A Time Traveler Starting from the Red Mansion
从红楼开始的时空旅者
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 104k Words
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Infinite Flow
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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46Chapters
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Too scattered. It's hard to grasp the topic, and the writing is a bit awkward.
Interesting. Keep up the good work.
A picture of Suihan and Three Friends only has so many chapters. It's at the very beginning of the story, and it's impossible to grasp the key points.
The first six chapters are just like this, they can't grasp the key points, and they don't have much to lead on.
There is still some creativity, the first few chapters are okay, but later on there are too many dialogues, one sentence is a whole chapter, two sentences of dialogue are a whole chapter, and the writing style needs to be improved.
Why is this character's dialogue so awkward? ?