant plot, all combined into this very average novel. It's not ugly, but I don't have the desire to read it.

A bold idea, the "Chakra Monetization Plan" copies the petrodollar approach to economic development?

Should you consider hanging out with big names, learning from P club players, and creating more original plots?

Why don't you practice to build a foundation and then go back? What kind of ninja do you want to be? Wouldn't it be nice to be a samurai in the ninja world?

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

It's such a good book, it's a pity that it has been hastily finished.

Come on, author. Come on, author. Come on, author! I hope there won't be male pig feet

Naruto's eyes.

There are not many people

The author highly recommends the book. If you don't read enough, please recommend what you usually read (≧▽≦)

Are you okay? I haven't updated it for five days (θ‿θ)