A Pokemon Survival Guide for the Apocalypse

Judging from the direction, it should follow the style of the apocalyptic survival system. I hope it can be controlled well. After all, the original work is the world view of Zi Gongxiang. If too many substitutions are made, the style of the painting will easily shift, resulting in neither the apocalypse nor Pokémon. This is really boring.

First, the matter of command must be resolved. The main reason is that during the battle, the male protagonist can quickly think of weaknesses and speak them out so that Charmander can react. It's a bit too fake, be a little bit more frivolous. I think you should find a reason similar to spiritual link, similar to team voice. Because of your description, Charmander can understand what you are saying, and then other Pokémon can also understand. This is very awkward. The second point I think is that if Pokémon travels through time, you can also design more. For example, the items in the Pokémon world will also travel through time. In your novel, since the male protagonist does not have a golden finger, he can have adventures, such as picking up a few Pokémon balls and other devices. Because the cool thing about this is that the male protagonist understands the Pokémon world, and the others don't know at all. You can cheat reasonably. You can choose which items to travel with according to the plot. Point 3: A small design that can create a cool point At the end of each chapter, add "Article Article 13: If the Pokémon refuses to enter the Poké Ball, first check to see if there is a nest nearby. Similar to daily intelligence, it can not only increase the world view, but also stimulate readers' imagination. It can increase memory points and is also suitable for readers to spread. My personal suggestion is to focus on the worldview designed by you, the author. Also, you must promote it more. Your writing style is at least at an ordinary level. Then you can definitely attract readers who like this world view, so you need to promote this novel more.

Starting today, everyone can put forward 6,000 words a day if they have any ideas. I will add more updates, but I beg you not to keep the book. I don't know if the name is not good, and it is not ideal to store it in the library. More chapters have been added so that everyone can have a better viewing experience. If you are a book reader, this book will not even make it to the first round of recommendations! Please everyone!

Competition is fierce

It's not bad. It's 80,000 words long. I mainly like to watch Doomsday. Pokémon and the like are just accessories.

The writing style is a bit immature, and I can't stand it after reading a few chapters, but I still want to support it with a monthly ticket + recommendation vote I hope the author can avoid the poisonous points in the Pokémon Arrivals book. I feel that if he can avoid the poisonous points, it can be regarded as a small masterpiece. The first few chapters are not good at all, let's see if I can stick to it in the follow-up.

I hope you won't follow in the footsteps of this book

Not bad, at least it looks okay in the early stage, but we have to see if it will collapse later when it comes to evolution.

When will pets be able to code on the computer desk?

Damn, did you submit the submission from within? The editor who submitted the submission also wants to write a Pokémon fanfic.