After Rebirth, I Decided to Make Games Again

The author writes so well, why are there so many haters who keep criticizing the author? I really can't understand it. Is it difficult to admit that the author is excellent?

I feel that the author does not have enough social experience: buying a 1 million BMW for the parents of ordinary employees working in an establishment will definitely cause trouble for the parents. The author had just written about the sister-in-law who was twisted by jealousy at the party for entering college, and then wrote this kind of plot again. Was she planning to let her parents continue to experience the burning jealousy of their colleagues in the company? Why is the protagonist also in his 30s and a manager-level leader of a top 100 company in his previous life? He wouldn't have done something so young and ignorant of the importance. If you don't have enough social experience, it's best to practice writing by writing fantasy or something like that, but it's not recommended to write urban articles. The imaginary urban life will have too many immature plots that make people frown.

The main plot is not reflected in the article. The content is mainly about making games. After reading 40 chapters, there are not even two chapters of actual game making. What is the difference between this and the summary version of "the protagonist is reborn and makes a game and then succeeds"? You describe more of other messy content. I don't comment too much on emotional articles. After all, most authors can't write well But you really have a lot of content other than games and emotional articles. You might as well change the introduction to "Returning to Youth Life", which is more relevant to your reality. International content If you are writing this article based on the game as a selling point, then I think your article has failed. It is the 9th and you only have nine monthly passes. Of course, you cannot rule out the possibility of overtaking in the later corners But to be honest, you are not Master Gu, and you are not a mortal who cannot overtake in the later stage. Writing novels is a dead end, but if you write it as a hobby and don't make a living out of it, then I'll encourage you to keep writing it.

It's more like a stock trading article. The game is just a link to advance the plot, and there isn't much space.

It's a bit overwhelming. It's a confession, and it's a hero saving a beauty. Why does it feel like I'm reading an ancient urban novel? Don't worry, there will be another gangster who takes advantage of sex later, a pervert on the bus, and the heroine's college classmates to harass her.

I feel like the author writes wherever he wants. I have read about thirty chapters. The title and introduction are like branch lines. I occasionally mention a few sentences. They mainly focus on holding a class reunion during the college entrance examination, talking about love travel, and spending many chapters on traveling to Mount Tai. Since I like writing about these daily routines, why not just write about daily love affairs? Do people who are attracted by the title want to read about traveling to Mount Tai? Figure out your positioning. I haven't seen the back yet, but when I glanced at the chapter names, they are all urban daily life... I don't understand what the author wants to write.

There are indeed remarkable things about this book. What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei turned against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun and Moon God Cult and resolutely wandered around the world with the gentleman Jian Yue Buqun, it made me cry.

Why are you writing about the driving school thing? It looks so disgusting.

Generally speaking, in game novels, the protagonists are usually seniors who are interns or have graduated. You are taking the college entrance examination, so I looked at the table of contents. There are 70 chapter titles, and about 10 of them are related to the game. The rest are about going out to play, learning to drive, and starting school. What's the point? I came here just for the title. I don't want to read this.

The writing is very good. I feel that the emotional line is more interesting than the game 😄. I can change it in the next book, haha

Build a building, and you can express your opinions freely about this book, games, and daily plots. Um, try to be nice. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

It feels a bit literary and youthful, and I can't accept it.

The author's writing is good, and it feels smooth to read, but the specific details are a bit lacking. The daily life when I first traveled was the place where I felt the best, plain and warm. But when it comes to making a game in Chapter 8, it's still like this, which is too much! There are too many ramblings and explanations at the beginning of the game production and it seems watery, which is very bad! Only the whims and whims of the protagonist are captured and polished, and all other words are streamlined, so that it will look more comfortable! After all, I am writing about games. If all the plots are written flatly, it will become mediocre, which is definitely not okay. The story of the beef noodle couple in the back is also the same. It is written from the perspective of passers-by. Without adding emotions, the whole story becomes very bland. In such a place, the story should be captured separately and focus on highlighting the daily warmth of the young couple as an embellishment of the story. This way the writing will be more interesting, right? Will it have a finishing touch?

This book is about stock trading. If you want to read other articles, you can leave it.

When do you stop going to school? Kick me and I'll start my subscription from there.

In cuckold stories, the author writes about the protagonist's girlfriend being fucked by pornographic men in various ways.

Because I prefer the plot of the game part, I felt that the plot of this book was a little draggy.

Does the author not understand legal responsibility? Let's not talk about whether the instructor was that stupid during the driving lesson. Attempted sexual assault is illegal, but it is also illegal for the male protagonist to hit someone. Didn't the author know? Even if the defense is excessive, the male protagonist and the author should have called the police and videotaped him to tell him that he had violated the law. If he stopped him, he could not hit him, otherwise everything that was right would become wrong.

I saw 57 pictures and didn't want to read them. There are a lot of questions.

Author updates are finally normal. This book is a dry text. It has a lot of small details, but it is still readable. If you like to watch Wenzhao Gong play games, you can take a look. If you are not interested in this subject, I do not recommend it.

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It is recommended that you don't touch things that you can't write. You know what I'm talking about. To screen readers, first think about whether you have the ability.

Aren't there only six of this book including me? I read it to the end. It's quite good.

I remembered why I stopped watching the first game after watching it, because I didn't like stock trading articles.

It looks good and comfortable, slowly advance, already invested, already voted for four recommendations, already voted for two monthly votes

Why is this eunuch still allowed to be a drug addict today?

It's good. It's good to write slowly and at this pace.

Now, if you want to get good grades and be emotional, you must write well now.

Can you write down how much the game earns?