My Giant World

I just read Chapter 28, and I want to complain. The protagonist should at least be promoted to the strongest level besides gods. How long does it take for him to start asking for women? It's too urgent. And choose such a spoiled and unfaithful woman as the heroine? If the protagonist is an experienced driver, that's fine. The protagonist is a young driver. Does he know how to train him? Those protagonists who are betrayed by women and reborn at the beginning are not the same type, right? Eunuchs are not good, but impatientness is not good either.

Now I really regret reading this novel. Your level has been rising by leaps and bounds. It was easy for you to reach ten paragraphs in one month, and then fifty paragraphs in two days. Then you became a superman in the real world and your relatives were threatened by a little garbage country? Do you have any obstacles to Shuangwen?

I haven't read it yet, but in this kind of novel, it's best to have your own way in the real world.

The idea is good, but the main character is too low-level

The protagonist is too arrogant, and he doesn't act cautiously when he first enters another world. Refugees have said that they will be attacked if they enter the forest, and they even bring refugees in with them.

What the hell, mukbang? What nt Sima behavior? One person can do it alone, and it is enough to develop slowly in the early stage. A person can be an enemy of a country, which can give the world a little shock, but it has become like this when it just started.

A cool piece of writing for a novice! Too white! There is no use of brains at all, the whole text is violence, woman. It's like the very old style of writing in the past, similar to the kind where if you touch me, your whole clan will be destroyed~(˵¯͒¯͒˵)~The evolved version of the ancestors~

Is the author's IQ so low? Two artifacts, the clay is for one-time use, why must it be used now? You already have the method of cultivation, and there is another world. In this case, using that clay is just a waste of time. You haven't been to another world yet, why don't you stay there? How do you know that other worlds don't have better materials than you have now? What is the use of diamond's hardness? How many degrees can it withstand? It can melt at more than 3,000 degrees, which means that if the country discovers this, it can easily deal with the protagonist. The country must be ruthless. After discovering the protagonist, it must use small tactical nuclear bombs around the protagonist step by step. Without anything else, it can burn the protagonist to death with the high temperature of the nuclear bomb. These are the shortcomings of diamond. Sure enough, the author's IQ is the upper limit of the characters' IQ in the novel world.

It's been a long time since I've seen one person against the whole world. I hope the author can keep writing and kick Japan and punch the United States.

In terms of shaping the protagonist, it is very real and successful, but the author's description of the protagonist's opponents is too one-sided. . . Looking at the choices made in human history when faced with force majeure, although the mainstream values ​​​​of human society praise courage and resistance, the reality is. People can be tamed if they can compromise, join, and submit. Not to mention the weaklings, trailblazers and speculators in human society.

It's great. The thoughts are very deep. I feel that this is the thinking of normal people. When I watched Superman and Saiyan Kakarot in the past, I felt that they were mentally retarded. They are so powerful but they are so poor? It's like a tamed elephant. It's amazing. This kind of spiritual practice system is really special, innovative and amazing.

The protagonist's mentality needs to change. A mentality must be worthy of strength to be called a strong person

Some better author could copy this idea, and then the writing style would be a little better and the writing would be very good. This is an opportunity to make a lot of money

The writing is quite good. The only bad thing is the protagonist's brain. I always feel like a fool when I look at it.

The idea is quite good, but the writing is becoming more and more YY and nonsensical, and it is becoming more and more illogical.

The data is corrupted and I doubt ai How come the data has changed so many times in just a few pieces? It is still a common sense mistake. If you say it was written by someone, I really don't believe it.

What do you say? A smell from more than ten years ago

Oh haha. This book is finished. I saw that I was already jumping up and down. I wrote it too quickly.

After the protagonist gets the extraordinary golden finger, he kills people and sets fire in the real world. . . After the protagonist gets the extraordinary plug-in, his tool man kills people and sets fire in the real world. . . My Titan World I, the only superpower on earth The above two books were 405ed one day like my god clone and the world modification system. They are not Chino at all.

You want to post it as a moderator, but the starting point can only be half-baked

It feels a bit unfinished later on, and my character cannot keep up with my strength.

It's really good. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of unblocked novel.

What kind of thing is written? The author is just a joke, not suitable for old bookworms.

Was the author arrested and locked up in a dark room? Never updated

I still quite like reading this novel. Anyway, in the later stages of each novel, the combat power will skyrocket. It is better to skyrocket in advance. Then, isn't it about the ability to write stories?