Moon Son

Sorry, I took the title of the book to mean confinement

I hope the author will not use a sword again in this novel. I'm really surprised. How many people in ancient Chinese mythology used swords? Flying with a sword? Low exploded. With so many Taoist and magical powers, why do you write that 90% of Xianxia fights with swords? Too low.

Only then did I realize that the author is Mysterious Xuan 😂 I asked why I haven't published a new book for so long. It turns out he came here.

Mysterious Pavilion? If you want to write about immortals, just write about immortals. I feel like you are not very suitable for writing about harems.

This book is a mixed bag of good and bad. Let me start with the good points. The author's writing about the sage in front of others is good. The setting of the hunting fairy lord is also quite interesting. The plot rules are also clear and do not abuse the lord. But the shortcomings are also obvious. It is too bland and dry. Just a long paragraph of explanation can fill several chapters. I feel dizzy while watching it. There are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist, which makes it a headache. Also, the setting is very good, but the use is not good. Let's take the hunting tour of the fairy palace as an example. The protagonist really just looks at it, and it is a waste of good food. In addition, the author's plot is too small. He replaces the female emperor with a male, does not clean up his innocence, and drives out the male protagonist's family. The male protagonist goes down the mountain to cut off the dragon vein of the dynasty, slaughter all the royal family, and uses his destiny as the Moon Emperor to fight against the destiny of the royal family's real dragon. Isn't it much better than the ending that the author wrote about the happy ending of sons and daughters who love each other and grow up together?

After reading two hundred chapters, I want to say one thing. The protagonist's aura is too dazzling now, so I can only write higher and higher and never come back. After another hundred to two hundred chapters, it will be unfinished. The author was a bit hasty in writing

Brother, I have been reading online articles for a long time. What I want to say is that what you write is definitely not bad. Maybe this one, maybe the next one, will be a hit one day. Don't just be a eunuch or write randomly. This difficult period should be regarded as the grindstone for success.

It looks pretty good and not too bad, but there are very few comments both inside and outside the book. Will the author stop updating it?

It doesn't start out very amazing, but it looks very comfortable, so I'm fully booked.

It's really good. Why don't you find someone to py it? It's really a pity that no one will see it.