Goddess Labor Dispatch Company

The reading experience is very bad 1. This is the first time I have seen a novel where the male protagonist looks like a passerby. Even if it is a group portrait of "Let That Witch Go", the starting point of view is from the male protagonist's side. Your first part is also called "The Immortal" , can the dean be silent? The protagonist's vision is introduced at the beginning. However, the subsequent events do not even have the male protagonist's position. How can the reader empathize with it? 2. "Goddess Labor Dispatch Company"? After reading the title and introduction, most of the people attracted to watch the interaction between the protagonist and various weird goddesses, so where is the role of the male protagonist? 3. The writing feels like a newcomer, but you will make some mistakes that no newcomer will make; you can actually use 25 from the first part I'm going to write an introduction to Chapter 26. This is a whole two chapters. Not a single main character appears. Am I crazy or are you crazy? I suggest you check it with friends and family before publishing. It makes me happy 4. Next time I cut the book, I suggest you pin it to the top. Don't waste everyone's time. You lack the most basic respect for readers. Don't submit if you are just enjoying yourself.

After seeing the latest chapter, I feel that this author will definitely write more explosive things in the future. His writing skills are not enough, and he cannot control the worldview he added randomly. The protagonist of this book has written more than 80 chapters and still hasn't come to life. Why does the new chapter suddenly change the perspective and not talk about the protagonist and the brave rewriting the territorial case? It is because the previous script about the protagonist is so bad that the author can only stop the protagonist's story line and start changing the perspective while trying to think of solutions to the problem. As for the protagonist and the title of the book, the author typically writes wherever he thinks. This kind of inspired writing is most afraid of breaking the rhythm, and he has to hold back one chapter every three days to update. Writing more than 100,000 words, the protagonist has not given readers as clear a impression as the supporting characters, but the personalities and settings of the supporting characters are also jumping left and right. Let's not talk about the logical inconsistencies in the characters and behaviors of the supporting characters and the protagonist. Let's talk about the author's most terrible plot logic. The protagonist in the author's mind can be the invincible universe or the author himself or other ultimate beings, so when the plot needs to advance, the protagonist must be made invisible. At the beginning, the evil god and the vampire save the civilians. The evil god and the vampire have a fight with the female partner. The protagonist comes out to show off and it ends. In the second chapter, the heroine and the evil god decrypted the secrets and played riddles took up a lot of space. In the end, the male protagonist's belief in whether tens of thousands or hundreds of millions of mechanical deities were cast changed the past (I have to say that once this hangs up, the originally hazy combat power system was directly shattered). The third chapter picks up where the second chapter left off. The author has already written down the combat power system, and just lets himself go. The sword master appears, and he is the childhood sweetheart of the heroine in the third chapter who is invincible in the world. Then in the third chapter, the heroine was chatting with the hero about food, and then as soon as the hero walked away, she immediately transformed into a five-ringed god and fought with the evil god. The invincible male protagonist must disappear at a critical moment, right? Later, if the author finds it difficult to write, he can only change the perspective and write the legal chapter of the fourth chapter. Have you ever found that your protagonist is trapped in the third chapter and has not come out, causing the fourth chapter protagonist to be absent again. Do you have to have the male protagonist appear at the end and use the memory perspective to end the rotten third chapter? The male protagonist in your novel is so invincible in your mind that any ups and downs in the plot must make the male protagonist disappear. Even if you strongly deny that the male protagonist has low combat power, he is omniscient and omnipotent in your mind. As a result, as the plot progresses, the male protagonist will forcibly disappear and then a mechanical deity will appear at the end to settle everything. Everything in this book is possible, and there is no way to save it. The author's writing power cannot support his explanation. The book has more than eighty chapters, and the male protagonist basically does not participate in the plot. The belief system at the beginning of the article and the setting that requires a goddess to change the world have not appeared at all. (It means that the system not only undertakes the deus ex machina in the plot but also acts as an online shopping skill, and does not provide any support for the plot and main line) There are also big problems with the setting of the previous world view. On the one hand, the world says that capital has defeated the divine power, the gods are no longer worshiped by people, and the mystery is fading. On the one hand, local churches have taken over the power of the government, claiming that companies defeat everything, but in the end they have introduced ten gods and nine heroes. The essence of human beings still believes in power. The mysterious power in the book is so strong that it cannot fade away at all. The protagonist and supporting characters fight with mystery over technology. Do you dare to imagine that the mechanical exoskeleton is powered by mysteriously written beliefs 😅😅 Please read and cherish this book. The author has no ability to save this book.

The author's writing style exceeds 99% of the starting points, but the plot personally feels a bit stretched. The author seems to like to write settings that the protagonist knows well but the readers do not. Some settings are hidden too tightly. Therefore, some plot writers think it is reasonable, but readers are confused. This is a "Red? Cyber-Western fantasy two-dimensional adult fairy tale". It is a bit like the goddess of revolution. In short, it is family fun, great perfection, and no regrets. 😊

The characters are good, but I haven't read much about the plot, so I don't dare to draw conclusions. However, when I read it, I felt a bit empty. There were some pointless moans and pretentiousness, and some settings were not explained clearly. It was okay for once. I felt a bit empty after reading several chapters in a row and talking about some big principles.

It's a very interesting story, but the first plot at the beginning was made offline for the main character. Where is the starting point for further training? It's too cyberpunk.

It's over, sent. Reality is indeed the greatest suffering.

Just look at the author's avatar and you'll know what the ingredients are.

Although the transition between the first book and the second book is less and very rushed, but that's it! After finishing the second book, I feel happy every day!

A businessman running a shop in Granada! Adventurers who come to Granada! Monks and nuns working in the church! As long as you simply fill in your name, personality, and appearance, you will have a chance to get an appearance and related side plots!

I saw it from the daily introduction and thought the introduction was interesting, so I added it to the bookshelf. Looking at the one that was released on 1.28 In 2023, oh, it must be fat enough to be slaughtered. Cut out and see, 190,000 words. ? You only started writing co-authorship on 1.28. Looking at the date again, it was updated two days ago, thump thump! Take a closer look, it will be updated every two to three days. Goodbye to you.

Oh my god, it's so beautiful.

Old sensei, Alu's prototype, right?

Invested.

Chapter 78 and beyond are completely unconnected

It is recommended that the author go to Tieba or somewhere to promote it.

Hahaha, the author is a Gundam fan

Current reading progress: Chapter 16. Personally, I think this book is very interesting. The author's ideas about the different world are quite complete. The world he constructed is slowly unfolding. I like the new world I have seen so far in the current chapter, but there are also some things I am not satisfied with. Unlike other old bookworms, I am not able to provide help with writing methods and chapter arrangement, but I am willing to give some suggestions on the use of punctuation to the best of my ability.

The pace can be slower and more fulfilling

I started writing it on March 10th, and it already has 90 chapters and 190,000 words. I don't know why you started writing this on January 28th like this?