Zhutian: Start Taking Quests from Xiaoao

I have read dozens of chapters, and to be honest, they are so disappointing and a bit disgusting, most of them are like taking off your pants and farting. It's unnecessary.

There is nothing wrong with the overall situation of the novel, except that the system rewards are a bit rubbish. 1. The Zixia secret book has been rewarded, and then Yue Buqun wants to teach the Zixia secret book. It is better to just give the experience reward separately, and then wait for Yue Buqun to teach it and then add more. The same is true for the Huashan Sword Technique. 2. Returning to the original nature of basic internal strength is only the acquired five levels. I don't know if your acquired five levels of basic internal strength have opened up five of the twelve canonical classics, or the entire twelve canonical classics. 3. Generally speaking, the basic internal functions summarized by the twelve meridians are already very good. Huashan Neigong is inherited from Quanzhen Neigong. Even if it is slightly missing, it can open up the twelve meridians and the existence of the eight extraordinary meridians. It just takes decades to polish it. Not to mention Hunyuan Gong, the second of the Nine Gongs of Huashan, and the Zixia Secret Book above it. 4. Huashan Sword Technique and Basic Sword Technique can go hand in hand, but Huashan Sword Technique is more sophisticated than Basic Sword Technique, and the peak added value of Basic Sword Technique is not reflected in Huashan Sword Technique. 5. Basic internal strength and Huashan internal strength can only be of one kind, either basic internal strength or Huashan internal strength, and the characteristics of the two are different. Basic internal strength is neutral and peaceful, with no other characteristics. Huashan internal strength seems to be neutral and peaceful, but it has the characteristics of being right and winning, and seeking victory in danger. There can be no such thing as pretending to practice. It can only be said that the basic internal skills are transformed into Huashan internal skills. Probably just these small mistakes, the rest are fine.

The protagonist has already killed people from the Qingcheng sect, and he keeps saying that he misunderstood and wants others to let him go. I don't know how the author's brain circuit is developed.

A bear was sold for only one tael of silver to persuade him to give up.

There has been a recent shortage of books, and I think they are okay, but there are too few!

Eunuch Lin's father always wanted the pig's trotters to go to the Qingcheng faction to take the blame, and the protagonist kept rushing to Lin's house to lick them to help. If you want to help them, don't write about Eunuch Lin's father in such a disgusting way. Speechless, this is a poisonous point in the novel

It's a bit bad that the protagonist can only rely on system settings. He can't practice and learn by himself. He only relies on system tasks and can be recycled at any time.

Goldfinger is too rigid. I want you to quit.

Since it is a mission system, why not take on the mission of killing Japanese pirates? Is it because the author has poor vision or because he has no eggs?

The author doesn't think that describing the protagonist's psychological activities is the highlight, right? Smelly and long

The protagonist is always making up his mind, and it's watery and crooked

If you can do the task, do it. If you can write a story, write it. The author just keeps on repeating the dialogue when he has no mission to satisfy the plot. Plus the male protagonist's inner drama. Half of the whole article is an inner drama, plus the author's explanation. Those who don't know think that the author is trying to educate students about three views. Who are you preaching to? The plot is broken like this, but it's still the same after the author explained it.

How is the protagonist so handsome that he doesn't look like a human?

99 Out of 100 Zhutianliu martial arts fanfics start with Swordsman. How annoying.

The article contains too much nonsense and the word count is simply too low.

The author recommends changing careers as soon as possible. Writing books is not the only way to succeed in life.

This should be the author practicing his writing. It feels like the author is constantly trying! You can't watch it now, it's not mature yet!

There's nothing wrong with the writing, but I just didn't want to read it once I saw the system.

The protagonist has accumulated experience for a long time, and Dugu Nine Swords should be enough to reach the full level.

The realm of stupidity is divided, and it's a day after tomorrow. You can't read this kind of book. A good martial arts must be in a mindless fantasy realm.