The Sword of the Red Mansion Comes from Beyond the Sky

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Personally, I feel that this is the best one among all the fics involving the story of the Red Mansion Immortal. If there is a better one, please recommend it. The good thing about this book is that the fusion of the fairy world and the human world is more reasonable. Long Aotian is not brainless, and he is not too aggrieved. The innovative characters are reasonable and not redundant. Everyone has their own role, unlike most of the original characters in Red Mansion, which are a bit useless. The roles of the royal ladies do not overwhelm the women in the Red Mansions. This is a common problem in many Red Mansions novels, including The Red Mansions. The reason why I abandoned it is that the role of the princess completely outweighs the role of the women in the Red Mansions. It was too erotic. One of the highlights of this book is that the scenes of The Girl in the Red Mansion are very well designed. The girls are not accepted just for the sake of being picked up. At least many of the badly written Feng Lazi still look like normal women in this book; many Miaoyu who are not well written are also very vivid, and they are my favorite Miaoyu in the Red Mansion novel I have read; the heroine Sister Lin is a bit unsatisfactory in the early stage, but the fairy design in the later period really increases the influence of Sister Lin in the whole story. The author said that the identity of the fairy will be properly handled in the later stage. I'll wait and see; Xichun's design is also very unique, but the characters are somewhat similar to other characters in other Red Mansions novels, which makes me feel that their emotions are just reasonable, but not eye-catching; Xiangling's description is very popular, and they are all naive girls, but the original The book allows her to grow and have emotions. I think she is the most realistic and human Xiangling in terms of design... There are many more that I won't mention one by one, because the author did not expand on all the characters in Red Mansions until the 400th chapter, so I will only mention these few that have a profound impression. There are also shortcomings, that is, except for the characters who have written more, the others are really casual, including the four princes and eight princes, and the characters are gone before they are established. The killing was decisive, but the handling was also very simple, and the violence was too strong. This is actually very important to cultivating immortals. Mortals are too insignificant. In the eyes of the protagonist, and also in the eyes of the readers, they are too insignificant. This kind of treatment is reasonable but sometimes seems too childish, so I skipped some scenes to watch. However, I will respect the author's creative ideas and feel the fantasy of Red Mansions in different people's hearts. If the plot is childish, just skip it. If you really don't like it, just don't follow it. Let's respect each other. There are many Red Mansions, and you can always find something to pursue.

Is the heroine Jia Mu? It's not that I don't watch it

I found some pictures on my phone that are very touching

Open a post to explain the many problems you see. First, some people say that a branch is afraid of being affected by a hammer. I am a little speechless here. As a time traveler, why would you risk your life to bet whether the emperor's sword will cut it off? There is something wrong with your thinking. Shouldn't the sword be in your own hands? When the time comes that the emperor is no longer the son of a human being, he will be removed! Second, some people say that the protagonist spends money lavishly and rewards his subordinates with a thousand taels of silver. This is indeed outrageous in the eyes of ordinary people, but Jia Qi is not an ordinary person! He is a martial artist (of course you can also say he is a cultivator), his upper limit is far higher than that of ordinary people, and it is not a matter of minutes to get some yellow and white things, and he is not that fancy about gold and silver. Just like someone now, he sets a small goal, 100 million. For ordinary people, this is not a small goal, a lifetime is enough. Third, why did the protagonist go to Jinling? Why didn't he find a reason to leave? I wonder if book friends have noticed the pit I buried when the protagonist left Beijing. Why should a branch of the Jia family be monitored? He had a goal when he went to Jinling, to determine what the immortals in this world were so that he could make plans. Zhen Shiyin was a breakthrough point, and Xiang Ling was a stepping stone. Of course, the author himself also liked this little girl. Secondly, the current situation of the protagonist is that he possesses the Great Huangting, but cultivation always takes time. It will not be very long. When the combat power has not reached its peak, you have to make some other preparations, isn't it? Lin Ruhai is at the right time. That's all for now, and thank you all for your support. Finally, I would like to make a digression. Comments should not involve personal attacks. Buyu will check the comment area every day. I will ban you if I find out. Normal discussions and exchanges are welcomed by Buyu. Sayunara, I love you all, okay!

If you are already cultivating immortality, you can just kill the emperor and become the emperor yourself. You have to clear the dungeon for a while and then become the emperor in the finale.

What was a good semi-invincible article earlier turned out to be like this now, with a good hand of cards being played to pieces, the protagonist being disconnected, and a storm about to come. The storm is still on the way, has it come yet? Tathagata! Is the hero awake? Like waking up! The romance was not clearly written, and the war was not described in a positive way at all. Now, either this character is jealous, or that character is guessing, and they can come up with a hook! Write about Dahuangting with a hammer😅

Really, the personality of the character with two souls in one body has changed too much! In the latest chapter, Xichun has awakened her magic ability? Is this all people cultivating immortality? When reading Red Mansions novels, one wants to see who can write the characters in Red Mansions more closely to the original novel. The protagonist can have a personality change, but the personality change should not be too big. Will Jia Baoyu also have to awaken the magic in future writings? "Dying awake is more terrifying" might as well be changed to Xichun awakening the memory of the immortal, knowing his identity and the ending of the original work but being unable to do anything about it, and then highlighting the protagonist's pretense of changing his fate against the will of heaven, and paving the way for the girls to rely on the protagonist.

At first, I was drawn in by the protagonist's decisiveness and self-centeredness, but it turned out to be more and more wrong. Later, the author didn't know whose writing method he learned from, and the protagonist turned into little Karami, chattering all day long, and having deep worries. For example, the section about Lin Daiyu was so gross and very unpleasant to watch. Can't we just lift the table from the beginning and kill Baoyu? He kept chattering there for most of the day, letting others make plans. Extremely unhappy, what a waste of my money.

May I ask how Yuanchun arranged it? Is she the heroine? If not, forget it, but don't wait until the emperor sleeps with you before you take her away, that would be too disgusting

This book is useless. It was good in the first place and I kept subscribing. But the author caught Lin Daiyu messing around. Who is to blame! Since the second time I plotted against Lin Daiyu, I haven't booked it again. I came back by chance today to take a look, and sure enough, she was already struggling to survive.

The people who ransacked the house were from direct lineages and there were also some evildoers. Why do people from a branch like the male protagonist always think about being implicated? It's strange that someone from a branch of a fandom always thinks like this.

Daiyu, Daiyu, Daiyu

I have always wanted to ask you a question. You, the golden finger, got the power from writing novels, so why don't you continue writing? Dahuangting alone is still not enough.

I can tell that the author likes the book Snow in the Snow very much. But you should also look at the background when copying the text. I really don't know how people in Red Mansions would be moved by reading Snow in the Snow.

87 version Sister Lin

I have read 48 chapters of this book, and there are quite a lot of them. I specially subscribed to one chapter to talk about two poisoning points. The first one: It's really outrageous to buy a maid with one hundred thousand taels of silver. Later I killed the trafficker and took the money, so I endured it. Second: As a son of the Jia family, you have martial arts skills and helped Lin Ruhai achieve great achievements. But you went to the north to serve as a soldier by yourself. Is there something wrong? And even if you are a soldier, you still give a speech like a pyramid scheme brainwashing. It's awkward, isn't it? The creativity of your book is really good, and the rest is really hard to describe. Come on, author.

The Red Mansion is all about the harem. I really made myself sick. Is there really a Red Mansion with a single female protagonist?

In fact, just accept one or two people casually. It is better not to accept Daiyu and Baochai. It is also good to accept just a maid or find a rich lady from outside. The Red Mansion fandom is too samey now. In fact, in the beginning, you can go for a while or break away from the Jia Mansion. If you can go to the frontier army and slowly develop a rebellion, you can It looks good, or you can just find a reason to leave the Jia family in the early stage and get slapped in the face later. The outline must be changed a little to be fresh, and it can have a little meaning with the Red Mansion. You don't need to complain all over the garden. After all, the title of the Duke is also obtained by killing. The above are purely my own thoughts. Don't scold me.

Wouldn't this require the original heroine to be forced into the position? ? ? Come on, how many original Red Mansion novels have died because of the original heroine?

The author should stop writing and just start a new book. Everything you wrote later is messy

After writing this book for a long time, Sister Lin is almost becoming a stranger.

No, bro, it's been more than a hundred chapters since the hero fell into a coma, and he hasn't recovered yet. When will this be written?

The first heroine in the following book seems to be Xichun, the second heroine is Miaoyu, the third heroine is Cailuan, the fourth heroine is Yuanchun, Tanchun, etc. Lin Daiyu is just a soy sauce, the male protagonist often disappears, and the story is draggy and meaningless. What else can readers expect? ? ? ? ?

How long is the male protagonist going to be offline before he falls down and abandons the trap?

After chasing it for so long, I thought about it seriously. What would have happened if Jia Yu had written not The Fierce Sword but Emperor Domination and Zhe Tian, ​​or he had secretly hidden a copy of Perfect and Dou Po in his study? !

Can I add some sperm

This should not be more refined

Hahahahahaha, this book is finally finished! After enduring all kinds of problems for a long time, I finally cast my monthly vote, posted a comment, and goodbye!

Finally back 😁