Everyone Else Builds Mechs, but I Cultivate Immortality

I've seen rabbits, monsters, and the big devil from the Labor Reform Bureau. I also read the previous book. How to say it. Huang Liang is powerful. But being banned was too miserable. The previous book had a very similar feel to him (similar to the beginning of the monster in the Labor Reform Bureau), but it was indeed slow-burning and had a plot feel. . . It's a bit watery, and the writing style is also a bit up and down, sometimes good and sometimes bad (the old man stamping the Thousand Miles of Rivers and Mountains picture and drifting away really looks so handsome), and then it's a bit too bland and doesn't get the point. The new book seems to have a bit of a sci-fi style, and I don't know if Huang Liang can handle it (because I rarely saw it written before), but after reading the first few chapters, it's pretty good. It's quite funny without being sloppy (the rugged protagonist is very vividly written). I personally think it's better than the previous one, and the title is pretty good (The Only Immortal in the World is also good, maybe even better than this one). I'll continue to follow it. Come on, I think this book will succeed as long as I don't get messed with. Come on, I will keep chasing. I said before that the writing style was a bit up and down, but now I think it fits perfectly in this book. So update soon.

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Brother, I've been liking your books since junior high school, from "The Old Man Wants to Return to the World" and "The Unqualified Demon King". My favorite is "Urban Fairy" (although it's a eunuch, alas). But writing novels is similar to doing business. You can't become a eunuch immediately with no results. What does this make your old fans think? No matter what, you should keep writing regardless of whether anyone scolds you or what your grades are! I really like the warm and funny feel of your novels. Come on! Like "Gu Zhenren", which was written so well by the author at the beginning, it's not like no one read it. It took so many years for it to become popular. You should persevere and improve, and you can't give up without results!

It's beautiful, don't cut it—_— 𓆡𓆝𓆟𓆜𓆞𓆝𓆟𓆜𓆞​​

Compared to before, the difference is really huge. The writing style and writing style feel as if they were replaced by the same person. There are often inconsistencies in the logic. If it doesn't work, just start it again. This type of article is really different from the entertaining and happy writing style before. Even if you are just a little more specialized, it is better than this kind of direct self-destruction.

I have read both the author Big Rabbit and Old Man, but I felt something was wrong after reading the first chapter of this book. The first chapter gave me the impression that it was a novice cool novel, and I felt that the logic of the first chapter did not make sense. According to the author's description, the original crazy man was a waste, but he was not dismissed from the school and had a beautiful director to uphold justice. I felt that this was the general start of the college cool novel. I have only read a little bit so far, but this little bit makes me feel that this book is not as good as Rabbit and Old Man.

The writing in this book is down to earth! The content is exciting! Keep it up. The story framework suggests not to be too awesome! Mecha Biaohan can be used as a reference! Two monthly votes have been cast

After reading it, I will summarize two points for those who follow. The first point is that the female apprentices around the protagonist all have very awesome physiques, and they will definitely start a harem in the future. The two male apprentices have very rubbish physiques The second point is that the fighting in the later period takes too long. Often the author can guess what is going to happen in 7788 from the first part to the second part. Your book may not really be long. Judging from the current results, it basically has to be cut.

Don't you want to cut again? I feel like the writing is quite good, even the maid will be assimilated soon.

Has the author given up? No news for more than five months