Zhutian: Starting from Becoming a Disciple of Yue Buqun

It says "something exists" in several places, which is too middle-of-the-road. Isn't it embarrassing for the author to read it? For example, there is a sentence "Even people in the world call a swordsman-like existence." Would it be more smooth if I deleted the "ordinary existence" and read it again?

I'm a little confused. Can a modern person really study and understand those Taoist teachings? Also, isn't it said that in the early stages of learning Taoism, one cannot beat those who practice martial arts? After just a few years of learning, one can defeat Feng Qingyang and drive away Dongfang Bubai? Is the world of Swordsman Jianghu so full of spiritual energy?

The historical background of Swordsman is probably the Jiajing Dynasty or the Wanli Dynasty. The author can set the time in the Jiajing Dynasty, and then use the power of the entire Ming Dynasty to collect Daozang. After all, as long as the Daojun emperor sees a little hope, he will dare to use the power of the whole country to help him cultivate immortality

Yue Buqun: Group leader, I have another time traveler here. How much can I sell it for if I sacrifice it to heaven? 👿

Personally, I still feel that I haven't written down where modern people's thinking has gone. Whether it's cultivation or martial arts, the essence is still the body. Warming the body, developing the body, and activating the body. These three are the three ladders. If you make a mistake, don't even think about it. At first, you borrow the power of heaven and earth, and later you drive it with yourself. Heaven and earth, if your body is not strong enough and you force it to be borrowed, you will just die quickly. There are no spells in the world, only the laws of heaven and earth are discovered and slowly evolve. The current knowledge of thunder can also explain this phenomenon. There is no strength or weakness. It depends entirely on oneself. No matter what, it is mainly nourishing, developing and activating.

I'm sick of reading it🤮, this book is so bad that it's terrible

It's true that the author is awesome🐮, just explain how to practice Taoism. The protagonist is so awesome that I can't get into it. If a modern person travels through martial arts, you don't use martial arts to enter Taoism. You go to martial arts to make money.

He bought a chapter specifically to complain about it. What the fuck is this? The plot is an insult to people's intelligence. It's so inexplicably forced to embarrass the plot.

What are you writing about? It was said earlier that Huashan Wulin was an upright person who came to become a disciple. Then Yue Buqun's first reaction was to kill someone? Is the protagonist still an eight-year-old child? What kind of decency is this? Whose first thought when seeing an eight-year-old child coming to be a disciple would be to kill someone? Isn't this purely a disease? And based on what you said, I don't want to be an ordinary person and live my life in confusion? Do ordinary people eat your rice? Is practicing martial arts noble? Does practicing martial arts make you superior to others? If you practice martial arts, why are you stepping on ordinary people? Do you eat the food of ordinary people? Do you wear clothes made by ordinary people? Are your parents ordinary people?

The embarrassing point is that the protagonist Daozang's strength is too nihilistic. It seems that Youdaozang has been able to dominate the crowd for 5 years. But Daozang, you didn't summarize and classify it so that readers can see it intuitively. Instead, you promoted the Huashan Hezong and then brought in other characters to change the map. I just saw a lonely truth.

Also, if you don't have the writing skills and cultural depth, don't pretend to be half-literate. Is it embarrassing?

It feels like your mind is obviously immature. People have sneaked up to the mountain. You are angry because they messed up the book. How about your "not being alarmed"? Do you still expect the robbers to behave themselves?

It's my fault that I didn't retract the first chapter. The writing is very poor and there are a lot of inner dramas. I sympathize with the author who has no writing ability.

The author raises the spiritual level too high, and there is no corresponding realm system to measure it. He just dismisses us as a spiritual person in everything. Besides, spiritual cultivation also depends on the wealthy couple, so even if the plot is okay, it doesn't make much sense.

I can't stand it even after reading the first chapter. Can an 8-year-old Japanese mother get access to information about martial arts? If you can ask for directions to HuashanTM, you may be kidnapped by a flower girl just after you go out.

Can't watch. Let's not talk about the author's poor writing skills. I don't even understand the plot of Swordsman. And the character development of the protagonist is not likeable either.

I really like the character that the author gave to the pig's feet. If he is in trouble, he will fight to the death and kill them all. I like it. But I really don't like comprehensive worlds. There are three types of worlds that I don't touch. One is the Cancer Courtyard, the other is the comprehensive world such as Zongwu Film and TV Series, and the third is the so-called weird and haunted world. Purely personal preference. See you soon.

Already read, a bad book! Each chapter gets worse than the last!