Song: I Am Cultivating Immortality in Qingcheng Mountain

If you can't continue writing, then stop writing. It's really, really uncomfortable.

At present, it seems that it is edible. Let's give a brief review to see the effects!

What can I say, it's just my personal feeling. In addition to the protagonist currently beheading the white-haired fairy, no one has seen it in private. The second one is Tayun, and there are some pretense and ghost talk about the script. There is no other style. I have been working hard to write the climax, the feeling of fighting Baili Dongjun and shocking the whole world. I don't know if the author can write it well. If it can't be written, it will be really boring and boring. It's a good work once it's written, I can only look forward to what comes next.

I beg you that there is no heroine. Dog women will only affect the speed of drawing the sword.

I have never seen such a disgusting author. I can't read it after I wandered around. It's just a money scam. The combat power is broken, so I just wrote it as a eunuch. Stop writing and withdraw from the circle.

The writing is good, but it's too boring. The mind travels are the best in the world, let alone the thought of mind travel. The national master once had a mind travel to save his junior brother. During the period when his junior brother became a demon, you were still a Taoist priest, you knew how to calculate, and you practiced Taoism. In the end, you let a group of scum who are not in the realm of the mind travel to plot against you. Calculate, calculate, and it turns out that when you fight against others, you can master any move for more than ten chapters. I'm convinced.

I said why there aren't many people commenting on chapters recently, it's too watery. I could have defeated these two swordsmen with just a few moves, but the author had to wait for a month? It's boring, everyone has banded together to ambush the protagonist. All kinds of dirty tricks have been used, but the protagonist just doesn't kill people, he just plays? Just water? After a few more chapters, the author will abandon the book if he is still like this. Hey, I thought I found a good book. . . . . .

The fight in Xueyue City really made me sick. You had so many b-words. Don't you know that villains die from talking too much? And your pig's feet are so empty that you don't even dare to kill anyone? Not decisive enough to kill, not cool enough, bad review!

A month ago, they conspired to surround and kill the protagonist. A month has passed, and this wave of siege is still going on. You are not ordinary water!

I'm speechless. I wrote a fight from 108 to 136 and it's not over yet. I'm planning to finish it after finishing this story.

The protagonist looks awesome, but in fact he is a little piece of trash that even opponents of a lower level can't get rid of. Even if he gets rid of it, it will take more than three chapters. The writing is so frustrating and watery, sea, sea, you are all water, smelly and disgusting water🤢🤮

It's always in the water. The protagonist doesn't appear in dozens to more than ten chapters. When he does appear, he just scratches the water. Finally, after the protagonist enters the mind wandering, there is no need to read it. The rest is in the water.

So watery? Can't even take down two sword immortals in the Shenyouxuanjing? The world's best Qinggong can't catch up with anyone?

Do humans or ghosts dare to chase and kill a person in the Fugue Mysterious Realm? Inexplicably, everyone in the world is the enemy. They are all iron-headed people who are not afraid of retaliation?

After leaving Xueyue City, the plot started to suck. It was still written too fast. It can be seen that I only watched the animation or TV series of Shounen Gexing, and did not watch Dark River and Young White Horse. The main line of Song Xing, if you can write it with the help of the other two, it will not be so fast, and the combat power will not collapse so fast. You will lose all your skills in the battle with the Jiuxian. When I saw you having this idea, my eyes lit up. Then I could take the dark river branch line and understand the rivers and lakes under the shadow. Alas, I still can't escape from writing invincible, and the protagonist is pushed sideways. Returning to the journey of the gods, with the temple of a family of killers, the plot and combat power will not collapse so quickly. After all, there is an overseas fairy mountain to support it at that time. There are so many subplots but none of them have been explored. Su Changli wanted to be a swordsman who was happy with revenge, but he could only suffer the pain of being a killer. Su Muyu didn't want to kill anyone, but he only knew how to kill people. The transformation of Suchanghe. Mu Yumo and Tang Lianyue cannot love each other. There are still a lot of things that can be mined, the old man of the Tang Sect, the Solitary Sword Immortal, the Wrath Sword Immortal, the five great eunuchs, there are too many... Seeing how well you can kill people when you leave Xueyue City, damn it, I want to shout in your ear, "Stop! You just don't want to write anymore!" Like I just wanted to write a 90-chapter short story, but I seemed to have been forced to write more than 100 chapters, and I am still writing it now. It is a bit torture to myself. To be honest, I just cut it off and then think about it carefully. With your writing style, as long as you structure it well, you will definitely be able to write it well. What a pity, the story of the first 90 chapters, which is similar to a third-person perspective of participating in singing, is very well written. What a pity. You can be considered the best among the writing fans. The previous plot structure is also very good, but you participated but did not force changes. So sorry...

This book is on a downhill journey. The further you go, the more you get lost. The original plot is borrowed from other books, which is useless.

It's been dozens of chapters and I'm still besieging you. I would like to call you the strongest when it comes to water👍

I haven't seen many Jiuge fanfics that can be completed, and I hope it won't be an eunuch.

The protagonist has become an immortal, even if his injuries have not fully recovered, he will not be able to beat the two Gui Zhen. The author also mentioned before that there is a gap between the wandering world and Gui Zhen. In addition, Jun Yu can fight one against two or even three in the same realm with just one and a half steps of Gui Zhen. But when it comes to the protagonist, things have changed again.

This paragraph does not express the spirit of the wandering realm at all. It is very wordy and watery. Farewell!

I basically broke down after writing it. In the world of Shaoge, let alone the Mysterious Mirror, even the Sword Immortal is not afraid of the royal family. Later, I will make a Mysterious Mirror that is afraid of the royal family and luck. It is nonsense, not to mention the scene where the Mystical Mirror is walking all over the place and the Sword Immortal is worse than a dog.

It was Ye Dingzhi's own fault back then. Can he really blame all the blame on Emperor Mingde? Back then, he was seriously injured and fell into the palace. He ate from the palace and drank from the palace. He also had an unclear relationship with the concubine of the palace at that time.

Back then, what really drove King Langya to a dead end were his closest followers, people like Ye Xiaoying. It was they who single-handedly caused that tragedy.

It is Xiao Se who hopes to ascend the throne, and hopes that Xiao Se can understand his father and understand the true way of the emperor. The Heavenly Sword is a sword that slays evil and eliminates demons. It is the true sword of heaven. Only by holding this sword and ascending to the throne can Xiao Se reshape the Great Wall, and will not allow those in the Mystic Realm to use force to violate the prohibition.

In Apocalypse City, people in the Shenyouxuan realm can bully the emperor, do not take the emperor seriously, and suppress him at will, just like they don't take anyone else seriously. This emperor acted so cowardly that he was no different from a puppet. This kind of situation of using force to violate the prohibition and using force to interfere in the affairs of the court will inevitably lead to chaos in the court in the long run. In the end, people in the mysterious realm will control the destiny of the court, and the imperial power will be like a puppet.