The Conceptual Wizard

The main character's personality is unlikable. He loses his composure when a woman gets close, which is rare in wizarding literature.

Authors should absolutely avoid writing about women. Wizards are primarily about calm and rationality. If they really can't stand it, they can just spend some money to go to a prostitute. There's no need to get emotional involved. Unfortunately, very few authors write this kind of novel well and can capture that wizarding feeling.

The premise is interesting, and this wizarding world is quite captivating. I thought it would be a gem, but I was completely charmed by the protagonist's personality. It's not surprising that he's unable to resist women. The problem is that the later addition of the Crimson Trial is really off-putting. Chapter Thirteen is incredibly toxic.

The protagonist's personality seems a bit too easygoing. In Chapter 13, you said he was good enough, then gave up and left a comment, which was a bit frustrating. And is that Su the female lead? The protagonist acts like he's never seen a woman before; she actively approaches him to uncover his secrets, and he's even attracted to her.

I feel like the protagonist is completely unsuitable to be a wizard; he'd be much better suited to be a warrior! All he does is research and analyze on his own, skipping regular classes and not even knowing basic common sense after a year! This is ridiculous! What kind of intelligence is that? An apprentice, an apprentice, and after a year at wizarding academy he doesn't even know basic combat skills! Speechless (++)~ Completely dizzy

Did the protagonist face any danger at the beginning? He kept exchanging his strength for skills... And he gets so flustered whenever he sees a woman—has he never had any contact with women in real life? That's such a loser!

The protagonist is too saintly, too generous, and has no sense of propriety whatsoever.

Let me share my thoughts after reading! I couldn't take it anymore after chapter eight. If you can't write a female character well, don't write one; it's so cringeworthy it's unbearable. Using fantasy terminology in a Western fantasy setting just feels out of place.

The villain is too stupid; he makes enemies without knowing their identities.

I've finished reading it, but since it's a wizarding story, why can't a first-tier wizard even beat a first-tier knight, or even several of them? Is this supposed to be a wizard? Even regular mages wouldn't be like this, right? What's the point of a wizard like this? They were so powerful at the beginning, but they're so pathetic later on.