My House Is Gone in One Piece Beginning

The writing is good. I like to read naval articles. After all, the navy may have garbage, but pirates basically deserve to die.

Why don't you read it if it's not time travel? I've always thought that those time travel stories that accept reality as soon as time travel are outrageous, and most of the predecessors are Diao Si, who grew up under the red flag and have never seen blood a few times. It's even more outrageous to be able to make a difference in such a cruel world of pirates. Ninety-nine percent of time travel stories treat readers as fools, and the aborigines are more reasonable.

Nothing can be seen from this introduction

After reading some, the biggest problems with this book are 1. There is no fighting scene, 2. The main character has a tool, and he doesn't have any ideas of his own. They all left with confused faces. If the front is still young, then the 15-year-olds in the back should have their own ideas.

The writing is like boiled water, it feels too bland and the plot has no ups and downs.

After reading novels for so many years, this is the first time I have read about pirates and indigenous people. I won't step into this trap...

Personally, I don't really like watching the navy lineup.

Original character, not a time traveler? Is there a market for such fandoms?

I always feel that this heroine is a bit abrupt and completely unlikable. The plot between the heroine and the protagonist is inexplicable.

There are no problems with the navy, but the ones with problems are the academics. The protagonist actually wavers, which is hilarious. So what kind of navy do you want to be? Becoming a pirate is not enough. Pirates, including the protagonist Luffy, are all people similar to the people of the motherland. I mean, I can do whatever I want? This is called freedom, so you better hope you are friends with this guy, otherwise his freedom will hit you on the head and kill you.

The protagonist's strength is improving too slowly, right?

Doesn't the protagonist's fruit ability allow him to eat a lot of fruits? Anyway, if you die, you can be resurrected

Suddenly there is a question, if the male protagonist is thrown into the sea, will he die even if he is thrown into the sea? He will still be in a state of half-death, where he will die as soon as he lives.

The writing is quite good. Keep it up. Don't cut it. Come on.

The author won't force it to be published with 300,000 words☺

The protagonist's name is the same as my classmate Ruian

I gave you the monthly pass

Bring me some characters, brothers, you can be a navy pirate, if it suits you I will take them all! Name + ability, background is optional

Let's get a space-time fruit

I wonder if the protagonist is an Aboriginal?

Ninety chapters have passed and I would like to ask if the protagonist has been promoted to Lieutenant General now.

I saw that the protagonist has returned to the headquarters from the New World G5 Base for five years. He just arrived at G5 five years ago and fought with the New Era Pirates and learned the Overlord Color Coil. In addition to the Armed Color Ryu Sakura that he learned before, the protagonist should now have the Yonko-level combat power.

The content after joining the navy is very sketchy, and the story about the "noble" when he went to pick up his second subordinate was very annoying.