The Conceptual Wizard

The protagonist has an unlikable personality. A woman can't calm down when she's close, which is rare in wizard literature.

The author must not write about women. Wizards are mainly calm and rational. If you really can't bear it, you can just spend some money to go to a prostitute. There is no need to have any emotions. It's a pity that few authors are good at writing this kind of novels and can't write that kind of wizard feeling.

The setting is interesting, and this kind of wizarding world is also very attractive. I thought it was a fairy tale, but I was poisoned by the protagonist's character. It's okay if you can't walk when you see a woman. But the problem is that having a bloody trial later is really a boring plot. Chapter 13 is really extremely poisonous. The previous article said that cooperation is required to kill the boss, but the protagonist inexplicably performed on his own. Hard resistance to damage weakens the boss, and then forget about it while everyone else is watching the show. As a result, he urged others to go up and pick up the remaining blood, and in the end, as a thank you, he gave 4 of the 7 drops he received as a reward to the person who saved him. In fact, he was just a picker of the remaining blood. After that, he said that it would not be leaked, but out of nowhere he asked for a reward and gave out another drop. Come on, I have to go up and fight for life and death myself, get 7 drops and give out 5 drops. In such a dark world, a protagonist who is so generous and doesn't care about items to improve his strength. We were supposed to cooperate, but he made me feel like I owed someone else. What the hell can you show off if you don't have the ability? If you cripple it, let it be harvested, and all the rewards will be distributed. What you exchanged for your life is so worthless. Not to mention anything else, in reality, for example, participating in school cooperation activities, I have worked hard for a long time, and then the people who should cooperate have been indifferent. After urging, I went to do some finishing work, and then got a lot of rewards. The result was just the ending. The protagonist divided the reward of 70,000 yuan into 40,000 yuan. Then someone heard that the protagonist was stupid and generous, and came to ask again, and divided out another 10,000 yuan. I think the protagonist is not a rich second generation. He is so poor that he relies on himself for resources. Moreover, these people are not classmates or classmates, they can be said to be complete strangers. I wonder if there are such people in reality? ? ? Besides, the reality is far less dark. If there is no difference, the powerful can kill the weak at will. As a result, in a dark world where strength is paramount, this kind of thing is done. Is this something a normal person can do? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The protagonist's character is a bit happy-go-lucky. In the thirteenth chapter you wrote, you said he was enough, and then you couldn't help but give him a drop of trouble. I was a little speechless. And that Su is not the heroine. Why is the protagonist like he has never seen a woman? You are still moved by people approaching you to explore your secrets.

I feel that the protagonist is not suitable to be a wizard at all, and it would be better to be a warrior! I only do my own research and analysis all day long, and I don't even attend normal classes. After a year, I don't understand any common sense! What a pit! What kind of IQ is this? Apprentice, apprentice, you have been at the wizard academy for one year and you don't even know the common sense about combat power! I'm speechless (++)~dazzled

Is there any danger for the protagonist in the beginning? He keeps exchanging strength for skills, and he doesn't calm down when he sees a woman. Is it because he has never had any contact with women in reality? He's too stupid, right?

The protagonist is too virginal, too generous, without any sense of proportion.

Let's talk about your thoughts after reading it! After reading Chapter 8, I couldn't bear it anymore. If the writing girl can't write, then don't write. It will make your feet touch the floor with embarrassment. Fantasy terms used in Western fantasy are very inconsistent. If you go to wizard college and don't study, you just mess around on your own, and then go to participate in a weapon fight after finishing it, you really don't have any intelligence at all! It's not cool to be brainless. The only thing that makes me feel good is the creativity. The new idea of ​​the concept wizard may be able to create a follow-up to the wizard stream. Unfortunately, the author does not have enough imagination to fully express it. I hope someone will follow me and write a good book!

The villain is too mentally retarded and takes the initiative to make enemies without knowing the identities of others.

I've finished reading it, but since it's a wizard novel, why can't a first-level wizard defeat even a first-level knight, or even several of them? Are you a wizard? Normally mages wouldn't be like this, right? What's the point of such a wizard? It sounds so awesome in the front, but it's actually so sloppy in the back. Pig's Knuckle is at the second level. I heard that several official wizards couldn't beat the first-level knights, and they were a little afraid of the first-level knights. This... I don't know what to say.