Prehistoric: Beginning with Foolish Old Man Moving the Mountains

Why is the author so stubborn? A man can bend and stretch.

Speaking of prehistoric times, is the story about Yu Gong over? In the end, the mountain god was punished to face the wall for a thousand years, but the women who died were so tragic. Well.

It is best not to have people with too high mana appear in the early stage, and proceed step by step, like clearing levels and defeating monsters, otherwise it will easily collapse. The realm system is best written in

It's a bit weird. The protagonist interacts so much with the Witch Clan that the protagonist can be incorporated into the Witch Clan. The Jiejiao is a broken ship and cannot be boarded. Then why do you think that the Wu Clan is a good boat and can step on it? According to the legend, they are also a definite failure and cannot compare to Jie Jiao. At least Jie Jiao still has a legacy. It's really awkward to be so close to the Wu clan.

This novel describes the selfishness, hypocrisy, greed, insidiousness and cruelty of the real human race, cannibalism, ingratitude, and treachery. To be honest, the human race in the novel is really disgusting🤢

God never said there was a need for human sacrifice. It was all added by man himself.

The plot is frustrating and not satisfying at all. The protagonist has no golden fingers at all and is completely a three-way man.

Such a wonderful paradise was ruined by a bad old man. The mountain protects this village and is destroyed by the people in this village. If you feel that this place is not good, you can leave alone. If I stay in this village, I must scold this bad old man to death.

Some things in ancient times cannot be explained clearly. The story of Yu Gong Yishan is not about moving mountains, but about daring to lead a whole family to fight against oppression. As long as they are united, the so-called wise old man can only smile and say nothing.

Since the original Tao of Buddhism and the Tao of Hunyuan completed the world view of the prehistoric world, the people behind are just trying to pick up people's wisdom. At most, they increase the force value and expand the map, but in fact it is nonsense. And the dog-tailed Diao forcibly took over Journey to the West. These authors expanded the map countless times, and continued to add calamities to the 13-year journey to the West. Do you want to laugh me to death? The only thing that the author lacks is the writing style and the logical structure of the plot. Honghuangliu has been in decline in recent years, and it is indeed not very popular. As long as the author persists, he will definitely achieve success, because according to my reading for so many years, all the authors who can stand out are their own systems, that is, what you write is different from others, and you have your own set of logic. Even the details still need to be polished. The time span of this book still feels too low. Since a calamity of 50,000 yuan will be measured, the time should be measured in terms of yuan, rather than ten thousand years. Refer to Tomato's Devouring the Starry Sky and directly transition in terms of epochs. The word "New Year" basically does not appear later. In the world of origin, reincarnation is used again, and epochs are also eliminated. Eliminated, so the Great Desolate must use Yuan Hui, but it is a bit exaggerated for the protagonist to become Hunyuan within one calamity. Since the Great Desolate has gone according to his own ideas, there is actually no need to worry about the three calamities of the Open Heaven. This point can be referred to the Extraordinary Prehistoric. It can be set as a saint who gradually emerges from countless calamities. One calamity can at most become Da Luo, and a quasi-sage, like a saint, must at least have ten thousand calamities, right? How can this word come from without experiencing thousands of tribulations? This setting can also make the story of The Ancient World more interesting and the main line clearer. In the early stage, we compete for resources, in the middle stage, we become the son of calamity and break through Da Luo. Later, we become the black hand and break through the quasi-sage, and then we become the chess player and break through the saint. The prehistoric time is very long, and it is unreasonable to blindly focus on the first three tribulations. After all, 50,000 yuan in the prehistoric era is one calamity, and 480 million calamities is one immeasurable calamity. If there is a chance to become a saint after one calamity, then wouldn't it be crowded with saints before returning to the ruins? Anyway, this book is written sincerely. It is a little rough in terms of writing and plot, but it does have a refreshing taste. I hope it can be continuously improved in the future.

I read a review from a book friend before and said it was very interesting! Excluding Hongjun in Honghuangliu novels, the Sanqing should be the most calculating. If you follow the tribulation of Fengshen Journey to the West, you will find that Taoism worships the Sanqing, and Buddhism worships the Tathagata as well as Randen and Maitreya. They no longer worship the Second Sage of the West, and the Western Sect and the Second Sage have retired. And who is Tathagata? Duobao, the great disciple of Jiejiao. Who is Ran Deng? The deputy leader of Chanjiao said that among the three Buddhas in the past and future, only Maitreya is taught by the West, and the four great Bodhisattvas only have Ksitigarbha. Add to this the fact that Laozi transformed into a Buddha, and you will find that Buddhism has been completely emptied out, and Nuwa is logically the Holy Mother of the human race. Nowadays, it is almost impossible to see Nuwa in any temple. I always feel that the Conferring of Gods is a play created by the Sanqing Dynasty after discovering the rise of Destiny in the West. It emptied out Buddhism and also emptied out the heaven. . If you think about it carefully, most of the official positions in the Heavenly Court fell on Jie Jiao, and most of the fruition status of Buddhism fell on Chan Jiao. In addition, with the luck of Laozi's Human Race and Human Sect, most of the luck and incense of the Three Realms were gathered in the hands of the Sanqing. After the journey to the west, the Sanqing was no longer a member of the Xuanmen and established his own Taoist sect! I am the one who turned Buddhism into a fool! Terrible 😱

It's well written. The title almost made me miss it. The author has already written about his own prehistoric times. He has not kneeled down to lick the Three Pure Ones (the Three Pure Ones are really not ranked in the chaos, and they are the most arrogant in the nest). He has not spent all his time on the human race (if the sea of ​​​​human race goes away, I will not leave you behind). Only you are real, and the Tao is eternal. You don't dare to fight for this or that, so why should you win? Please give me your support.

Da Ru: Be bold! I, the Confucian, cannot rebuke the Turks, the Tatars, or the slaves, so why can't I rebuke you loyal ministers and good generals, and you stupid people? Do you dare to dissent? Let you see my Confucian tricks!

The whole book is full of excitement, the language expression is logical and self-consistent, and the story is wonderful, but I just want to ask: the protagonist can have multiple avatars to achieve enlightenment, which is awesome plus, what about the saints in the heavens? What about the mighty powers of the heavens? What about the person who created the method of seizing a body in a dream? It's impossible for them to have clones, right? Is the author ready to round things off?

By the way, has anyone studied what became of Pangu's little boy?

Reading this kind of novel can be exhausting, so why are you so scheming? The powerful ones can suppress everything without even using their brains. If you want to know what the secret of induction is, you will understand. Writing ancient novels and adding conspiracies and intrigues just for the sake of plot is a waste of time.

Why is there such a thing as Daluo Sanxian? It's so embarrassing to see that it's neither above nor below.

Speaking of Confucianism, this word only appeared in the Spring and Autumn Period, and you are now after the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors, how can Confucianism appear? I hope the author can explain it

The author of this book came up with it as soon as he came up with it. He forgot about his previous setting. He said that the law of heaven is ruthless and relatively fair, and later said that it is fair to all living beings. Later, he said that the law of heaven has double standards. These are all your reasons. You really said that although it is good, there are too many loopholes. Even if I reincarnate, I can write a lot of other things, let alone

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I found a problem. Without reincarnation, souls cannot be born independently in the three thousand worlds. Then how can the creatures that were not revealed before they were occupied continue to exist? Don't tell me, they are all innate creatures, and there is no reincarnation in the ancient world. A six-path reincarnation disk is locked in the reincarnation world of one of the worlds. According to you, the protagonist's fate lamp can also be used. After all, they are all on the same level. The protagonist can also get some destiny or something. Without this three thousand world, it would be incomplete. Otherwise, reincarnation is lacking and unreasonable. After all, although the avenue of reincarnation is very light, it is definitely not the first among the three thousand avenues. It is so important. I think the things transformed by other avenues are not that important to the world. It is very puzzling.

Overall, it's okay. Some places are too watery, so I can barely justify it. 7 Points. It's a good way to expand the prehistoric world view. The plot in the first part is quite tight, the middle is a bit of a binding, and there's a climax later. I just feel that the protagonist keeps practicing in the end, which is not interesting.

I met an author, copied and pasted it and published it, it was disgusting

If it were me, I wouldn't want Xuanyuan to be the Heavenly Emperor.

Recommend a novel - Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King (formerly known as Peerless Tang Sect: My Simulation of the Dragon King Legend)

It should be a higher heaven and earth, not the earth

The dark world, all the people are evil people🙀🙀I can't understand that the fairy spirit fluttering's ancient world is like this, it's so fucking dark, how can a saint be like this? ? ? ? It's not that he can't do this, but you can't write them all in this way, without showing the wisdom of a saint. . . Just like a hypocrite and a villain. . . . Who has accepted this nimble thing?