Transform the Heavens

Going faster is really not enough

In what age are you still writing about immortals cutting off the mortal world and starting to cultivate immortality again?

Anyone who has been to high school, after watching this thing, I would like to call him Shennong if I can read Chapter 20 onwards.

Seeing that the pig's trotters let the culprit go, after the culprit's daughter begged for mercy, he deliberately spared the culprit's life, saying that it was to let him atone for his sins and to relieve his pain by doing good deeds. But it was really better to torture and kill him or to suffer until he died. Just because the person who committed the murder is already dead, does it mean that no matter how good he does, it will be meaningful to the dead person? Building bridges, paving roads, and making tourist attractions free of charge are of no use to these dead people. It's true that a wicked person puts down his butcher's knife and becomes a Buddha immediately. Isn't it because the author made such an arrangement because his daughter would become a enemy if he killed her? How could his descendants be with the culprit's daughter? But the plot is so bad. It's better to arrange for the villain to die, and they will directly turn against each other. Or the daughter of the villain can let go of her hatred and continue to lick the pig's feet.

Extremely poisonous! Retreat quickly! Retreat! Retreat!

The setting is actually average and even a bit old-fashioned, but the author's urban writing is quite good. For now, it's considered a fairy tale among new books.

It's not just a matter of priority. For a Hokkien person who lives near the sea, Mazu and the ancestors have the same status! Please put yourself in your shoes, how would you feel if someone wanted to scold your ancestors? ? ! ! !

The question is, how did you survive the previous dozens of chapters? Shen Nong must have been poisoned to death. It's whiter than the story of the Big Bad Wolf and the Pink Rabbit, it's almost like a kindergarten classroom story. It's really an insult to IQ. It includes the bombing of the goddess statue, classmate Bai Fumei, and the courier plot. There are too many elements.

Wang rides a deer and Pei slaughters a dog. Is that you, Gouzi?

All I can say is that it's too ink. The protagonist of Zhutian Yandao directly suppressed him all the way. You, the protagonist, are obviously powerful, but you still have to fight with a group of minions.

It's 2023. There are too many private goods, so you shouldn't look forward to more novels like this. As far as I know, they are historical, light novels, wireless novels, and martial arts. Everything written is filled with personal information. It made people watch a show. For example, in this book, you just pretend, pretend to be patriotic, and everyone knows it, the whole world knows it, you are patriotic, stop showing off! ! !

The front is fine, but the back is stretched. Janna, who was more than a thousand meters away, spit out a fireball the size of a millstone and it didn't collapse. Then a containment object or something popped out. The updates are slow and cool, and they are becoming less and less watery. Did you really write the beginning?

The immortals written in today's novels have no power, but their wisdom is the same as that of ordinary people. Unlike Chen Laomo, a thought is comparable to a supercomputer, and his spiritual consciousness is directly connected to the Internet and becomes the apocalypse.

What are you writing about? There is no aura. I thought it was the end of the Dharma era. It turns out that each monster is more outrageous than the last. It is several kilometers long and can destroy Hong Kong with just a few moves. What is the purpose of the company to hide it from ordinary people? The reasons given by the author are really funny

This author's writing skills and plot routines are not good. It reminds me of the novels from more than ten years ago that seemed to be in this style.

Comments after viewing Chapter 20 The theme is quite good. The main story of a real immortal traveling across the heavens to complete missions and upgrades The content of cultivating immortals is acceptable, but the first plot is about returning to the city to preach as a heavenly master. You just pass it on. I wrote a Tesla, and then another. After blowing up the Statue of Liberty, it was just about blowing up my childhood. Then I wrote about the apprentice and the two girls, who were rich girls, and the character in the play was called Ling'er. This combination of punches directly brought me back to the ancient times of the return of the urban immortal emperor more than ten years ago. It would be better not to write these example plots.

It's really just pretentious for the sake of pretentiousness, so this is the disadvantage of writing at a high level at the beginning, and it is impossible to write the kind of charm that readers want (here the reader refers to me). It feels like it's just giving up the place, letting the protagonist show off, and then receiving shock after shock. Personally, if I want to read this type of document, I won't look for it on the Xianxia channel.

By the way, the bunch of comments in the comment area about making money together are really stupid. To be honest, this book is considered a high-quality book among Zhutianwen, not mentioning the fairy grass. In terms of writing and story plot, there are not too many poisonous points. There are some jokes in some places, but they are all small poisonous points, but it does not affect the overall sense of reading. I really don't understand the extremely poisonous and poisonous comments made by a group of sunspots. Is this book really so bad? You are the ones who are really stupid. Have you really read a few chapters?

It's so poisonous. It perfectly avoids all the fun points. The plot drags on and rubs the reader's IQ on the ground. To be more specific, it's about an immortal interacting with a Qi-refining-level cultivator. It has more than a hundred chapters. It's surprising that there is no fun at all. It's a skill to write like this.

The plot is exciting and the content is very innovative.

Update, you are so quick to update... Why don't you update?

Q is definitely pretty good. Come on, author, I will give you my monthly vote

What about the new book? Don't you write books on both accounts? You've completely said goodbye to the novel world, right?

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