Weird Immortal Cultivation Game

The more I watched, the more angry I became. I couldn't stand seeing Bai Xiaoya being taken away. The protagonist is like a humanoid natural disaster. Things happen wherever he goes. The villages and counties he walks along are basically wiped out. However, the protagonist has no B-level skills at all. Every time I think that the protagonist should not have noticed something, right? To the point where I really don't think it's my problem. Always bring a bunch of drag bottles, even though I can't protect myself, I still bring those players to hold me back. Being tied tightly to those players, working as a nanny for them, wiping their butts, there is no freedom at all. Overall, this is a pure sadomasochistic article with a bit of a refreshing feel! The protagonist is completely toyed with and applauded by those big forces, and is chased back and forth by them. Although he is able to repel the attacks every time, he will pay a huge price every time. Either most of the team members are killed or injured, or his friends are crippled or his whole family is killed, or even almost all the villagers die. The result is that the enemy is beaten back once, which is basically no big deal. Next time, some people will be sent to chase the protagonist, and then they will continue to kill a lot of people around the protagonist, and the cycle starts again. The more I watch it, the more annoyed I get. I really can't stand it anymore. Leave a comment to warn others who come after me!

I've made progress in the past three days; I'm just telling you how I feel. The book is good, I know the author wants to create a sense of doomsday; Moreover, the initial plot is compact and fascinating, I want to see the direction and development of this book. From what I can tell, the current progress is a bit abnormal. There is no way to go out and deal with things realistically in the previous stage. This is too out of the plot and does not give the reader a timeline, let alone the protagonist. At the time of switching roles, there is enough excuse to go out, after all, he is on the run; Bai Xiaoya's appearance is nothing more than a supporting role to enhance the protagonist's combat power and bring the immortal into the game, but the supporting role is too profound. It will make readers sick. As a roommate who is rarely seen in the early stage, this character starts to brush his face in the middle and later stages, and then a series of family plots to attract the protagonist's favorability progress bar. And then a wave of wisdom and inexplicable joining the gang (do you remember how vigilant about things at the beginning? And this is Bai Xiaoya who has gone through an abnormal event). When something is about to happen, he does not log out to call or discuss with the protagonist (?). In the end, the protagonist is cut off, which improves his strength. I think it is still disgusting. Because this plot is simply a show of manipulation... The part about Bai Xiaoya, who seems to want to create a supporting role but also wants to be a tool, is completely different to put it bluntly; As a tool, he is successful. As a supporting role, it failed. As an experience resume jar, success. As an alert character created from the beginning, it failed. I always feel that the plot is forced to be sold; Basically, what I feel now is that there are no "real" supporting characters in this book, at least not in the early stages, because everyone you see will be killed by the author, otherwise they will be killed or disabled or directly withdraw from the plot prepared by the protagonist group. If you look at this improvement path... No one can catch up with the development of the protagonist. No matter how you sell your feelings, selling too much will only lead to boredom, and it will directly develop the boredom of "the supporting character is waiting to die". Fortunately, this boredom is not serious yet, it is just taking shape. Otherwise, according to this mortality rate, if the watches sold account for 60% of the mortality rate and 50% of the deaths due to "affecting reality", this number is huge. After all, tens of thousands of sets are sold in one city for the protagonist. Let's talk about the previous part, When the protagonist knows about the problems that will affect reality and learns about the simultaneous impact, he should know that things will happen in reality. But as a "modern person", he obviously does not have "humanity" and "modern sense", nor does he have the change and progress in the development mentality of a "game nerd". The wit of entering the game at the beginning was like a joke. It was not there when it should have been. After the incident, he never mentioned this idea to his friends, even before joining the organization and after joining. And this, whether the parchment is in his hand has nothing to do with it, and it does not even prevent Bai Xiaoya from entering the game. Only here I seriously feel the "intelligence blow" from the author to the protagonist, and the protagonist still sometimes jumps out of the strange understanding that this is a game. I have experienced it personally, and even joined the organization, and there will be some "spiritual root version", and similar "game" thinking mode is obviously abnormal. But I still have to emphasize at the end that this book is good to read, and it is not easy to write. If you want to consider all aspects of it... I guess it can get good results once it is written, but I don't want to disgust most readers just to create a sense of doomsday. If it wasn't a good read, I wouldn't type so much to give feedback to the author, and just abandon the book. Anyway, put it on the bookshelf first and keep it!

The subject matter and the framework are a good bowl of soup. What a pity. . . The protagonist is the rat shit

It's really water. It can obviously be said to be a flashlight. The author insists on writing that there is something similar to a flashlight here. Let's see if this is a flashlight. Then after two hundred words on the water, it is confirmed that this is a flashlight that can emit light. I really believe it.

I have read Chapter 529 in the past few days. Let me tell you my thoughts after reading it. I like the subject matter, and the author's writing style is also good. I haven't caught up with the update yet, so I don't have much experience with it, so I won't talk about it. In terms of plot rhythm, I didn't catch up with the progress, so I didn't have an intuitive feeling and skipped it. I don't care about small details or bugs. The protagonist is a not very smart person. Many times, the protagonist cannot think of things that we readers can think of from the perspective of God, or cannot react and makes wrong choices. Whether the author could only write it this way or deliberately wrote it this way, it actually doesn't matter as long as it doesn't affect the direction of the main plot. What makes me uncomfortable is that many online writers have a common problem: they want to write a masterpiece. Because in the history of literature, almost all excellent works end in tragedy without exception. Mr. Lu Xun said: "Tragedy is tearing something valuable to pieces in front of you!" Just because you have witnessed the destruction of "something valuable", you can't help but feel shocked inside. Of the four great classics, all three except "Journey to the West" are tragedies, and these three happen to occupy the top three of China's best novels! But it's not necessary. This is orthodox literature. It's not that I look down on Internet articles, but that fast food literature like Internet articles makes readers happy and allows readers to relax their minds under the heavy pressure of life. In addition to the main character, well-written supporting characters are also the key to attracting readers. Well-written supporting characters are also the key to attracting readers. In the end, few of the characters who followed the main character ended up well. The readers became even more depressed after reading it. Can the results of your book be good? Can it be taken to the next level? Anyway, I wouldn't be in the mood to vote if I feel uncomfortable watching it. I talked a lot of nonsense, but the main thing is this. The protagonist dies wherever he goes, which is a bit like the Dark Blood Age. It is also a good article, but it is too depressing. I have not finished reading it, and it is still under the bookshelf. I wrote it in bits and pieces, so I can give the author a reader feedback. It may be a little late, but I can still change it slowly, and I hope less people will die. 😅

After reading more than 500 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The plot of the first 300 or so chapters is pretty good and there are not many bugs. However, starting from more than 400 chapters, the protagonist has finished the village and the county and it has become a bit off-putting. The protagonist's escape from Qingshan later is too buggy. The protagonist must be at least 3 levels high, have home field advantage, and be a legend-level weirdo with full strength. It is impossible to keep a protagonist who is daytime, injured, full of weird status, and full of erysipelas effect. It's okay if you write about the protagonist's various unreasonable cross-level battles. This is really disgusting.

Because of that strong recommendation, I added this book to my bookshelf, and ended it hastily without taking a closer look😒. Now that I think about it, I almost missed a good book 😅 at that time. Then I was short of books, so I opened this book. When I read this book, I felt more and more excited as I read it. It is well written and always surprising, and the storyline is a bit funny and joyful 😁 The overall atmosphere is pleasant and humorous. Of course, the story also has profound meaning. Through the progress of the story, we understand a lot... There are also various jokes in the book, which are all very well used😊. Some of the jokes that I didn't know also got the answers in this book. The plot of the story is very compact, making it hard to miss the number of words. Even on the panel, it looks very concise. Although it appears frequently, it is not wordy... Listing so many advantages, I am afraid that the author is paralyzed 😏. I personally think that there can be more drama in the supporting roles? The author needs to improve his updates! From the beginning to the end, it doesn't take much time, and I finished it in just a short amount of time. In short, the author is short in one sentence! ! ! 😤 Finally, I hope that the weird immortal cultivating game will be liked by more and more people and become popular🤭.

Based on the name of this book, it is an alternative novel that combines elements of three styles. It has a weird horror style, a system of cultivating immortals, and game elements of killing monsters and exploding materials. The author has shown his excellent plot writing skills in "Infinite Reincarnation Game" (404) and "This Game is Not Simple". I am very much looking forward to the development of this new book. The advantages and disadvantages of this book are very obvious. The advantage is the special plot. After reading some chapters, it is difficult for me to imagine how the author will synchronize reality and game data according to the introduction. I am very much looking forward to the development of the plot. The disadvantage is that the early plot routines are relatively vulgar, and the characters' language has a lot of Internet language memes. Based on the 98 chapters before it is put on the shelf, I will briefly introduce the plot content of this book. The story of a poor loser named Fang Yue who picked up a piece of parchment on the way to buy things and became a big boss 😃. Ahem, the above informal introduction is over, here is the serious introduction. If you picked up a piece of parchment on the road and wrote how you will die soon, what would you do? ? A. Believe it, B. Throw it away. So will words appear out of thin air on this piece of parchment? Ordinary people should be skeptical to see what happens next. When Fang Yue discovered that everything written on the parchment really happened, he had to believe in the fact that the parchment would predict it, and then he followed the parchment's arrangement and bought a special game watch. After entering the game, this special watch indeed gave him special skills that others did not have, so he became the strongest player in that game (the strongest among the players) step by step, and he also made some money to change his life. Something unexpected happened. Just when Fang Yue thought his life would slowly get better, a sudden accident revealed the other side of the parchment in front of his eyes. The author will release more updates after it is released on September 11th. Now I don't have to wait for updates every day. I hope book friends will subscribe and reward more, and keep despair in a dark room while typing.

How to say it? It's a good book, with clear logic, but it's a bit watery, but it's very experienced (it just feels like water without any sense of disobedience). Comment on the character of the protagonist. Personally, I think the protagonist is a villain, which is very appropriate. However, the villain is not very upright and upright, but there are not many righteous characters. Compared with this villain's character design. I understand. For me, this style is a bit uncomfortable and it is constantly stacked. It feels as uncomfortable as stacking negative buffs on you like crazy. But it's really pretty, as long as you accept it well.

It feels like it's a pity that some of the supporting characters that I spent a lot of time writing about in the early stages (not counting the early stages of the book, I should say the protagonist's beginning period, but it's hundreds of chapters in) are gone like the Blood Hunter and Doctor An. The characters feel much fuller than the current caravan heroine. For example, I can't even remember the heroine's name, just Yang and that. Dou Qingyi gives me a stronger feeling than Yang Dangjia. Or maybe it's because you don't like it when you appear now and you're just thinking about how you can date the male protagonist so close and first? Not interesting. Overall, it's pretty good. It's common for games to incorporate real-life backgrounds, but the setting is very innovative. I like it very much. I hope there will be some foreshadowing by the author later on, other than An Donger and the little brother squatting in prison. (Make a wish in a low voice not to have a harem, a harem is really meaningless)

I'm just here to cheat the starting point coins! (Confidently)

I have never enjoyed reading this book so much. It is written by a master among masters. It took me a day to read the first 300 chapters. The more I read, the more I read it, and it felt more and more like going to Maofang for a big meal. I also went to a website and spent three hours to read the remaining chapters. It is not a big problem. The character levels are clearly explained, the plot is fluent, and the dialogue is as good as a middle school student writing a narrative. There are 1,000 chapters in total, and the Novice Village only accounts for 400 chapters of the plot. I haven't read enough. Remember to write more in the next book. Then take a quick look at the content after chapter 700, which is still about the characters in Novice Village. The plot mystery is still Wu Curse. From the early stage to the end, this point does not forget the original intention and is worthy of praise. The summary is just three maps, village, county, and country. It is short and touching, just like the author's Prisoner II. Not only is the writing good, but the concept is also very similar to the novels of other authors. The strange world of cultivating immortals in the dragon and snake branches, the mysterious resurrection of parchment, but it looks like a dark blue rolling capital, the treacherous film of the ultimate demon, and the ending is about the breakthrough to Qi training. It's good, not bad. Only during the Qi training period can it be said to be cultivating immortals. The writing is really beautiful, but the author remembered to list references, and don't forget to use APA format to put all these works, so that they won't gossip. In short, it is a very good Akaishi novel, suitable for readers who have never experienced Akaashi. It is highly recommended and has six stars.

Can't you write more? Recover, Ten Geng Beast

As long as the protagonist is not mentally retarded and half as smart as Brother Yang, I won't feel so uncomfortable watching it 😐

To be honest, I was pleasantly surprised when I first read this book. With the unconventional opening and background setting, the author's slightly weaker writing style and some slightly poisonous plots are acceptable. Until more than a hundred chapters, around the time of the farewell, the rhythm of the entire book begins to decline rapidly. First, let's sort out the initial setting of the book: It's probably horror resurgence + real game + light city + light comedy These settings match well. I think a better way to write this book is: "Highlight the horror and the atmosphere of light despair, and then use daily light comedy interactions to dilute this atmosphere, and then use the realistic plot as a relaxation." This feeling can be brought out by the player's calmness and humor, and the NPC's fear and despair, until the game and reality merge. But what I saw in this book, both the players and the NPCs, were all funny and indifferent to life and death, which completely eliminated the faint sense of fear that this book should have had. And I feel that the author's writing power is obviously lacking, and he is not sure about the shades of pen and ink. He seems to treat all characters equally except the protagonist, and he is not sure about the details or sketches. For example, the role of Ma Xiaoling is very abrupt, and it feels like it was forcibly fabricated to advance the plot. I feel that when writing this character, we should at least tell the story between her and Ah Kuan from Ma Xiaoling's perspective, otherwise it always feels like we are forcibly establishing a conflict. And the protagonist, I feel like he is just an ordinary person with no luck, and there is always a feeling that he is not worthy of the power he has. Also, the pace is too slow, almost two hundred and fifty chapters, and only a few days have passed. And if you are a master, you really shouldn't write about auctions, it's too cliche and watery. However, there are two points in this book that I think are well written. One is a variety of weirdness. The other is that anyone can die, everyone is treated equally, life is random, and death is random. Especially Fire Captain. It's just that this was supposed to be used to create an atmosphere of terror. To be honest, at the end of this book, I really smelled the flavor of raising Gu and cultivating immortals. Even after arriving in Mo Village, everything was familiar routines. Isn't this the market in cultivation novels? If you change your skin, others won't be able to recognize you? Especially when it comes to picking up leaks, it is extremely poisonous. This book is called Weird Style Cultivation Game, not a Cultivation Game. If it turns out to be a pure cultivation routine, then so be it.

After fully pre-ordering, I saw more than 600 chapters and found that I had already written a crash. I killed a rain level in the early stage. Can you tell me this is your experience? You don't want to upgrade to Xiantian Lama, but can you give me the entire Xiantian 3 and 2? How many steps are there in between? ? ? In the middle and late stages, you killed a person whose health was close to violent and rose from Innate 3 to Innate 1? ? ? We don't read books without thinking. Can you please go through the outline and overall ideas? Right now I'm confused and skipping a beat. What is the purpose of the protagonist? It is said at the beginning that it is to protect the people he wants to protect, but it is basically dead in the end. Protecting real life? Bai Xiaoya died, and there was only Sister Yuan. My parents didn't read it themselves, so they might have died. In the game village, I'm going to be a good guy, Quan Liang, will you take revenge later? The whole village is dead and the pace is so slow. Everyone is dead. What you need after cutting the knife is to feel refreshed. If you don't feel refreshed, it will only bring anger to the readers. The tragedy of the protagonist is not very well written. He has died so many times, does not kill monsters, joins the forces, and wanders around. The author may have his own considerations, but the feelings and experiences of the readers must be taken into consideration. We can't spend money to seek abuse. The overall rhythm was good at the beginning, but it took a big dive in the later stage. After seeing Quan Ding, I can't watch it now, and I'm totally spending money to find fault. Don't update more or less every day, clarify your ideas, and when the writing quality is up, everything will be up. The early stage and the late stage are completely written in two ways, and it feels like another person.

After reading the whole book, it is unfinished. Later book lovers can move on to other books.

To put it bluntly, you have no social common sense at all. What you write is divorced from reality and life, and you think it is humorous. The setting is good, but the details are really hard to watch.

After reading the 800th chapter, I felt something was wrong. Good guy, it's a bad ending. I can tolerate the crazy watering in the middle and later stages, but I can't stand the bad ending. I'll just read your book again🐶

The protagonist inexplicably has a bunch of weaknesses 🤔 Tai, Wuwu, Bai Xiaoya (Bai Daya), Sister Yuan... I really don't understand how the emotions between the protagonist and them came about, it's really inexplicable. They are not like Lin Ling who has experienced the battle of life and death with the protagonist, nor are they like Han Bai who have given the protagonist substantial help (can be regarded as the protagonist's mentor). There are also mountain captains and hairsprings. This kind of powerful female character is actually a masochist? 🙄 After losing the fight, I developed a lot of affection for the protagonist, and then quickly fell in love with the protagonist... OMG! ! ! Then there is the quality of the players. Players in a game can be divided into: European Emperor, Technical Emperor, Kryptonian Guy, and ordinary players. It's not fully shown in the book! The protagonist covers the first three, and the others are all ordinary players 🙄

The reviews are so bad that a bunch of supporting characters die every time, and even the main character gets a lunch box, and the one I originally thought was the heroine is directly transformed into the villain boss. The writing is so disgusting and disgusting, and I think that so many people die is entirely the trouble caused by the protagonist. If there is no protagonist, there won't be so many things, and those NPCs still treat the protagonist as a benefactor? ? There is no IQ at all, and what I thought was foreshadowing was not reflected at all. It is a complete mess, and people die in every chapter. The author's name is really right. If you can't write a novel well, don't disgust the readers.

The name of this book should be changed to "The Mentally Disabled Protagonist and His Million-Gourd Man". If you don't have the brains to be reckless, you will call me mother when you can't decide.

I'm really speechless. It's refreshing and poisonous. It's like drinking iced tea and getting cockroaches out of it. I'm drunk. If the female character can't write, don't write it. What kind of crap is it written? Don't write emotional dramas in the future. Seriously, it's really crappy.

There are endless hostages to save, and villains that cannot be killed. Can you quickly cut it off for a while so that we readers can take a breath? ? As soon as the war over there ended, something happened here immediately. If you keep writing like this, all the people who write about it will run away 😡😡😡

The author's ability to write plots is a piece of shit The protagonist is completely mentally retarded

This protagonist should have a mental retard label

At first, Fang Yue just wanted to escape from You Sisi's love and didn't want to respond. However, he also had some affection for this heroic girl. However, under the pressure of the Phoenix Organization and the strange attack, there was no time to fall in love... Until Sisi was killed and Master Han was pinched by Bai Xiaoya and his head exploded. His heartache, regret and rage made him ignore the consequences of the explosion and killed Xiri's friend Bai Xiaoya with all his strength. After a great battle, Master Han died, and so did Yousisi. Memories of Master Han and Yousisi flashed through his mind. Master Han took care of him, passed on and protected him. Yousisi's thoughts, sincere feelings for herself, and her drive to go all out for herself. "That fool..." Yousisi didn't have to intercept Bai Xiaoya. She was only in the Houtian realm, and it was completely meaningless to intercept the rain level. But she still took action, just to buy a little breathing time for Fang Yue, to prevent Bai Xiaoya from chasing Fang Yue who fell to the ground at that time... He didn't have time to take a last look and was targeted by the transcendent black and green monsters, and escaped with the strange group from Qingsi County, Heiqing Mountains. In the Heartland, I went to Chunuan City alone, killing countless weirdos along the way. The handkerchief wrapped around my arm was stained with strange blood, and it had turned black and smelly and could not be washed away. However, Fang Yue did not dislike it at all, and was not afraid of strange looks from outsiders, just because this silk scarf and handkerchief was made for him by Sisi herself. Nowhere to speak of desolation. Later, when she met Miss Yang Hongxia of the Dayang Chamber of Commerce, Fang Yue's feelings changed from gratitude to admiration, and she was considerate and considerate, but she gave her free gifts. Fang Yue didn't feel anything about it at all. She raised her hand and looked at the black handkerchief, and her heart was full of the figure of another girl, Silk~Waiting for me! Although it is not directly said that Fang Yue likes Yousisi, and the two did not make any agreement, there are many places in the article where Fangyue's feelings for Yousisi are revealed. After the separation of life and death, it feels like they are separated from each other. When they meet again, in front of the civil and military officials of the court and the emperor, they rush to hug each other regardless of the occasion. It just happens naturally. Come on, since Sisi is a potential heroine, let's give her more roles and speed up her growth. Don't worry about the whole process (￣ ▽￣)

I barely finished it. It's a rubbish novel and doesn't deserve to be on my bookshelf💩

The three things that the author hates the most: 1. The magic detection talisman, which affects the thriller and reversal of the plot arranged by the author. Except for the beginning, it has not been used in hundreds of chapters, and it has never been used on the protagonist; The plot affects the arrangement of supporting characters to die and the villain's escape; therefore, at the beginning, he needs to eat resources to use them so that he can rarely use his abilities. Later, he uses "the opponent's abilities are too strong" to limit his ability to predict. Later, the protagonist's resources explode, leaving the parchment to sleep for a long time; when he wakes up occasionally, the protagonist does not ask, anyway, he does not use it. 3. The Protagonist's Eye of Appraisal: This thing affects the author's pitfalls, a lot of plot twists, and thrilling plots, and it is completely staged. In the early stage, he often explains that the opponent's rank is too high and cannot be seen (because there are indeed many ranks in the early stage that are much higher than the protagonist). However, in the early stage, sometimes I want him to play a role, and I can still identify if I am one or two ranks behind. In the middle and late stages, it was 700 chapters in a row without being used once. After all, the enemies, strange things, and items faced by the protagonist are rarely much more powerful than the protagonist. If they are all identified, will there be any need to write plot twists, foreshadowing of self-righteousness, etc.?

The author's ability to write plots is a piece of shit.