Pokemon: All My Disciples Are Champions

You don't even need to read the main text; just reading the synopsis tells you this novel is doomed to fail.

The synopsis only mentions female disciples, which makes me not want to read it. It gives the impression of a harem-building story. I just want to see a simple and exciting adventure between elves and humans.

Welcome back to elf stories, and hopefully it will still be dark fiction.

This book is probably doomed. My personal suggestion is to cut it off or start over somewhere else.

Has the author gone a bit off-topic? I haven't seen much of the apprenticeship plot or foreshadowing. I haven't read the last few chapters; I haven't had much time and only read up to the Mini Dragon part. 🌚

Hey there, you're back again! Hang in there! I'll save next month's vote for you. I was planning to vote for you this month, but you said you were abandoning the story. You need to write more elf stories; there are too many people supporting your book, and I'm one of them.

🙂I'm going to die without Dark Wind watching me.

I just want to know, if I were to write it based on those elf novels like Rise of the Dark, wouldn't it be better?

It looks great, keep it up!

Do you teach magic?